Yu-Gi-Oh! Exiles [OOC|PG-16|Started|Accepting]

[BANZAI!!!!]

Sorry about the inactivity everyone. I've been rather busy for the past few days. Should finish cleaning up the op and doing reviews today.

[Kari-chan]

[spoiler=Raena]

Duelist

"I won't loose "

Name: Raena Hazashi

Gender: Female(But due to her outfit and voice disruptor in her helmet her gender is ambiguous)

Age: 20

Height: 4'11

Physical description:
[spoiler=Armored][/spoiler]
[Spoiler= Unarmored][/spoiler]
Through the use of wrapping and a small chest Raena is indistinguishable from a male while in her armor.

[spoiler= Personality] Rae as she likes others to call her, has a cheery and simple minded disposition. Raena has great aspirations, she hopes to become a top ranked hunter like Morrigan and despite his violent and antisocial disposition she cant help but admire Seth's combat record. Despite her happy disposition she doesn't like speaking about her past and will dodge the subject by dispersing or threatening others with violence, comically of course. When Raena enters combat, her entire demeanor changes she turns more cold and calculating. Her mind becomes completely focused as she thinks of only her victory. Tho her mind is only on becoming the best at CONSNT, Raena often thinks back on her days training the thought of if she would ever return to her family. She sees the bonds between others and their Exiles and sometimes wishes that she could have that too. For the time being Raena's goals are faced with becoming the strongest she can be.

 

Another interesting quirk of Raena's personality is that she tends to idolize people and quickly forget when she meets some one else just as cool. The problem with the girl is Raena needs to learn to idolize and believe in her self then her true potential will be released.[/spoiler]


Faction: CONSNT

[Spoiler= Back story]
 Raena is a member of one of the last remaining ninja clans after the calamity. Raena was raised in the secret art of the Ninja, since she was six years old. The training she underwent would make most grown men quit but as it would come to show despite wanting to quit herself plenty of times she ended up completing the rigorous training. At the age of twelve she had completed her basic training and was taught by her father advanced forms of Ninjitsu. By the age of seventeen she had grown in to a fine ninja, her skills that of a high class Ninja. Raena could blend in to the shadows without a moments notice, she could create elaborate illusions, her combat skills were top notch. Her father still did not think she was skilled enough. Unbeknownst to her her father saw a premonition of a dark shadow appearing to envelope the land this image was what begrudgingly on Raena's eighteenth birthday sent her to CONSNT to get combat training. This was achieved through her fathers high end connections.

 Her father and their family had never been that rich nor were they out in the open. Not a ninja's way. But due to he rise and need for the Ninja's skills many warlords and even CONSNT used the Ninja's skills to further their positions. This gave them a reputation that no one wanted to really cross. She received training in Combat Dueling and since she did not have an Exile they tailored her Card Pool to assist her in monster hunting. With Raena's Ninja skills she was able to make quite a name for her self, getting up to fifty out of fifty successful hunts all without an Exile to assist her. Raena was assigned to the guard detail at the stadium of the Combat Duel Tourney. [/spoiler]

[spoiler= Card Pool]
Ebikyo drakmord x1
Darkworld shackles x2
MST x2
Dust Tornado x2
Magic Jammer x2
Flint x2

Axe of Despair x2

Eternal Rest x2
Smashing ground. x2

(To be changed with more ninjitsu cards when her story grows.) [/spoiler]

 

Theme: [S]He's a Ninja

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v87wjZqm3vg[/spoiler]

 

Fixed for the better.

[BANZAI!!!!]

welp, back to the grind. I have plenty of free time over then next day or so, so expect things from me. Working on whatever apps i have left to do. However, i'm still waiting on finished apps from Justice Master and Finalfan, and possibly Toyo, as well as corrections from Kano, Aqua, and Raine. Id' like to have all these in and done before i get IC up so that nobody needs to play catch-up. If any of you can't/aren't going to be finishing your apps, please let me know so that we can proceed without waiting for you.

