Amazing Contest's Cards Set [127/???] Hell Claw Sniper Barak added!! Enter, rate and enjoy:)

[gustavosuarez]

o_O ohps....sorry for that. i do the reparation. thanks for the suggestion. i repared it now. thanks for post and merry christmas:)

[ragnarok1945]

that's better, now I can raise the rate to 9/10

[gustavosuarez]

thanks ragnarok:)

new card added: Mad Kitchen Fridge!!! enjoy it:)

[ragnarok1945]

for Mad Kitchen Fridge, only the last effect is a little boring

 

you should have given the tokens some other effect when it's to your opponent's side of the field, not just take up their monster slot space

 

9/10

[gustavosuarez]

its because is a little combo with the next cards of that contest (the food contest) thanks for rate:)

[gustavosuarez]

Shatana, Wizard of the Midnight added!! enjoy it:)

[ragnarok1945]

for Shatana, the first sentence should be You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control no monsters

 

since you didn't even say WHERE it could be special summoned from

 

8.6/10

[gustavosuarez]

o_O. sorry, i dont see that. i repared it. thanks:)

[ragnarok1945]

ok that makes it better, now I can raise the rate to 9.2/10

[gustavosuarez]

thanks:) new cards soon:)

[gustavosuarez]

Teal’c, Ancient Arm Guardian of the Order added!!! enjoy it and post your suffestions:)

[ragnarok1945]

the 3 Spell Counter effect you forgot to say WHICH level of a monster you can destroy on the field

 

that's about it missing in the text

 

the OCG is fine, I'll give this 9.1/10

[gustavosuarez]

ok. i repair that error. thanks for the suggestion:)

[gustavosuarez]

Banneret, Volcanic Protector of Ruins added!!! enjoy it:)

[ragnarok1945]

"on the field" in the 1st sentence is not necessary since you said "you control"

 

Banneret's 1000 atk gain for 1 turn at the cost of 3 FIRE Monsters is a bit too steep. I'd lower it to 2 FIRE Monsters, but then drop the gain to 600 or 700 instead

 

9/10

[gustavosuarez]

thanks. i repair the card and post it again. happy new year:)

[ragnarok1945]

all right then. Now I'll raise my rate to 9.5/10

[gustavosuarez]

thanks ragnarok. new card added: Atrox Vetus Evertus!!! This is a special card, becuase is a team card for a contest. the other creators: Max Darkness and resaclan:) enjoy it:)

[ragnarok1945]

the only OCG error I found was "Inflict an amount of damage" should be "Inflict damage"

 

other than that, the card is balanced, so I like it

 

9/10

[gustavosuarez]

thanks for rate ragnarok:)

[gustavosuarez]

Evil Fruits Squadron added!!! enjoy it:)

[gustavosuarez]

Bumpy bumpy bump

please post your commentaries:)

[gustavosuarez]

Cleric of Sadness Wood added!!! enjoy it and post your opinions or only rate please:)

[gustavosuarez]

Innocent Exorcist Allen added!!! enjoy it:)

[gustavosuarez]

Innocent Exorcist Allen added!!! enjoy it:)