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Great Unclean One: VK

By Great Unclean One: VK
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Again I eat popcorn during times like these.

I have no use for gods or the future.

 

My crazy belongs to me. Also talking to a god isn't crazyness' date=' its calle dbeing "chosen" or whatever.

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Oh, did I mention I also speak with Hitler, he's not such a bad guy after all. Infact, he's my butt buddy.

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This hasn't been edited as much as i hoped it would be since i've been gone. But everything else is epic. But where am i? I sort of disappeared. lol.

 

You got killed by Larxene when she threw a knife at you and severed a atery.

 

[spoiler= Book II]

[spoiler= Act II: Chapter I: The 5th Platoon]

 

In Graphics City' date=' the birthplace of Platoon Leader Sleepy and what remains of her Platoon rest.

"Private Saikano! Hurry and tend to Private Polaris's wounds!" Yelled Sleepy. Saikano silently complied and took a look at Polaris. He was feverish and pale, he had suffered a near fatal wound from a High Troll earlier. Saikano bandaged his arm and checked and told Sleepy his condition.

"Good. Now, try to check up on "Knots"." Ordered Sleepy. She scanned the skies then heard something. It sounded like a helicopter. She turned to it's direction. It was in coming from the setting sun. It moved towards them and hovered over them. It was a medic copter with what appeared to be 2 people and a Gliscor in it.

"Hey! Do you guys need a lift?" Shouted Elites from the cockpit.

"Yeah! Thanks!" Sleepy turned to Saikano, "Saikano, go radio everyone else to get here."

Saikano only nodded and turned on his radio. Within 30 minutes everyone who was alive in the 5th Platoon gotten into the helicopter and then Elites flew off towards TCG City.

 

Elites, Otaku, and Sleepy barely exchanged words during their flight. Elites and Otaku switched between piloting and napping. Then finally Sleepy spoke.

"So, how's the status on YCM City?" Asked Sleepy. She was tired and thirsty.

"From what we last saw, everyone was ether dead or turned into a Troll or Spammer." Said Otaku, Gliscor sleeping gently on his lap.

"Yeah, not to mention from what I've heard, the Trolls and Spammers are getting smarter. This can't be good." Elites said.

"Oh... Was there anything on the status on Moderator Roxas?" Sleepy asked.

"Nope. The Moderators and President YCMaker are still in hiding. Thank God for that." Elites said. He was starting to get sleepy and switched with Otaku. Gliscor woke up and went on Elites laps and slept on him.

"So, who are you guys and why were you in Graphics City?" Asked Otaku.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler= Act II: Chapter 2:The Doctor's Rise']

 

Justin and John heard the commotion. They got up, but several S.V.E.R. operatives quickly took them to a hanger where a small airplane was hidden. The two quickly got on along with 2 other soldiers. The rest quickly ran towards the commotion started. Justin and John made way for the pilot and the co pilot. The plane moved down the runway then started to lift off. In a minute, they were in the sky heading towards another S.V.E.R. outpost.

 

Justin and John looked at the pilots and then took out their pistols and shot them in the head. They took control of the plane and headed east. They landed at a clearing and headed for a factory which had "Danger! Geben Sie es nicht! Wer eintritt, wird auf Sicht erschossen werden!" on a sign hanging on it's front gates. Justin pulled out a key from his fatigue and opened the gate with it. They strolled through the empty courtyard til they arrived at a door. Justin used the same key and opened the door walking into a locker room. Justin and John each went to what seemed to be their locker. Justin opened the one he was in front of, number 619, and John opened his, number 926. Justin pulled out a box from his locker and opened it. It contained a MPP-19 Bizon, a few mags, and what appears a Nazi officer uniform. John opened his locker and pulled out Famas and a gas mask. John and Justin quickly went out of the locker room and walked towards a huge building several stories high. They entered the building and walked down a long corridor. They found a door leading down to a cellar and found a switch with a severed arm still clinging to it. Justin flipped the switch and John ran up stairs. He opened a door and found a laboratory.

 

"Hey Justin, or should I say Doctor. You think your test subjects are still alive?" Asked John.

 

Justin walked up the stairs and put his Bizon at his side.

 

"Of course. The test subjects would still alive. I've created them, broung a new form for them to live in, whether they wanted to or not." Said the Doctor, smiling.

 

"Alright, but tell me when your releasing those things. They creep me out with their screaming and their blank stares." Complained John, all the while the Doctor looked at the tools he had at his disposable.

