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[Icy] Spark of the Ice Barrier + Promise of a Lifetime


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Spark of the Ice Barrier: I do know that OCG is off a smidge. But it is the effect that counts. And I did my best to make this card as flexible and simple as possible; while retaining the Ice Barrier theme.

 

Update; Promise of a Lifetime: Simple and effective support for my favorite Archetype. And a tribute to a song by the same name.[/align]

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Change the "he/she" part with "they". That's the only thing that seems off for me in the OCG.

 

Other than that' date=' the card is good. Good job.

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No I think it should be "he/she" not "they", because they use "his/her" in the actual OCG, so it makes sense.

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Nice idea but need some correcting ^^;

 

You need to explain that is "On your side of the field" there are monster, spell, trap cards that control monsters on you opponent's side so that is.

 

 

If you want to activate one Trap or Spell card you need to say from where and when. because in your card's effect that is from anywhere and anytime.

 

Good card 7/10

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Nice idea but need some correcting ^^;

 

You need to explain that is "On your side of the field" there are monster' date=' spell, trap cards that control monsters on you opponent's side so that is.

 

 

If you want to activate one Trap or Spell card you need to say from where and when. because in your card's effect that is from anywhere and anytime.

 

Good card 7/10

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Haha... The assumption is that it's on your side of the field.

And the next one assumes it's in your hand or on the field.

 

Nice try though.

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