 

EDIT: Many thanks to Mugen for fixing (and breaking) the op while i was busy. we have the app in code now.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

Funfax: I've been writing my app since Monday. Got the concept down, but I'm having a lot of difficulty with the personality.

[Delibirb]

Alrighty, I think i've got these two down now. I have a plan for another duo, but for now this will be my one and only pair.

 

[spoiler="Human: Janai Kroses"]

"Now let the master of control hide you forever! Relinquished, Black Illusion Uppercut!"

Name: Janai Kroses

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Height: 6" 1'

[spoiler=Physical description]

Weight: 111 lbs[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality] Janai masquerades as a ridiculous and clever trickster with a humorous and careless personality. Behind this exterior, he is a ruthless servant to Diabolos, wielding powerful Ritual and Fusion Exiles. His expertise lies in clever stratagems and elaborate ruses, as opposed to direct combat. While he wears a Combat Disk stolen from a murdered CONSNT agent, he often does not reveal himself in the fight, preferring to have his opponent's back to him, rather than his own to his opponent, taking violent and calculated swings with his sharpened duel disk at the most critical of moments. However, Janai is prone to violent and enraged outbursts when he loses control of a situation he thought indomitable. As a result, his Exiles often must attempt to keep him focused, as opposed to blindly flailing in delusion. Although he was essentially forced into the service of Diabolos, he remains loyal to him, as well as to his Exile, whom he would give up his soul to rescue from combustion. While described as insane by those who have seen his true nature, these traits of loyalty and trust make Janai believe himself to be morally just. [/spoiler]

Faction: Diabolos

[spoiler=Backstory] Janai grew up learning magic tricks and performing for the fellow children of Kinsfield. He would construct elaborate props himself, with material stolen from the local warlords. This of course eventually led to his capture, at which point his family chose to disown him rather than face the punishment of the cruel tyrants. Captured, he practiced further his art of misdirection, leaning off of his wooden props and into sleight of hand, voice throwing, and eventually, all the tools he needed to escape, sailing to Ophia. It was on the ocean that the ship he had stowed away upon encountered agents of Diabolos, and in exchange for a powerful Exile, he chose to serve this new master. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Card Pool]

1 Relinquished (Bound Exile named Devoured)

1 Thousand-Eyes Restrict

1 Polymerization

1 Kaiser Colosseum

1 Royal Decree

1 Black Illusion Ritual

1 Thousand-Eyes Idol

1 Ritual Weapon

1 Djinn Prognosticator of Rituals

1 Djinn Demolisher of Rituals

1 Samsara

1 Secret Village of the Spellcasters

1 Fulfillment of the Contract

1 Scapegoat

2 Spellbook of Wisdom

2 Effect Veiler

 

[/spoiler]

(If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: Relinquished

Misc. info/fun facts: Janai is able to play the part of an innocent individual most of the time, fooling even members of CONSNT. However, in a duel, he loses control of this guise, reverting to his maniacal trickster personality and, if in danger, his enraged and weaker state of mind.

[/spoiler]

[spoiler="Exile: Devoured, the Relinquished"]

"Your blood and bones are mine..."

Name: Devoured

Age: 100

Gender: Male

Card:

