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Yu-Gi-Oh! Invasion of the Clear Brigade; Co-Hosted by Rainbow Dash [OOC / Started / Not Accepting]


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Okay, re-read the posts.

- Toon Chaos' character is either insane or there's two characters and I just dont know about it. Either way, the post is confusing.
- Sleeping is presumably talking to me, but it's hard to tell because of how the communication is being done.

Ideally, you'd use quotation marks and make the character say something specific, rather than generalizing the conversation with saying "asked her if...". Also, I just dont understand the post.

- And Trimage is a short post, but I learned his character is evidently a teacher, which makes an earlier post significantly more sensical than I originally thought.

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