 

He loved working at the Tod Gebäude.

 

Back in the S.V.E.R. base Larxene and Flandre had decimated all life there. They smiled and looked at the carnage, body parts littered the ground, the snow was blood red. They looked up at the night sky and they both knew where the airplane earlier went. No one could escape from them. Flandre spread her wings and flew, all the while Larxene followed. They knew it would be a while before they found where the 2 were hiding. They knew it would take many nights, but they knew if they didn't stop the Doctor and John, it would mean more work to do, and less time to play.

 

The Doctor was in the test subject's cell. It reeked of death and decay. He looked at the seemingly dead corpse. It was nearly nothing but skin and bone, but it was still breathing.

"Aufstieg Günstling. (Rise Minion.) Ich bin dein Meister. (I am your master.)" Said the Doctor.

The corpse's head looked up at him and complied. It got up, nothing covered it but a loin cloth. It's pasty white skin glowed from the light behind the Doctor.

 

"Sie haben geschlafen für eine lange Zeit. Ihr nichts als ein Sklave, und das ist dein Schicksal. Aber, da ich ein netter Kapitän bin, werde ich Ihnen Ihre Freiheit zu gewähren. Alles was Sie tun müssen, ist zu töten Wer folgt uns. Verstehst du? (You have been asleep for a long time. Your nothing but a slave, and that's your destiny. But, since I'm a nice master, I shall grant you your freedom. All you have to do, is kill whoever is following us. Do you understand?)" The Doctored explained.

 

All the thing did was nodded, it's eyes glowed a orange-red light. The Doctor smiled and led it out of it's cell.

 

John looked around in the courtyard. He remembers this place fondly. John walked around and found a large building with a sign on it's door. It read "Soldaten Kaserne"(Solder's Barracks). He opened the door and looked around. It was dark and dusty so he fumbled around for a light switch. When he found one and turned it on, he froze. There in the Soldier's Barracks were zombies walking around, not noticing the lights being back on after all these years. Finally, one looked at John and let out a ear piercing screech. The others looked at him and run for him. John quickly pulled out his gun and sprayed. When his mag ran dry, there was only 2 left still running for him. He pulled out a knife and stabbed one in the head, while grabbing the other one in the throat. John quickly stabbed the other one and let it dropped on the floor. He went back outside and walked towards the Med Labs where the Doctor was.

 

The Doctor was checking on the test subject when John came in.

"So my Doctor, who is our friend here?" Asked John.

"Well my friend, Test Subject XIII here is fine. After 10 years of not having a drink or a bite to eat, he's still alive. I'm giving him a steady injection of "Solution 115" to strengthen him. Now, John, I need you to go find Test Subject XII and get him here." Ordered the Doctor.

 

As John turned, they heard something outside. Two girls were giggling outside.

 

[spoiler= Sample from a collaboration between me and the Doctor]

A comedy/action/zombie/slight Yaoi romance rolled into one.

 

VK as The Stubby

 

The Doctor as The Doctor

 

Premise: In the future, the Illuminati has made it's move and created a weapon manufacturing company that also makes civilian weapons. The Illuminati, wanting to expand into the business venture of Private Military Corporation, decides to create a create "Task Force 666". A collection of soldiers and criminals from all around the world. The 2 original members were assigned to find members and create this Task Force. This is their journey and their various missions, from saving humanity, to destroying it and ensuring it's doom.

 

In Central America in Mexico, a gang meets at a warehouse, only to be approached by a Vietnamese man dressed in business cloths. He donned a black suit, black sun glasses, and a gelled hair style. He looked at what appears to be the gang's leader, a man known only as "El asesinato". He held a briefcase and it appeared to be quite heavy.

 

"¿Quién demonios dejar que esta perra en nuestro lugar de reunión? (Who the hell let this jabroni in our hangout?)" Yelled "El asesinato".

 

"No se preocupe, yo había dejado mi auto pulg tengo una oferta para usted. ¿Cómo sería si yo le ofrecen 500 milliones pesos al año si usted trabajó para mí y mi jefe? (Do not fret, I had let my self in. I have a offer for you. How would it be if I would offer you 500 million Peso a year if you worked for me and my boss?)" Asked the Vietnamese man in perfect Spanish.

 

The gang looked at their leader,

"¿Cómo puedo saber si el dice lav dad? También qué tipo de trabajo es esto? (How do I know if your telling the truth? Also what type of work is this?) "

 

The Vietnamese man threw the briefcase at one of the men. He opened it and his eyes opened wide. In the briefcase was 250 million Pesos.