Exile Class: Bound

(If Bound Exile) Owner of card: Janai Kroses

Faction: Diabolos

[spoiler=Physical Description] Devoured is more of a reddish hue. His talons are white as opposed to silver, resembling teeth, and have an additional joint allowing for bending into fists. His wings are larger and more pronounced.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality] Devoured has served Diabolos since his Black Illusion Ritual was performed. Cast by an arrogant warlord who wished to attack and take control of all of Ophia, Devoured immediately attacked and consumed his caster, resulting in his reddish hue. Unlike all other creatures a Relinquished absorbs, its first meal determines its personality. In this case, he became a ruthless, power-hungry beast of an Exile, turning to Diabolos's cause in the rule and enslavement of the world. He is very intent on the victories of his duels, and ever since he became aware of Janai's tendency to lose his temper, has been far more irritable. However he respects and admires Janai's deranged and chaotic personalities, and revels in the lies he spins as Devoured hides in the dark. In combat, he takes joy in bending the will of his opponent's Exiles, having them attack their master or, to defend himself, attack Janai. As Devoured is aware of Janai's complete faith in him, he is openly willing to sacrifice him in order to survive. His loyalties may lie with Diabolos, but he will never die for him as Janai would.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Backstory] When Devoured was cast by a power-hungry warlord, he consumed him, as all Relinquished do. This resulted in the determination of Devoured as a warmongering tyrannical envoy of darkness. He returned the the world of the Exiles, where he may find more Relinquished, not to befriend, but further consume. Here he learned of the war being waged back on his birthplace, and the goals of those fighting in it. He resolved that in order to quench his thirst for power, he would join Diabolos in the conquering of the humans' world. In this fight he was assigned as a bound Exile to a human who shared in his thirst for power and destruction, Janai.  [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Exile Ability] Devoured, like all Relinquished, can copy the powers and strengths of Exiles he comes in contact with, but he must cycle through these abilities, and they are never as potent as the originals. However, with his vast library he can often find another Exile's power to use to his advantage. As Thousand-Eyes Restrict, he does not need to come in contact with other Exiles to copy their power, and Exiles and humans near him are heavily encumbered, making ti difficult to move and fight. Devoured can absorb a human's health to feed his own, provided the human willingly gives it to him. [/spoiler]

Misc. info/fun facts: If Devoured's card would combust due to his failure in a combat duel, he can completely take the soul of Janai in order to rescue himself, but Janai must be incapacitated for him to do this.[/spoiler]

[Kari-chan]

Toko if you paste what you have for the personality and your ideas for it we can help =3

[BANZAI!!!!]

Funfax: I've been writing my app since Monday. Got the concept down, but I'm having a lot of difficulty with the personality.

Sweet deal. Be happy to lend a hand if you need it.

 

 

 

Alrighty, I think i've got these two down now. I have a plan for another duo, but for now this will be my one and only pair.

 

[spoiler="Human: Janai Kroses"]

"Now let the master of control hide you forever! Relinquished, Black Illusion Uppercut!"

Name: Janai Kroses

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Height: 6" 1'

[spoiler=Physical description]

Weight: 111 lbs[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality] Janai masquerades as a ridiculous and clever trickster with a humorous and careless personality. Behind this exterior, he is a ruthless servant to Diabolos, wielding powerful Ritual and Fusion Exiles. His expertise lies in clever stratagems and elaborate ruses, as opposed to direct combat. While he wears a Combat Disk stolen from a murdered CONSNT agent, he often does not reveal himself in the fight, preferring to have his opponent's back to him, rather than his own to his opponent, taking violent and calculated swings with his sharpened duel disk at the most critical of moments. However, Janai is prone to violent and enraged outbursts when he loses control of a situation he thought indomitable. As a result, his Exiles often must attempt to keep him focused, as opposed to blindly flailing in delusion. Although he was essentially forced into the service of Diabolos, he remains loyal to him, as well as to his Exile, whom he would give up his soul to rescue from combustion. While described as insane by those who have seen his true nature, these traits of loyalty and trust make Janai believe himself to be morally just. [/spoiler]

Faction: Diabolos

[spoiler=Backstory] Janai grew up learning magic tricks and performing for the fellow children of Kinsfield. He would construct elaborate props himself, with material stolen from the local warlords. This of course eventually led to his capture, at which point his family chose to disown him rather than face the punishment of the cruel tyrants. Captured, he practiced further his art of misdirection, leaning off of his wooden props and into sleight of hand, voice throwing, and eventually, all the tools he needed to escape, sailing to Ophia. It was on the ocean that the ship he had stowed away upon encountered agents of Diabolos, and in exchange for a powerful Exile, he chose to serve this new master. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Card Pool]

