Nathanael D. Striker Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 [quote name='Yankee' timestamp='1315202058' post='5493248'] Right...if I wish to be part of the staff (teacher), am I supposed to submit a card? Or is the fact that I'm...ya know, Yankee..enough? XD No, seriously, do I have to post one of my cards? [/quote] You have to say which department you want to be apart of and submit a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 ... Balance or creativity...? Idk, I can do them all >_> One of my older, but better cards: [center][center][img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/2327/11496d.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]When this card is Normal Summoned, switch your Deck with your Graveyard. The original ATK of this card becomes the number of cards in your Deck x200. Once per turn, you may add the top card in your Graveyard to your hand. If you do, this card may not attack this turn. Any card this card destroys by battle is shuffled face-up into the owners' deck. When a player draws a face-up card, they gain 500 Life Points. [/b] [/center][/center] [center][center]And a good spell:[/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/1678/11496.jpg[/img][/center][/center] [center][center][b]Activate only when there are 15 or more cards in each player's Deck and each player controls 1 or more monsters. You cannot activate this card if you control more monsters than your opponent. You cannot declare an attack, or activate another Spell Card the turn this card is activated. When this card is activated, each player removes from play face-down the top 6 cards of their Deck. Monsters cannot attack players directly. Both players can only attack with 1 monster during their respective Battle Phases. When a monster attacks, if the attack target is not destroyed by battle, destroy the attacking monster. If a monster is attacked but not destroyed, it loses ATK if in Attack Position or DEF if in Defense Position equal to the ATK of the attacking monster. When a monster is destroyed by battle, its owner's opponent can randomly add 1 of their cards removed from play by this card's effect to their hand. If a player controls no monsters, they lose the duel. If a player moves all cards removed from play by this card's effect to their hand, they win the duel.[/b] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 "Tiamat Dragon" would be more suited to EARTH or FIRE Attribute, given the picture and mythology. As for the effect, it's a bit too close to "Exchange of the Spirit" for my liking. Also, "Victory Battleground" is pretty broken; activate it and blow up your opponent's monster(s) with a Trap, and you win. But they're creative, so to Creativity you go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 Its Fun, knowing Super Mod. Will join this club as well, ^^. As for the card: So, it is +1 every turn? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 So when is the contest going to start? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 [quote name='No. 34 Terror-Byte' timestamp='1315478079' post='5499820'] So when is the contest going to start? [/quote] When more people are active or at least online. So probably in just under a week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted September 8, 2011 Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 What will the category be? so i can make a few cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2011 [quote name='No. 34 Terror-Byte' timestamp='1315520947' post='5501004'] What will the category be? so i can make a few cards... [/quote] As in, what will the first challenge be? It will be a creativity-based challenge but I'm keeping the details under wraps for the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Maybe start notice the member max? and post the requirements Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 I'll probably fail since I'm currently in a creativity slump. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315751736' post='5507052'] Maybe start notice the member max? and post the requirements [/quote] As in, start the post and wait for people to apply? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Yesh i do believe tat is what he means, make it on the top thing and add (starting tournament soon (showcasing best card)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 I want to become a student, here is my card: [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/641/hopregreatknight.png/"][img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/5883/hopregreatknight.png[/img][/url] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned from your hand by returning 3 Warrior-type monsters you control to the Deck. While you have 3 or more Warrior-type monsters with different names in your Graveyard: You can return 1 Warrior-type monster you control to the Deck to banish all Warrior-type monsters in your Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for each Warrior-type monster banished (during your Battle Phase only). You can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card by returning 1 Warrior-type monster banished to your Deck. During each of your End Phases, send the top card from your Deck to the Graveyard.