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[Pokemon Fan-Fic] Descent Into Darkness (PG-13) [Chapter 4 says hello.]


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Ice is going to be in this? :/

 

I was hoping I would be in it too...

 

But it's your's anyways. Good chapter. But I think Darkrai is more misunderstood' date=' rather than evil.

 

Ot there are more than 1 Darkrai...

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You're the Crobat.

 

Not everyone can be a character, unfortunately. =/

 

Your catchphrase is definitely going in. ;D

 

And in this fic, Darkrai is evil. Because I made it so. ^^

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Ice is going to be in this? :/

 

I was hoping I would be in it too...

 

But it's your's anyways. Good chapter. But I think Darkrai is more misunderstood' date=' rather than evil.

 

Ot there are more than 1 Darkrai...

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You're the Crobat.

 

Not everyone can be a character, unfortunately. =/

 

Your catchphrase is definitely going in. ;D

 

And in this fic, Darkrai is evil. Because I made it so. ^^

 

So I don't talk?

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Ice is going to be in this? :/

 

I was hoping I would be in it too...

 

But it's your's anyways. Good chapter. But I think Darkrai is more misunderstood' date=' rather than evil.

 

Ot there are more than 1 Darkrai...

[/quote']

 

You're the Crobat.

 

Not everyone can be a character, unfortunately. =/

 

Your catchphrase is definitely going in. ;D

 

And in this fic, Darkrai is evil. Because I made it so. ^^

 

So I don't talk?

 

No. Well, maybe. I don't really know whether I want the Pokemon to be able to speak...

 

But someone is definitely going to use your signature phrase~

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Anyways' date=' it's 'bout 1:00 PM over there, so I hope I can see the next chapter by 8:00PM KST or whatev.

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If this writer's block doesn't kill me first. xD

 

If not up today, the next chapter will definitely be up early tomorrow. ;D

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Did Darkrai take Crazy Pills or something?

 

Anyway' date=' I like new Darkrai. He's so ebil~ <3

I demand Chapter 3 by tomorrow. D<

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Lawl. Crazy Pills. xD

 

OKAY OKAY

 

Next chapter feature the users

 

Ice

Zeonark

Ficko

Twig

Dark (?)

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Wait... How can Ace have a Crobat but Evee not like him enough to evolve?

 

I guess the two can have different taste but still...

 

And how can anyone lose to Falkner, loss thier starter, and STILL be popular enough to get Golbat to evolve.

 

Anyway, I want the Unown in this fic.

 

Cause they kick ass.

 

I mean they can (in large numbers) turn peoples greatest desires into reality.

 

Therefore, inversely they can do the same with fear.

 

It's like super Darkrai but less malevolent and more trying to be nice but winding up hurting others accidentally.

 

More importantly only they can let you do this:

 

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That is awesome. A reality controlling funk you.

 

 

Seriously though I like the fan fic.

 

I won't ask that you add me, only that Zeonark demands that others call her Mother, you use the unown, and don't screw up.

 

 

An interesting fact, I'm Zeonark and Xirno's landlord, thier residence I'd rather not say since it's somewhat disturbing.

 

Lett's just say that the apartment is alive.

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Thanks Twig.

 

And I can't update now, but Chapter 2 is finished. Just need to find some place where I can post it here~

 

Also, minor, but I added in background music during some scenes of the chapters. If you don't like my selection, you don't have to listen to it. ^^

 

(If you have a better suggestion for music, PM me. ;D)

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Keira that ass. .-.

She totally owned Twig and Espeon for no reason. Somehow though, I found it hilarious. I like the description on this one too. And Zack is lulzy.

 

“That one has Cut on it. My Farfetch’d saved my ass a couple of times with that move.”

 

A Farfetch'd saved his ass with cut a couple of times? I lol'd.

 

I <3 it Clair.

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Keira is like Silver but an idiot.

 

"How dare you attack innocent trees and Pokemon (which you're never actually so much as implied to do) I am so mad I'm going to beat you up, severly wound your sister's pokemon for no reason, and steal your stuff. I'm such an appealing character! Highwaywoman of justice away!"

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Keira that ass. .-.

She totally owned Twig and Espeon for no reason. Somehow though' date=' I found it hilarious. I like the description on this one too. And Zack is lulzy.

 

“That one has Cut on it. My Farfetch’d saved my ass a couple of times with that move.”

 

A Farfetch'd saved his ass with cut a couple of times? I lol'd.

 

I <3 it Clair.

 

Thanks, Zeo. ^^

 

Keira is like Silver but an idiot.

 

"How dare you attack innocent trees and Pokemon (which you're never actually so much as implied to do) I am so mad I'm going to beat you up' date=' severly wound your sister's pokemon for no reason, and steal your stuff. I'm such an appealing character! Highwaywoman of justice away!"

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That's pretty much what it's all about, yeah.

 

I still need to define her personality a bit more. :/

 

Also, don't get the bolded part.

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I don't remember you actually saying Jack beat up random pokemon, so it seems that that part Keira made up.

 

Still, why does she bother pretending she had morals, she clearly doesn't.

 

Do I act like I care about people?

 

But you should totally have unown, they should talk in red text, be obsessed with the light of true redemption, and are half crazy.

 

Just like me.

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I don't remember you actually saying Jack beat up random pokemon' date=' so it seems that that part Keira made up.

 

Still, why does she bother pretending she had morals, she clearly doesn't.

 

Do I act like I care about people?

 

But you should totally have unown, they should talk in red text, be obsessed with the light of true redemption, and are half crazy.

 

Just like me.

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Well exactly. Keira spins things out of proportion.

 

And Unown will make in appearance in the Ruins of Alph, maybe? I don't know yet.

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Better, have a guy POSSESED by Unown.

 

Every evil plan works better with wither Flans or Unowns.

 

They can control reality! They are allot stronger than the lake trio at what they do.

 

I mean, why summon Palkia when you could MAKE AN ENTEI?

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