1 Relinquished (Bound Exile named Devoured)

1 Thousand-Eyes Restrict

1 Polymerization

1 Kaiser Colosseum

1 Royal Decree

1 Black Illusion Ritual

1 Thousand-Eyes Idol

1 Ritual Weapon

1 Djinn Prognosticator of Rituals

1 Djinn Demolisher of Rituals

1 Samsara

1 Secret Village of the Spellcasters

1 Fulfillment of the Contract

1 Scapegoat

2 Spellbook of Wisdom

2 Effect Veiler

 

[/spoiler]

(If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: Relinquished

Misc. info/fun facts: Janai is able to play the part of an innocent individual most of the time, fooling even members of CONSNT. However, in a duel, he loses control of this guise, reverting to his maniacal trickster personality and, if in danger, his enraged and weaker state of mind.

[/spoiler]

[spoiler="Exile: Devoured, the Relinquished"]

"Your blood and bones are mine..."

Name: Devoured

Age: 100

Gender: Male

Card:

Exile Class: Bound

(If Bound Exile) Owner of card: Janai Kroses

Faction: Diabolos

[spoiler=Physical Description] Devoured is more of a reddish hue. His talons are white as opposed to silver, resembling teeth, and have an additional joint allowing for bending into fists. His wings are larger and more pronounced.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality] Devoured has served Diabolos since his Black Illusion Ritual was performed. Cast by an arrogant warlord who wished to attack and take control of all of Ophia, Devoured immediately attacked and consumed his caster, resulting in his reddish hue. Unlike all other creatures a Relinquished absorbs, its first meal determines its personality. In this case, he became a ruthless, power-hungry beast of an Exile, turning to Diabolos's cause in the rule and enslavement of the world. He is very intent on the victories of his duels, and ever since he became aware of Janai's tendency to lose his temper, has been far more irritable. However he respects and admires Janai's deranged and chaotic personalities, and revels in the lies he spins as Devoured hides in the dark. In combat, he takes joy in bending the will of his opponent's Exiles, having them attack their master or, to defend himself, attack Janai. As Devoured is aware of Janai's complete faith in him, he is openly willing to sacrifice him in order to survive. His loyalties may lie with Diabolos, but he will never die for him as Janai would.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Backstory] When Devoured was cast by a power-hungry warlord, he consumed him, as all Relinquished do. This resulted in the determination of Devoured as a warmongering tyrannical envoy of darkness. He returned the the world of the Exiles, where he may find more Relinquished, not to befriend, but further consume. Here he learned of the war being waged back on his birthplace, and the goals of those fighting in it. He resolved that in order to quench his thirst for power, he would join Diabolos in the conquering of the humans' world. In this fight he was assigned as a bound Exile to a human who shared in his thirst for power and destruction, Janai.  [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Exile Ability] Devoured, like all Relinquished, can temporarily control the wills of other Exiles, forcing them into attacking their own shadow or, their master. However, he cannot hold this power over them for very long at a time, and is left defenseless as he rests this skill. He can however absorb a human's health to feed his own, provided the human willingly gives it to him. [/spoiler]

Misc. info/fun facts: If Devoured's card would combust due to his failure in a combat duel, he can completely take the soul of Janai in order to rescue himself, but Janai must be incapacitated for him to do this.[/spoiler]

 

Accepted, although we need to have a discussion as to how TER will work when used as a summon transformation, since its rather powerful. Preferably sooner rather than later. Adding it to the op when i do some cleanup.

[BANZAI!!!!]

Broken's other review is done. I think that's all of them other than those who still need to make alterations or have not turned things in yet.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Raena]

Duelist

"I'll find you and take you back Onii-chan! "

Name: Raena Hazashi

Gender: Female(But due to her outfit and voice disruptor in her helmet her gender is ambiguous)

Age: 20

Height: 4'11

Physical description:
[spoiler=Armored][/spoiler]
[Spoiler= Unarmored][/spoiler]
Through the use of wrapping and a small chest Raena is indistinguishable from a male while in her armor.