 

"Mire, si usted trabaja para nosotros este año, usted recibirá el resto. Ahora, ¿cuál es su respuesta? (You see, if you work for us this year, you will get the rest. Now, what is your answer?)" Asked the Vietnamese man again.

 

El asesinato smiled and got up.

 

"Te voy a aceptar su oferta. (I'll take on your offer)" Said El aseninato with a smile.

 

The Vietnamese man smiled as well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler= Act II: Chapter III: Confrontation]

 

The Doctor and John looked at the door. Then at the skeletal figure on the table. The Doctor quickly turned to it and spoke.

 

"Minion, ich brauche dich, um uns zu verteidigen. Zur Schlacht jetzt! (Minion, I need you to defend us. Go to battle now!)" Commanded the Doctor in a shaky voice.

 

The Subject got up and did as it was told. It went out the door. When it got out, the night sky was clear, and the moon was red and casting it light at them. Flandre and Larxene giggled at the pathetic figure which opposed them. In a fraction of a second, Flandre quickly clenched her fist, and the poor thing exploded in a red mist. Bits of Subject XII was lying on the ground, his blood still warm. As Flandre was about to head for the door, Larxene stopped her. Her smile vanished and hatred was shining in her eyes.

 

The remains of Subject XII quickly transformed into a sick yellow gas and engulfed Flandre and Larxene. A young Aryan boy in a clothing similar to Hitler's Youth League was smirking at them on top of the Soldiers Barracks next to the Med Lab.

 

"Armen Mädchen, sollte nicht mit dem Arzt und mich verwirrt haben. (Poor girls, shouldn't have messed with the Doctor and me.)" Said the young lad.

 

As the yellow gas faded, Flandre and Larxene was no where to be seen. As the young boy's smile faded, he heard something behind his back. He turned, only to face a onslaught of knives to slam into his head and body. He fell off the building and onto the ground. Larxene landed on top of him and sliced off his head. The remains quickly turned back into the sickening yellow gas and enveloped Larxene. She quickly jumped out of the cloud, only to be pursued by it. Flandre smiled as if the battle they were in was a fun game. She quickly then fired a fireball at the gas, and as the cloud caught on fire, the young boy fell to the ground on fire.

 

"Hilf mir, Herr Doktor! Herr Doktor, helfen Sie mir! Ich will nicht wieder zu sterben! (Help me Doctor! Doctor, help me! I don't wanna die again!)" Screamed the boy, his tears running down his face as the flames engulfed him.

 

Larxene landed down next to him and Flandre flew over her and watched. As Larxene knelt down next to the young boy, she whispered to him.

 

"Armer kleiner Junge. Dies ist, was passiert, wenn man mit Fremden zu spielen. Sag mir, weißt du, was passiert mit schlechten kleinen Jungen, wenn sie wegen der, wie dumm sie sind in diesem Leben sterben? Sie gehen zur Hölle. Sie gehen in die Hölle, weil sie nicht intelligent genug, um nicht mit Zohan an Kräfte, die nicht dazu gedacht war, mit der Nase herumführen. Nun kleinen Jungen, ist dies nur ein Vorgeschmack dessen, was erwartet Sie in der Hölle. (Poor little boy. This is what happens when you play with strangers. Tell me, do you know what happens to bad little boy when they die because of how stupid they are in this life? They go to Hell. They go to Hell all because they weren't smart enough to not mess with forces that wasn't meant to be messed with. Now little boy, this is only a taste of what awaits in you Hell. ) " Whispered Larxene as the boy screamed. She looked down at him with glowing eyes.

 

When the boy died, Flandre and Larxene then walked over to the Med Lab,only to discover The Doctor and John gone and headed for the hangar bay. The quickly followed them only to find them already flying off in a M60 fighter plane, Flandre quickly threw a fireball at the plane and smiled as it exploded. They turned and then left the facility, they headed for YCM to help with the war.

 

[spoiler= Another Sneak Peak]

 

VK as The Stubby

 

The Docter as The Doctor

 

Gomez as El Asesino or as "Ases"

 

Dakota as Mike "Heavy"

 

Brit as Brit

 

In the deepest parts in Germany, a squad known as Task Force 666 fights a undead menace, but unknowingly doomed the human race.

 

They now hold up in a Nazi SS base which holds the fabled Die Glocke.

