Phantom Roxas Posted June 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 Not that, but like the way his conscience warns him that something bad might happen, but he ignores it entirely and goes on. He's not skeptical, he's completely ignorant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 He doesn't have to randomly turn away; he should at least consider what could possibly be wrong before realizing that he has nothing to be concerned about and he shouldn't even be thinking like that. Instead, he doesn't even spare a single thought. Granted, his conscience his horribly and conveniently specific anyway, so perhaps the very idea that his conscience even works that way is the problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 lol@Crab's sentence about the GX dub. GX seems kinda retarded. Yugioh in general doesn't make sense when dubbed by 4Kids. I mean, invisible guns? http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-203490-page-1.html I have a feeling that my Chapter 6 is very horrible, NOT including the Part that Kevin or Vilgax is still alive. I would positively take critism of Chapter 6, please. Go ahead and insult the MS Paint Drawings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Nitro Warrior!" a large blue warrior with anger issues appeared in attack mode (2800' date=' 1800).[/quote']I think you should have noted that Nitro Warrior is actually green. Okay' date=' Malefic Dragon Catapult Cannon. That's my favorite card here. Too bad it's not enough to even bring this fanfic [b']from so-bad-it's-horrible to awful[/b].I lol'd@this part. But you gotta' admit. A Malefic version of a mechanized dragon-tank-robot would seriously be epic. And lol@Malefic Handcuffs Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 I may have to read the rest of Ann 10, but I'll give it a look. I thought there was a mistake with Nitro Warrior somewhere, but didn't notice that part. Malefic V-Z is indeed epic, and while Malefic Handcuffs Dragon is stupid, there was already too much stupidity to deal with. Anyway, enjoy The Fantastic Four. I think I may have breached the character limit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 The fourth has gotten reviewed by multiple times. Each review has pointed out the same things in general. Mine reviewing mine? Just the prologue right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Yes, the anime toons are beyond broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 "Schweet." says the infamous Sirtrystan 5, eager to see what's with this thread. As he clicks on the link, the announcer blurts out "And now, the criticised and ridiculed Sirtrystan 5 opens the page to his main insulter's review thread. Will he find his own fanfic utterly ridiculised and disgraced on a public forum for millions to see? Or will it be as bad as his unupdated fanfic? Find out next time on 'Cool, yet Fancy'." Roflcopter. Anyways, I would appreciate it if you did something like "And here are some of his responses to my review!" or something like that. Because on this thread, people only see the BAD side of the painfully crappy fanfic creator's creations. It sounds harsh on this thread lolz. Just MY (short) review of Your review of my story. I'm trying not to sound mean, and I don't intend offense, but seriously... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Except it's extremely easy to destroy the Toons via card effects, which is what I'm saying. Even in the anime that's common. So I'm not quite sure what was worse - Micheal Fudo vs Paradox or The Big 12. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Honestly, I'd rather be told I have a crappy fan-fic instead of not being told anything and continuing on thinking I'm doing fine. As much as some people get upset, the review threads could be good constructive criticism. EDIT: Damn. Ninja'd me, PR. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 I thought I remembered the anime tending much more heavily toward destruction by battle than real life. Either way' date=' though, Toons are certainly much better in the anime than in reality, especially with their broken fictional support and the usual anime shenanigans of draws being stacked. Not that the animeverse ever had a metagame anyhow.[/quote']The anime would suck if everyone used Lightning Vortex/Smashing Ground/[insert monster destruction here] Though they did have a few moments in which a monster-destruction-type-card was used, but it was only in 1 of those dramatic fashions. Like when Yugi and his "friends" are all concerned about Bakura's face-down Man-Eater Bug.Or when Bandit Keith's Metal Zoa attacks Joey's Battle Warrior(I think it was that), and it "randomly" fell into a Trap Hole.(lolseason1) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 more review threads..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Yours doesn't count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Well... I feel insulted, because it only shows the bad side of me, AND I might get neg reps because of it. It would make me feel a lot better if you put in a "replies" section. It can be funny, too. Like if a guy just says "I hate you :/" after you review his fanfic. Anyways, it would be much appreciated if you did that. Jut saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 If people click on your thread, they should notice that you've improved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Yours doesn't count.blah! i count as much as the next guy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Whoot! Thanks for the name change! @Pichu:Not as a good reviewer, you don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Yours doesn't count.blah! i count as much as the next guy! But not as much as the next girl? You're not even trying to hide it anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 @Pichu:Not as a good reviewer' date=' you don't.[/quote'] Reviews needs to be funny, thats how they get popular.kinda'likemymessedupGXrewrite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Yours doesn't count.blah! i count as much as the next guy! But not as much as the next girl? You're not even trying to hide it anymore. I think that's how the figure of speech goes... Unless that's sarcasm. I'm confused now...Oh, that's right, Pichu's sexist. They do realize us males are truly an evolutionary hiccup, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Yours doesn't count.blah! i count as much as the next guy! But not as much as the next girl? You're not even trying to hide it anymore. I think that's how the figure of speech goes... Unless that's sarcasm. I'm confused now...Oh' date=' that's right, Pichu's sexist. They do realize us males are truly an evolutionary hiccup, right?[/quote']Im not frecking sexist! Male and Female are equal! And I do make make reviews funny! My latest one has the Ojama King crushing me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Yours doesn't count.blah! i count as much as the next guy! But not as much as the next girl? You're not even trying to hide it anymore. I think that's how the figure of speech goes... Unless that's sarcasm. I'm confused now...Oh' date=' that's right, Pichu's sexist. They do realize us males are truly an evolutionary hiccup, right?[/quote']Im not frecking sexist! Male and Female are equal! And I do make make reviews funny! My latest one has the Ojama King crushing me! Funny? No. But good? No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecoboy1324 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Yours doesn't count.blah! i count as much as the next guy! But not as much as the next girl? You're not even trying to hide it anymore. I think that's how the figure of speech goes... Unless that's sarcasm. I'm confused now...Oh' date=' that's right, Pichu's sexist. They do realize us males are truly an evolutionary hiccup, right?[/quote']Im not frecking sexist! Male and Female are equal! And I do make make reviews funny! My latest one has the Ojama King crushing me! It also didn't cover the whole story and provided very little actual insight other then Ojama's suck. In general it was just a plain awful review unlike crab who although he takes a generally sarcastic and myopic view actually wants to help people become better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lonk Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Hey Phantom, can you criticize my work? http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-210846.html It would be very appreciated if you can constructively criticize it. It still may need some work and it would be good to find what is wrong with it. Thanks:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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