[spoiler= Personality] Rae as she likes others to call her, has a cheery and simple minded disposition. Raena has great aspirations, she hopes to become a top ranked hunter like Morrigan and despite his violent and antisocial disposition she cant help but admire Seth's combat record. Despite her happy disposition she doesn't like speaking about her past and will dodge the subject by dispersing or threatening others with violence, comically of course. When Raena enters combat, her entire demeanor changes she turns more cold and calculating. Her mind becomes completely focused as she thinks of only her victory. Tho her mind is only on becoming the best at CONSNT, Raena often thinks back on her days training the thought of if she would ever return to her family. She sees the bonds between others and their Exiles and sometimes wishes that she could have that too.[/spoiler]


Faction: CONSNT

[Spoiler= Back story]
 Raena is a member of one of the last remaining ninja clans after the calamity. Raena was raised in the secret art of the Ninja, since she was six years old. The training she underwent would make most grown men quit but as it would come to show despite wanting to quit herself plenty of times she ended up completing the rigorous training. At the age of twelve she had completed her basic training and was taught by her father advanced forms of Ninjitsu. By the age of seventeen she had grown in to a fine ninja, her skills that of a high class Ninja. Raena could blend in to the shadows without a moments notice, she could create elaborate illusions, her combat skills were top notch. Her father still did not think she was skilled enough. Unbeknownst to her her father saw a premonition of a dark shadow appearing to envelope the land this image was what begrudgingly on Raena's eighteenth birthday sent her to CONSNT to get combat training. This was achieved through her fathers high end connections.

 Her father and their family had never been that rich nor were they out in the open. Not a ninja's way. But due to he rise and need for the Ninja's skills many warlords and even CONSNT used the Ninja's skills to further their positions. This gave them a reputation that no one wanted to really cross. She received training in Combat Dueling and since she did not have an Exile they tailored her Card Pool to assist her in monster hunting. With Raena's Ninja skills she was able to make quite a name for her self, getting up to fifty out of fifty successful hunts all without an Exile to assist her. Raena was assigned to the guard detail at the stadium of the Combat Duel Tourney. [/spoiler]

[spoiler= Card Pool]
Ebikyo drakmord x2
Darkworld shackles x2
MST x2
Seven tools of the Bandit x2
Magic Jammer x2
Preperation of rites x1
Axe of fools x2
Impenetrable attack x2
Smashing ground. x2

(To be changed with more ninjitsu cards when her story grows.) [/spoiler]

 

Theme: [S]He's a Ninja

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v87wjZqm3vg[/spoiler]

 

Fixed for the better.

Eh, not fixed yet. Personality is still only 5 lines. as well, she has no exile (Which is not what i recommended, but can be done i suppose) which makes most of her cardpool useless. Either add an exile bio or alter the cardpool so that she is capable of fighting exiles without an exile of her own. Smashing ground is good, as is magic jammer and drakmord,  but the rest are useless or counterproductive without an allied exile to cast them on. other monster removal and/or negation spells would be more helpful should you decide to to without an exile.

 

Imma go clean up the OP now.

[The Warden]

Okay, I swapped out Breakthrough for an extra Lance. And I altered Stockholm Syndrome so that pain and damage is shared with the target, rather than completely transferred.

[BANZAI!!!!]

Okay, I swapped out Breakthrough for an extra Lance. And I altered Stockholm Syndrome so that pain and damage is shared with the target, rather than completely transferred.

Okay, I swapped out Breakthrough for an extra Lance. And I altered Stockholm Syndrome so that pain and damage is shared with the target, rather than completely transferred.

Accepted. Ill be adding them to the op when i finish my edits.

On another note, due to my new schedule being rather full, i think it would help this rp greatly if i had a co-gm to help things run smoother. Would anyone be willing to lend me a hand?

[Lunar Origins]

I would like to co-gm.