 

Stubby quickly reloaded his AK-74 and sprayed at the zombie's head, making the poor thing's head explode in a mist of blood. He turned to The Doctor and yelled.

 

"DOC! I NEED ANOTHER MAG, THEIR SWARMING OVER HERE!!!" Screamed Stubby as they overflowed the hallway.

 

"Fine, but next time, CONSERVE YOUR funking AMMO STUBBY!" Yelled the Doctor as he threw some magazines over to Stubby.

 

Stubby caught them and sprayed at the zombies heading for him. As more pored in, several of them in the back flew as a explosion happened. Stubby continued to spray at the zombies, as he heard faint popping behind the hoard.

 

"Ases, you back there?" Stubby yelled.

 

"Yeah camarada, these sacos de carne have nothing on us!" Said Ases.

 

"Hurry on your side! I take it Brit and Mike made it to the roof?" Asked Stubby.

 

"Si, they made it." Said Ases.

 

The Doctor overhead them and joined in the conversation while taking deliberate and controlled shots at the undead.

 

"Good. Now we just have to take care of these Stub Walkers then we can regroup with Brit and Mike." Said the Doctor with a smile on his face.

 

How many? How many of you filthy and useless pigs were brought back as Stub Walkers from my family's' experiments?

 

 

All the while, in the city of New York, the CEO of Angel's Swords weapons manufacturing company and Private Military Contractor, looked out of the window of her office in a skyscraper. Her dark brown eyes looked at the sky. She wondered about the squad she had sent to acquire the Die Glocke had done it. She smiled. She was the CEO of a multimillion dollar company, and the head of the Illuminati. She now has the power to control the world. The CEO heard a knock on her door. She sat down and allowed the visitor in. A woman walked in, fair skinned and with long blond hair, she looked nervous.

 

"So, Mrs. Locke. What has brought you here to my office?" Asked the CEO.

 

"Well, I've come here to ask where my husband is currently? He said he had to go somewhere to Germany, but I want to know where." Explained the worried wife.

 

"I'm so sorry Mrs. Locke, but that's a secret. But if your worried about his safety, don't worry. Was he not a Ex-Viet Cong? He is currently with other like him. He should be safe." Assured the CEO.

 

The woman still looked tense and worried. The CEO only frowned and felt some pang of pity.

 

"Look, if it makes you feel better, he should be home in a few weeks. Just don't worry. He's with the elites of many Special Forces from around the world." The CEO said.

 

The woman only nodded and left.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler= Act II: Chapter 4: Suwanpu baka no]

 

The Doctor and John opened the cellar door. It was John's idea that saved them from death. They had tricked the 2 into thinking they were getting away by using that plane, they were wrong.

 

"John, we should we go next?" Asked The Doctor.

 

"Well, we should head for that one village we hid that experiment in." Said John as he checked the area around them.

 

"Fine. Let's just hope those villagers didn't do anything. If we're lucky, it would have killed them all." The Doctor replied with a smile.

 

The Experiment XII was designed for one thing and one thing only. To massacre all things against the Doctor and his bosses. The whole Experiment line of weapons was created to augment Raven's finest soldiers, but was scraped when the Doctor and his friend defected to S.V.E.R. Now, they were just forgotten weapons. Augmented super soldiers with near god like powers. Only 13 was made, each was a war orphan.

 

Mean while, in TCG city, the Valor troops has conquered most of the metropolis. Leaving only the south with dwindling supplies. As VK and his companions rush to the city, the Doctor and John make their way to the village where they stored the experiment, only to soon learn they had only unleashed a scourge upon the land.

 

When the two finally made upon a wooden gate with red kanji writing on it, a suriken landed at their feet.

 

"Halt, who comes to the Mura ninja no?" Asked a voice.

 

The Doctor and John only smiled and looked at each other.

 

"Well, looks like the experiment didn't kill them." Said John.

 

"I can tell." The Doctor replied in a angry tone. His eyes burned with fury. A failed experiment? How did this happen! I, Doctor Blutbad shall not stand for this disgrace!

 

The Doctor quickly pulled out his sub-machine gun and fired at the source of the voice. When he was finished, only a bullet ridden log fell down. John pulled out his AK-74U and went back to back with the Doctor. A flurry of shuriken flew at them, the Doctor and John quickly dodged and them, only maintaining scratches and cuts on their arms. They ran around the village, shooting their assailants when they could. When they found a small hole in the wooden wall, they quickly crawled through, evading their assailants. They stood in wonder as they looked at what appeared to be a Japanese styled village. John and the Doctor stealthily stuck to the back of the wooden stalls and looked around. It was a bustling village, with what to appear people with Japanese weapons in ridiculous orange jump suits and green vests. The Doctor and John smiled.

