SushiTheLegend Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 [align=center] Black Feather - Larva The Draco1 "Black Feather" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersEach time a "Black Feather" monster you control is destroyed except by this card's effect, place 1 B-Feather Counter on this card (max 3). Once per turn, you can remove 1 B-Feather Counter to Special Summon 1 "Black Feather" monster from your hand. A monster Summoned in this way cannot declare an attack this turn. By sending 1 "Black Feather" monster you control to the Graveyard, negate the attack of a monster and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. I probably messed this up, but I felt Crow deserved to get the Signer Dragon he'll probably never get in the third season of 5Ds. :P[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
corvette Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 awesome pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 The effect is win, the ATK and DEF is balanced and it's not too bad. This is one of your perfect cards, isn't it. I'd give it a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 There should be a period after max in (max. 3). o.o... >>... You should add "...from this card..." to your removal of counters, so that it makes more sense, but I guess that it doesn't really matter. Change "A monster Summoned in this way..." to "This monster cannot declare an attack this turn." Since you state it right after you Special Summon the monster, the target monster is inclined, therefore, you don't need to state all that stuff. And besides, the effect only lasts one turn, so it's kind of redundant stating that each monster cannot attack during that one turn. As for the card itself, Synchros themselves are generally mad overpowered, so this one just compliments them. I don't use Synchros, nor do I know much about them, except for the fact that they're quite cheap, and easy to Summon to the field. I generally like the card though. It's clean. Attack points seem average. ^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Epic Win. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Forgot the counter bit, the "a monster summoned in this way" would mean making the Synchro not attack. I tried to make a card that would compliment Crow's epicness with a beatstick that could swarm like all Black Feathers but also have a destructive effect like most of the Signer Dragons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Wait, what do you mean? What I read from your effect right now, it's basically saying that all monsters Special Summoned by this Synchro cannot attack the turn it is Summoned. It does not affect the Synchro itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crow™ Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Eh....I don't really like it....~5.349/10~it's too monster-from-Cloverfield-ish for me...Besides, Crow will probably have the fifth dragon (the non-mechanical PTD) anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Well the effect is okay, it's balanced but nothing special. >.> is this a custom pic, if not where did you find it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Hentai Site, then made the background of the image myself. And IMO I think Crow would have a Dragon suited to his deck IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Epic pic. 0.o 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 That's cool, I have a feeling it is Danbooru or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Close but not quite. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 lol, anything with booru in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Any other comments guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dismal Euphony Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Very nice. Seems fairly balanced to me. The pic is a win of epic proportions. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 not too crazy about the pic, but thats just me...ocg seems good...effect is balanced...9/10 for you, sir.oh btw, you should lose "larva" in favor of something that doesn't sound like an insect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 nice card...i love it...the effect is good..no OCG errors...just (max 3)=(max.3)...i live the pic...could you PM me the pic....^^overall: 10/10^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Aiku: *look at Larva Dragon* That's a huge dragon... CAN YOU BE MY PET!? ^W^*Larva Dragon stay silent and step on Aiku!* OCG: As it goes, there's someone who correct it, but in general it's okay. No beginners mistakes or mistapping, soooo.... good!Effect: Cheap effect for Synchro, yes. Something that stick him out of the original, not really.Image and Name: Okay, I'll admit it... THE PIC IS AWESOME!! *cough* But I don't know why you call him Larva? Where's the Larva? If it's the dragon that's a larva, than I must change my pair of glasses. Overall: 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Well Crow will be probably get that other dragon they've been throwing around in the opening and ending animations. There are OCG errors in the card and you've made some misunderstandings. Each time a "Black Feather" monster you control is destroyed except by this card's effect, place 1 B-Feather Counter on this card (max 3). Once per turn, you can remove 1 B-Feather Counter to Special Summon 1 "Black Feather" monster from your hand. A monster Summoned in this way cannot declare an attack this turn. By sending 1 "Black Feather" monster you control to the Graveyard, negate the attack of a monster and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. It's not necessary to to state by this card's effect as the sending of 1 BF monster to the Graveyard is not actually destroying it at all. Even stating Tributing a BF monster would not count as destroying it. A lot of people make this misunderstanding but if a card says send to the graveyard then that's all you are doing. If you are destroying the card then you state so in the card effect. Look at Dark End Dragon and you should understand a bit more. Dark End Dragon's effect says send to the Graveyard so it's not destroying a monster hence why it can bypass Stadust Dragon's effect. The corrected OCG should look like this: Each time a "Black Feather" monster you control is destroyed, place 1 B-Feather Counter on this card (max 3). Once per turn, you can remove 1 B-Feather Counter to Special Summon 1 "Black Feather" monster from your hand. That monster cannot declare an attack this turn. By sending 1 "Black Feather" monster you control to the Graveyard, negate the attack of a monster and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. Also, if it's not too much trouble could you PM the picture of your card (I like the artwork) as well as the image source for your avatar. If the image source is from a danbooru or something just PM me the full image of the avatar if you happen to have it. Thanks in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 Firstly, I called him Larva due to the fact the dragon itself reminds me a lot of Molten Larva that's cooled and turned very hard. Secondly I understand that Killey, so that's a mistake on my part, maybe I meant when a monster goes to the graveyard in the same sense as Sangan's effect trigger. And I really wish people would stop asking me about the card image lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hero2die Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 nice card i love it :P but the pic jajja^^ 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Thanks for the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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