[Aqua Girl]

Room for me maybe? Seems much more solid.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

[spoiler=Lisa Moirae]

"Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. Money doesn't make hell go round, but your Exile might. Hand it over, and maybe God will forgive you."
Name: Elizabeth Moirae (Prefers to be called Lisa)
Gender: F
Age: 22
Height: 168 CM

Weight: 57 Kg

[spoiler=Physical description]

 

[spoiler=Personality]

Due to having grown up n a church, Lisa was brought up to be a kind, soft-spoken and nice young lady always willing to help others. An optimist at heart, she is almost always seen with a bright smile on her face. While her attitude is normally pleasant, her morality is sometimes questionable. She is the type of person who can make death threats with a smile while claiming that she is merely carrying out God's will. Her cheery demeanor means that she is usually friendly, though if you do what she deems as sinful, then she would pursue you and give you 'divine retribution', according to her. Lisa loves Exile Combat and the thrill of it, though she still prefers full-on person-to-person battles with guns and explosions. 

 

Surprisingly, Lisa is rather easy to bribe. An Exile collector by trade, offering her a Bound Exile is usually an easy way to get out of trouble with her. Despite having over 10 Bound Exiles, she treats all of them safe for Jain as a mere object. Lisa is a rather good marksman, especially with her twin submachine guns, Gabriel and Raphael. Despite her somewhat low regard for Human and especially Exile life, she has a soft spot for animals, especially for cats and rabbits, to name a few. 

[/spoiler]

 
Faction: Independent

[spoiler=Backstory]

As far as she could remember, Lisa was brought up in a church in Gaea by the nuns of the place. Her childhood is mostly normal, she was part of the church choir and often spends her days helping those in her neighborhood. The church has a deep hatred towards Exiles, especially Rouge ones, believing them to be creations of the devil. However, Lisa knew the place's stand on Exiles to be bullshit, and she eventually picked up a Bound Exile of Jain the Lightsworn Paladin

[/spoiler]

Card Pool 

 

(If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile:
Misc. info/fun facts:

[/spoiler]

WIP because-- OH GOSH IS THAT MY PLANE TO JAPAN?!

 

[BANZAI!!!!]

I would like to co-gm.

You're hired. Gonna add that info to the op as well.

 

 

Room for me maybe? Seems much more solid.

Sure, but there will be zero tolerance for any shenanigans this time. Understood?

 

 

 

[spoiler=Lisa Moirae]

"Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. Money doesn't make hell go round, but your Exile might. Hand it over, and maybe God will forgive you."
Name: Elizabeth Moirae (Prefers to be called Lisa)
Gender: F
Age: 22
Height: 168 CM

Weight: 57 Kg

[spoiler=Physical description]

 

[spoiler=Personality]

Due to having grown up n a church, Lisa was brought up to be a kind, soft-spoken and nice young lady always willing to help others. An optimist at heart, she is almost always seen with a bright smile on her face. While her attitude is normally pleasant, her morality is sometimes questionable. She is the type of person who can make death threats with a smile while claiming that she is merely carrying out God's will. Her cheery demeanor means that she is usually friendly, though if you do what she deems as sinful, then she would pursue you and give you 'divine retribution', according to her. Lisa loves Exile Combat and the thrill of it, though she still prefers full-on person-to-person battles with guns and explosions. 

 

Surprisingly, Lisa is rather easy to bribe. An Exile collector by trade, offering her a Bound Exile is usually an easy way to get out of trouble with her. Despite having over 10 Bound Exiles, she treats all of them safe for Jain as a mere object. Lisa is a rather good marksman, especially with her twin submachine guns, Gabriel and Raphael. Despite her somewhat low regard for Human and especially Exile life, she has a soft spot for animals, especially for cats and rabbits, to name a few. 

