Zextra Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 [quote name='Darmanitan/Daruma Mode' timestamp='1307960262' post='5279844'] At first, I thought; "Why, Zex? You're too good for this sort of bad OCG." Then I read further, checked on YuGiOh Wiki... and thought "Why, Konami?" This sort of OCG is only on one card, and it's not in any of the GENF translations - yet. So I'm a little confused at why they change it when it's simply not nessessary. Anyway, I like the actual card and effect. Easy to use, and an easy +2 - RFP (or 'banish' >.<) an opponent's monster and SS one of your own. Makes sense why you didn't make it a Tuner, though, since if it was released, it'd go straight to the ban list then XD 9.8/10. [size="1"]By the way, I'm a little low on views. Can you click the first set in my sig, pwetty pwease? XD[/size] [/quote] @ Darmanitan - Yeah, I'm not too fond of the new OCG at this point either... Thanks for your comments - your observations were exactly what I tried to do with the card. • Also, I will check out your set tonight when I get back on my computer - rating cards on an iPod is not fun. ^^ @ Maha - No problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shelds9 Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 The OCG is kind of - stupid/retarted/wierd/different. Whatever you want to call it. Interesting though.Just wanted to say: smart putting [Zextra] at the start of the thread. It lets people know that a good card creator made it and then they post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Kewl. Although, I am still coming to terms with the whole "Banish" thing. I say [b]forget [/b]that. I am sticking to the old OCG." <BR>oh right, rating. 8/10. I, personally, do not like that kind of pic, but...anyway, good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Horrendously broken lol.[i]"While there are at least 5 monsters in [b]you and your[/b] opponent's Graveyards".[/i] Your wording does not dictate that it has to be 5 in each, as is it means total. Which is very very easy to pull off. Not to mention you get a free bonus, costless summon for it. Sure, it has to be in your hand but this card will produce nothing but benefits without a cost. And Se15fy: Under no circumstances are you to swear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [quote name='Icyblue' timestamp='1308019589' post='5281834'] Horrendously broken lol.[i]"While there are at least 5 monsters in [b]you and your[/b] opponent's Graveyards".[/i] Your wording does not dictate that it has to be 5 in each, as is it means total. Which is very very easy to pull off. Not to mention you get a free bonus, costless summon for it. Sure, it has to be in your hand but this card will produce nothing but benefits without a cost. And Se15fy: Under no circumstances are you to swear. [/quote] Sorry - that's not quite what I had in mind - by that I mean 5 monsters [i]per[/i] Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [color="#4169E1"][font="Century Gothic"][center]Other than being easy to summon and a bit OP it's a nice card, pic is good, effect is good but the OCG (even though wisel reads this way) doesn't work.. By that I mean it just doesn't read nicely and it makes reading it flow allot less. Anyways good card overall 8.6/10 ^^.[/center][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 @ shelds - I only do that because other members do it @ sf15fy - Thanks; yeah, I don't usually use pictures of this sort, but I decided to expirent anyways. ^^ @ Classic - Thanks for your comments. In reality, though, it's actually pretty useless early game, since it's unlikely that there will be 10 monsters in the Grave within the first turn or two (unless it's Doppel Quasar or Lightsworns). Plus, it has poor stats, so it'll probably immediately be Synched off or Xyz'd. However, the OCG is the way it will be, so that I can't help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [u]OCG[/u]: ... honestly... i dont like it... but i guess it has to be done... ... its up to you... ... the original creators of Yugioh would never take our cards and use it for themselves anyways... no matter how cool or useful our cards are... [u]Images[/u] = [b]Great[/b] (clear image, picture is picture xP) [u]Comments[/u]: ... i know i'm not what you asked for ([i]"Would any TCG [u]experts[/u] be willing to help comment on this card? Thanks " - [b]Zextra's status[/b][/i])... ... and seeing that many people have already rated and commented on your card i'm guessing you're pretty satisfied with it and all thats left to do is defend your card from being highly criticized by others who see this card differently or wanna make it into something of their own... ... but if you dont mind me saying my part... i think your card [b]Inner Angelic Nurse, Katsuura[/b] is kinda broken... =t ... i could care less about the OCG since its just for us to accurately understand what the card does in play... but i have to agree with [b]Icyblue's[/b] comment: [quote]Horrendously broken lol."While there are at least 5 monsters in you and your opponent's Graveyards". Your wording does not dictate that it has to be 5 in each, as is it means total. Which is very very easy to pull off. Not to mention you get a free bonus, costless summon for it. Sure, it has to be in your hand but this card will produce nothing but benefits without a cost.[/quote] ... its a nice card though... really... [u]Overall Rating[/u] = [b]4/5[/b] [i](not rated for its broken effect, but the effort from the creator himself)[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1308033114' post='5282169'] i have to agree with [b]Icyblue's[/b] comment: [/quote] Thanks for your comment, but Icyblue's comment was due to a misunderstanding - it would have been horrendously broken...had it been 5 or more TOTAL monsters in BOTH Graveyard combined, but my effect is not that - the card requires 5 monsters in EACH Graveyard, so it would really only be used mid to end game. Thanks for your comment, nevertheless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Any more comments? Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1308089664' post='5283352'] Any more comments? Thanks! [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Hey, original card we have here mate ^^. Powerful effect but restricting Summoning Condition. This card could see abuse to Synchro Summoning but oh well xD, the cost makes it fair enough. 9.5/10 and a + Rep for you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Thanks, Venom! I appreciate your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Your welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 No more comments? o_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Comments, please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Okay, this can work fast if played right! It works well with many different cards that banish. I like it, and it is great against Dark World and Infernities.. do not use it against me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1307825560' post='5275181'] [center]This is my first Single in a very long time... Normally, I wouldn't use images like this, but... I decided to anyways. Please comment and rate! Thanks! [img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3470/nursecard.png[/img] [b][i]Lore: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by its own effect, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. While there are at least 5 monsters in you and your opponent's Graveyards: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You can banish a monster in your opponent's Graveyard; Special Summon a Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard.[/i][/b] [/center] [/quote] OCG fix: [b]This card[/b] cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. [b]This card cannot be special summoned except by it's own effect[/b]. [b]When[/b] there are at least 5 monsters in both players' graveyards, you can Special Summon this card. Once per turn you can banish a monster in your opponent's graveyard and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your graveyard. Overall, I think there should be at least some restriction to the special summon, as you can both banish a monster in the opponent's graveyard (which can be very beneficial) and SS a level 4 monster. Make it so that the monster has it's effect negated, is destroyed during the end phase, cannot attack, etc, or a combination. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Northern' timestamp='1308511237' post='5295594'] OCG fix: [b]This card[/b] cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. [b]This card cannot be special summoned except by it's own effect[/b]. [b]When[/b] there are at least 5 monsters in both players' graveyards, you can Special Summon this card. Once per turn you can banish a monster in your opponent's graveyard and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your graveyard. Overall, I think there should be at least some restriction to the special summon, as you can both banish a monster in the opponent's graveyard (which can be very beneficial) and SS a level 4 monster. Make it so that the monster has it's effect negated, is destroyed during the end phase, cannot attack, etc, or a combination. [/quote] Actually his OCG is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 @ Daemon and Northern - Thanks for your comments @ Northern - I honestly could say that I don't think it needs a drawback; it's a weak Level 4 Nomi that has mediocre stats; Plus, any good player wouldn't keep it on the field for kore than a turn. It's really designed to make a desperate midgame Synchro/Xyz. Also, I am usig the new OCG so it is correct (Thanks, Daemon, for minding it when I was out). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
u raging? Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 8/10 the new ocg "banish" isnt that bad. it takes less space and who cares if KONAMI changed a few words i mean they must have done it to make better cards with more ballanced efftects. Does any one else think the girl looks like the other anime ppl when some one says"will u go out with me,or "i love u," Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by its own effect, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. While there are at least 5 monsters in [b]each Graveyard[/b]: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You can banish [b]1[/b] monster in your opponent's Graveyard; Special Summon a Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. [color=blue] ^ -First bolded is just a suggestion, to clarify possible misunderstandings. The same reason that "cannot be Special Summoned by other ways." is there actually. -Second bolded is a minor thing. I personally like the new OCG even if it is a little weird. My guess is that new players can't just know from instinct what costs, conditions, and targets are in contrast to effects. Between some other things you probably already know sooo.. moving on. There is not much for me to comment on. Card is overall well made. OCG is good, and stats are ok. Some things have already been pointed and corrected. Card is definitely balanced. It is meant to use with Xyz and Synchros. Its fine if its not a Tuner because it itself can revive Tuners. Revival is fine, other monsters (mainly Tuners) do the same for their 1 card Synchros, and this is a Nomi so, it should be all good. Its not terribly hard to get 5 monsters but the part that would maker a player think about putting it is the fact that it depends partially on what your opponent has in the Graveyard, or depends on your opponent. Still, I don't think a player would stay without Graveyard just to dodge this card. About banishing cost. I'm not completely used to the new OCG yet either but, sounds like even if this card's effect is negated you still banished it. I'll leave that to you to decide if its good or bad. Either way its not at the level of D.D. Crow. ^-^" Rather than finding mistakes to correct I can pretty much only complement the card at this point. [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 @ Raging Man - thanks for your comment! [quote name='sleepy' timestamp='1308558004' post='5296858'] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by its own effect, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. While there are at least 5 monsters in [b]each Graveyard[/b]: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn: You can banish [b]1[/b] monster in your opponent's Graveyard; Special Summon a Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. [color=blue] ^ -First bolded is just a suggestion, to clarify possible misunderstandings. The same reason that "cannot be Special Summoned by other ways." is there actually. -Second bolded is a minor thing. I personally like the new OCG even if it is a little weird. My guess is that new players can't just know from instinct what costs, conditions, and targets are in contrast to effects. Between some other things you probably already know sooo.. moving on. There is not much for me to comment on. Card is overall well made. OCG is good, and stats are ok. Some things have already been pointed and corrected. Card is definitely balanced. It is meant to use with Xyz and Synchros. Its fine if its not a Tuner because it itself can revive Tuners. Revival is fine, other monsters (mainly Tuners) do the same for their 1 card Synchros, and this is a Nomi so, it should be all good. Its not terribly hard to get 5 monsters but the part that would maker a player think about putting it is the fact that it depends partially on what your opponent has in the Graveyard, or depends on your opponent. Still, I don't think a player would stay without Graveyard just to dodge this card. About banishing cost. I'm not completely used to the new OCG yet either but, sounds like even if this card's effect is negated you still banished it. I'll leave that to you to decide if its good or bad. Either way its not at the level of D.D. Crow. ^-^" Rather than finding mistakes to correct I can pretty much only complement the card at this point. [/color] [/quote] Thanks, sleepy, for your generous overview of the card (and thank you for the OCG correction). I appreciate it! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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