 

This is where they stored their weapon, this is the Narutard village.

 

They walked behind the wooden stalls, making their way to the edge of the village, and then they found a clothes line with some clothes they could use to blend in. They quickly changed clothes, burying their original clothing into the ground, marking it. They then walked out into the open and looked around. The Doctor and John saw a large building, and then they decided to head towards it. As they were walking to the building, the Doctor turned to John and whispered to him.

 

"John, I remember this place. Though it changed, I remember. That building, wasn't it the hut that we buried Experiment XII?" Asked the Doctor smiling.

 

"Yeah. I remember, you think they somehow became smarter from her? I thought we set her to kill everything but us on sight." Said John.

 

"Well, I guess something must have changed her. I guess I'll just have to fix her." The Doctor said with a smile.

 

"Don't tell you'll-"

 

"Of course. All the experiments are my children. I gotta take care of them."

 

"But, if we do that, it might kill us as well!"

 

"Hmph, John, once you have done the things I have done, you wouldn't be scared of death. Oh no, once you have done what I have done, you will never be scared of anything."

 

They continued walking towards the large building. As they was about to enter through the door, two guards stopped them.

 

"Hey! This area is restricted for authorized personal only!" Yelled one of them.

 

The Doctor quickly pulled out a small knife and stabbed it into the man's jugular vein. John quickly grabbed his Bowie knife and punched the other guard with the Knuckle Duster then slashing the man's throat. They quickly ran inside into the building when more guards came running after them. Throwing knives came flying near their heads, The Doctor quickly pulled out his gun and fired back at them, only downing a few of them. They quickly ducked behind a counter and pulled out a stick of dynamite. John threw it at them and then detonated it killing the guards. They quickly ran through a set of doors and found a flight of stairs. The Doctor and John ran down the stairs, and for what seemed for a eternity, they were stopped by a large metal door. The Doctor pulled out some explosives and set them on the door, telling John to get back. When he was done he ran back and detonated it. When the smoke settled, they saw a huge hole in the door and decided to walk through. They found a small girl on a large pink canopy bed. She was smiling at them with her large blue eyes. The 3 looked at each other before John and the Doctor pulled out their guns and opened fire. The girl disappeared in a cloud of smoke and then the Doctor and John went back to back. They heard a whizzing sound coming from their left only to be attacked by a barrage of throwing knives. John dropped down bleeding out, mean while the Doctor dropped dead. The girl reappeared on top of them laughing. When she stopped laughing, she walked over to the Doctor and kicked his face in. She turned to John and spoke.

 

"Hmph. Officer John Locke right? I remember you. I remember you and that "Doctor". I remember, back in the camps, you too had fun with the test subjects. I remember him poking and prodding me with his needles. I asked him to at least give me something to soothe the pain, but he said it would interfere with the experiments. Whenever I would pass out from the pain, I would be happy and dream about my family. Now, looking back, I gotta thank him. He gave me powers, powers which made me a god. Back when you left me here, a group of idiots found me. They awoken me and then worshiped me because of my powers. I showed them how to fight, how to make new technologies. I've told them a plot from a old T.V show I use to watch as a child, and they take it as some long fabled legends of warriors. I now rule over the village of Narutards. Now, I will spare you of your misery now." The experiment said.

 

She stopped. She turned to the corpse of the Doctor only to find a small package. She turned back to John only to find a small puddle of blood. The experiment turned to run only die in a explosion which had engulfed the whole village and created a large gray mushroom.

 

 

 

[spoiler= Act II: Chapter 5: Explanation and History]

 

They watched the city burn. Both of them bloodied and full of rapidly healing wounds. They are undead, they cannot die, and they will not die.

 

The Doctor and John watch as the city burned and it's people died. The Doctor smiled as he watch the destruction, and John only frowned. There was a huge rift between them now, and breaking point in their long relationship. They looked down from the cliff overlooking the city and then they departed, splitting up.

 

The start of their friendship started when John had met the Doctor at the med lab when John had a swelling fever. They were both part of a biological weapon development company. John, serving as a ex-army officer was infected with rabies which he had contracted from a stray dog. The Doctor deemed him fight for duty after curing him and assigned him as a test subject for a super soldier program.

 

 

 

 

 

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