Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 This is my new card. I know, i havent made any cards for a while, so it may lack OCG masterity, so i would like anyone who sees a mistake - please point it out. :)[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If in your Standby Phase, there arent any Monster cards on the Field or this card is in Defense Position, remove this card from Play.If this card is removed from Play, by paying 1500 Life Points you can choose 1 monster card from your removed from Play zone and Special Summon it. Each time this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 200 points. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If in your Standby Phase, there arent any Monster cards on the Field or this card is in Defense Position, remove this card from Play.If this card is removed from Play, by paying 1500 Life Points you can choose 1 monster card from your removed from Play zone and Special Summon it. Each time this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 200 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If in your Standby Phase, there arent any Monster cards on the Field or this card is in Defense Position, remove this card from Play.If this card is removed from Play, by paying 1500 Life Points you can choose 1 monster card from your removed from Play zone and Special Summon it. Each time this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 200 points" Um you cant Special Summon a monster removed from play............its removed from play. Unless theres a new rule that allows you to do that?? I dunno , I'm not up to date with 5d's and the new stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Well, this could be the first card, that can do it. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 lol then u'd be lucky!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 You think? This card is very hard to realise. You have to drop it, then revieve it, or Special Summon it in any other way. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 what do u mean?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 It cannot be Normal Summoned, so you need to Special Summon it. Without any support cards for she, its pretty rough to do it, unless you base the Deck on her. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 9/10 ALMOST perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Lacikus, would be perfect, if you could say- whats missing, give some feedback, when you rate. :) Anyway, thanks for rate. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 You have some minor OCG errors.arent is aren't or arenot from your removed from Play zone,didn't get you.Thanks for points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thaoz Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If in your Standby Phase' date=' there arent any Monster cards on the Field or this card is in Defense Position, remove this card from Play.If this card is removed from Play, by paying 1500 Life Points you can choose 1 monster card from your removed from Play zone and Special Summon it. Each time this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 200 points" Um you cant Special Summon a monster removed from play............its removed from play. Unless theres a new rule that allows you to do that?? I dunno , I'm not up to date with 5d's and the new stuff.[/quote'] It IS possible to Special Summon Removed from Play monsters, even by ante-5d's rulings. Take a look at D.D.M.-Different Dimension Master. By discarding one Spell Card, special summon one of your removed from play monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glow_handed Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 well thats wierd???? summoning a removed monster???? the card is great but this effect is wierd ...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Immortal Chaos Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. During your Standby Phase, if there aren't any Monster cards on the Field or this card is in Defense Position, remove this card from Play. If this card is removed from Play, by paying 1000 Life Points you can choose 1 Of your removed from play monsters and Special Summon it. Each time this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 200 points. Overall nice effect, some errors. But im not a real stickler for the errors lol anyways, good overall effect, ditch it to the grave, Skull Lair it, then special summon it, though paying 1500 life is a bit much [though Return From the Different Dimention makes you pay half your life....], I think 1000 lp is enough. Reasonable ATK increase if it deals damage. Overall I say 9/10, very good job.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyosuke Kalin Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 wow that is good 9/10 dude awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quarter Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 wats a removed form play zone?8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 9.5/10 I don't think theres a removed from play zone.OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. During your Standby Phase, if there aren't any Monster cards on the Field or this card is in Defense Position, remove this card from play.If this card is removed from play, by paying 1500 Life Points you can choose 1 monster card that has been removed from play Special Summon it to your side of the field. Each time this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 200 points.Hope that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Thx for ratings. Well, removed from play zone is place where you place all removed cards.. :DWho cares, that it isnt on the field.. :DNow i see, that i haven't lost the catch. ;)Any 1 on 1 duels? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 OCG : This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If there aren't any monsters on your side of the field during your Standby Phase, remove this card from play. If this card is removed from play, you pay 1500 Life Points to choose 1 monster card from your removed from play zone and Special Summon it. Each time this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 200.Pretty good. Original effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 Well, thats all i want to get with my cards - be original. Thx for rating. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 There's no removed from play zone, so just say removed from play 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 It's Level 4, and all the effort required to summon this card is far from worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bankz Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 this card is pretty good I'll give it a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted June 19, 2009 Report Share Posted June 19, 2009 A bit op'ed, but i give it a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted June 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Thx for ratings. :) all of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted June 20, 2009 Report Share Posted June 20, 2009 Nice card, effect seems good in my opinion: 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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