[/b] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]0 ATK/ 0 DEF[/b] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 OCG fix: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by returning 3 Warrior-type monsters you control to the Deck. While you have 3 or more Warrior-type monsters with different names in your Graveyard: You can return 1 Warrior-type monster you control to the Deck; Banish all Warrior-type monsters in your Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for each Warrior-type monster banished by this effect (during your Battle Phase only). You can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card by returning 1 banished Warrior-type monster to your Deck. During each of your End Phases: Send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard. I see no flaws bar it being somewhat UP'd and OTK material only. There were very few OCG errors... High Ra. (Obelisk? I dunno, I'll let other teachers decide on what Obelisk standard should be.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/262683-the-ycm-academy-contest/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/262683-the-ycm-academy-contest/[/url] Thread is up. Start joining. The first round is using a floating deadline until everyone has joined, so the sooner you join, the more time you get. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Can i be a student (but that comes with a question if over time i get good can i change from student to staff?) Entry Card [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1959/21665c.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 @ Touya: Accepted, and overall Ra. It's good OCG and quite a nice card, but it is let down by the fact it can't stop monster effects and is only a threat during your turn. It also doesn't generally help the Warrior-Type strategy. @ DarkHeart: Yes, if we judge you to have improved enough while as a student you can become a teacher. As for the card, I will say Osiris due to the OCG errors and relative under-poweredness. Most modern Warrior Decks use Level 2 to 4 monsters since they are prime fodder for Level 5 through 8 Synchro Monsters and Rank 3 and 4 Exceed Monsters. This would have to first be put to the Graveyard before being Special Summoned, which is a lot of work when you could Summon out "Colossal Fighter" instead. [b]OCG Fix:[/b] When this card destroys a LIGHT monster by battle: Gain Life Points equal to the ATK of that monster. If you control "Elven Warrior - Alesand": This card can attack twice in a row during your Battle Phase. If this card attacks directly: It cannot attack again during that Battle Phase. EDIT: Can anyone have a look at this and see if my thoughts of it being slight overpowered are correct? [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://i53.tinypic.com/29d6yw5.jpg[/img] [b]Effect:[/b] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Gemini Monsters This card on the field and in Graveyard is treated as a Gemini Monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect: You can select 1 Gemini monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it. It is treated as an Effect Monster, and gains its effect. If this card is applied for a card effect that would Gemini Summon a monster OR have a Gemini Monster gain its effect(s): This card gains the following effect: * This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card destroys a monster by battle: If you control another Gemini Monster; You can send 1 card on the field to the Graveyard. [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 @Touya: My associate Tristan already found your Card Grammar errors. I do not agree with the Ra placement however. Despite the small, minor errors, you did very well. Balance is your issue, as seen by your latest card in RC. From a Card Grammar aspect, Obelisk. From everything else, High Ra. I'll let Max ponder that. @DarkHeart: I agree with your Osiris placement. You have a long way to go in Card Grammar. Balance is also an issue with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Touya, your name and attribute need work from the start. I give low RA. DH, Species and Type + Name = Archetype? Not too keen on it. The image could easily be a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 @ Touya - The image does seem to be LIGHT at first, but upon further investigation, the details (the red eyes along with the purple in the background) could serve to show DARK. As for the name, yeah, it's too much of a LIGHT-ish one, so that needs some work. As Tristan pointed out, it's slightly UP'ed (since you most likely will not have too any banished Warriors and therefore be able to be destroyed easily), but can fuel for OTKs - Level 8 would've made it Trade-Innable Other than that, it looks ok, so High Ra from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Thanks for the additional ratings. I'll consider your points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 I think we need a better way to determine rank. [spoiler=Idea] [spoiler=Scoring Guide] Card Grammar: ?/10 Balance: ?/10 Creativity: ?/10 Total: ?/30[/spoiler] [spoiler=Rank Based on Individual Category] Osiris: 0-5/10 Ra: 6-8/10 Obelisk: 9-10/10[/spoiler] [spoiler=Rank Based on Total] Osiris: 0-15/30 Ra: 16-25/30 Obelisk: 26-30/30[/spoiler] [/spoiler] This is just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 That's probably a good idea. If enough people agree, we'll put that in place of the current system. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 No worries. Let us go with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 @ Anyone: Can you look at this booster-style selection I've been working on? Any comments on any of the cards would be appreciated: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261769-md-advent-of-creation-73100-en062-a-new-staple/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261769-md-advent-of-creation-73100-en062-a-new-staple/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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