宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 12, 2013 Report Share Posted November 12, 2013 Because chaos cards are, like, totally 10/10 cool wowzies. I-I mean! Th-that's not what I'm really thinking. I just thought.. I guess you guys like Chaos cards... So I thought I might as well make one. [spoiler=....] [AUTO](VC):(Soulblast 1) When this card attack hits, you may pay the cost. If you do, send all (RG) your opponent has with less [Power] than this unit to the Drop Zone. [CONT](VC) If you have a «DARK» or «LIGHT» card in your soul, this unit gains [Power] +500 and it's abilities cannot be negated. [/spoiler] AH! W-wait! That's the wrong effect. This is just too embarrassing... [spoiler=ACTUAL effect.] 2 Level 4 Monsters When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy all other monsters your opponent controls with less ATK than this card. If this card has a DARK OR LIGHT monster as one of its Xyz Materials: It card gains 500 ATK, the activation of its effect cannot be negated, and it cannot be removed from the field during the Battle Phase. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
death00 Posted November 12, 2013 Report Share Posted November 12, 2013 i really like it, although the dark attribute add ons feel a bit op Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 12, 2013 Report Share Posted November 12, 2013 That's not exactly what I thought it'd be when I heard a Chaos card, that happened to be an Xyz, because CXyzs. It sounds a tad overpowered. Summoner Monk an Extra Sword or something, and Xyz Summon a 3900 ATK generic Rank 4 Raigeki that cannot be negated and won't be destroyed by battle (because that'd count as leaving the field during the Battle Phase. It also is safe from D Prison and Mirror Force when it attacks. On a different note, I like how when you run out of Xyz Materials, she's an easy route towards Dark Fairy Cheer Girl. Even though this card is much more powerful than Dark Fairy Cheer Girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Well, I don't think I can stop the Extra Sword problem. Perhaps if I change so the DARK/LIGHT boosts only happen when the Xyz Mats are only LIGHT or DARK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted November 13, 2013 Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Definitely. And I think making it less generic will also help(and I believe that a field clearer shouldn't ever be generic. Screw Belzebuth). Maybe 2 LIGHT or DARK Level 4 monsters, or heck, 1 DARK Level 4 and 1 LIGHT level 4 if you want to get complicated. Nice concept though, but the last effect is kinda too much. Your opponent still need to be able to answer this somehow, and 2900 is enough to clear most of these day meta's field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted November 13, 2013 Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 VANGUARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looks good by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted November 13, 2013 Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Well, I don't think I can stop the Extra Sword problem. Perhaps if I change so the DARK/LIGHT boosts only happen when the Xyz Mats are only LIGHT or DARK? That should work. I'm thinking that you could change her first effect so it destroys monsters on both sides. That way she would be more of an Xyz version of "Red Jeweled Dragon Archfiend" who must attack first to trigger the effect, and would discourage the player from summoning her if he/she controls other monsters (unless he/she doesn't mind them being destroyed). This should make her slightly more balanced, but would still remain as a generic field clearer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2013 Bump. Made a fix. Just one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted November 14, 2013 Report Share Posted November 14, 2013 That change.. uhh... seems to imply that you can have, let's say, DARK + EARTH, and as soon as the EARTH is detached, the condition gets fulfilled for the boost, and it goes back to how it was. Just saying.... I think the Battle Phase protection is actually the main issue it has, looking at it well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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