[/spoiler]

 
Faction: Independent

[spoiler=Backstory]

As far as she could remember, Lisa was brought up in a church in Gaea by the nuns of the place. Her childhood is mostly normal, she was part of the church choir and often spends her days helping those in her neighborhood. The church has a deep hatred towards Exiles, especially Rouge ones, believing them to be creations of the devil. However, Lisa knew the place's stand on Exiles to be bullshit, and she eventually picked up a Bound Exile of Jain the Lightsworn Paladin

[/spoiler]

Card Pool 

 

(If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile:
Misc. info/fun facts:

[/spoiler]

WIP because-- OH GOSH IS THAT MY PLANE TO JAPAN?!

 

A wild Toyo app has appeared!

[Kari-chan]

"You never replied to the IM." Gives a slightly agitated look. "You do that a lot. lol"

 

Am I accepted? In the IM I said that the edits were made and the app was updated.

[Aqua Girl]

"Optional Quote from your character here"


[b]Name:[/b]

[b]Age:[/b] (if applicable)

[b]Gender:[/b]

[b]Card:[/b]

 
[b]Exile Class:[/b] (Visitor and latent-class exiles are forbidden, as they are more for my use as plot devices)

 
 
[b]Owner of card:[/b] (If Bound Exile)

 
[b]Faction:[/b] (CONSNT, Diabolos, or Independant)

 
[spoiler=Physical Description]

(Specify any differences between the exile's appearance and their card art. If they are identical to the art, say so)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality]

(6 lines minimum)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Back story]

(Just a brief summary of your character's past. where they come from, what they did before, etc.)[/spoiler]

 
[b]Exile Ability:[/b]

(Name and describe the exile's Exile Ability in as much detail as possible.)

 
[b]Misc. info/fun facts:[/b]

I figured I'd offer an olive branch of sorts. Seeing as how busy you are I fixed and made necessary edits to your coded app.

 

I also despite the rough patch we had believe I would make an excellent CoGM That is entirely up to you tho.

 

 

I'll finish my app soon, I have work all day tho so not really an option today.

[BANZAI!!!!]

"You never replied to the IM." Gives a slightly agitated look. "You do that a lot. lol"

 

Am I accepted? In the IM I said that the edits were made and the app was updated.

*returns agitated look* I have a lot of stuff to look over and not all that much time in which to do so, so i havent actually had time to give your app a good looking over. You'll just have to be patient.

 

 

"Optional Quote from your character here"


[b]Name:[/b]

[b]Age:[/b] (if applicable)

[b]Gender:[/b]

[b]Card:[/b]

 
[b]Exile Class:[/b] (Visitor and latent-class exiles are forbidden, as they are more for my use as plot devices)

 
 
[b]Owner of card:[/b] (If Bound Exile)

 
[b]Faction:[/b] (CONSNT, Diabolos, or Independant)

 
[spoiler=Physical Description]

(Specify any differences between the exile's appearance and their card art. If they are identical to the art, say so)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Personality]

(6 lines minimum)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Back story]

(Just a brief summary of your character's past. where they come from, what they did before, etc.)[/spoiler]

 
[b]Exile Ability:[/b]

(Name and describe the exile's Exile Ability in as much detail as possible.)

 
[b]Misc. info/fun facts:[/b]

I figured I'd offer an olive branch of sorts. Seeing as how busy you are I fixed and made necessary edits to your coded app.

 

might/might not have to remove the app in code from the op because spoiler limits, but thanks anyway.

[Aqua Girl]

I think she intended the agitated look and such to be playful seeing as she used lol at the end. Not entirely sure tho.

 

I'm Honestly not trying to further my position or anything but it seems Poison is GMing their own RP so tho I doubt it would be that hard for Poison to multitask I have nothing really under my belt at the moment and think I'd be a good choice. As I stated before its all up to whether you trust me enough.

[Aqua Girl]

In coordination with the rule I wanted to inform you, I plan on making a Warlord from Kinsfeld. The warlord has slight connections with CONSNT. She intends to unify Kinsfeld, under her rule obviously. Her goals align with CONSNT's very well since a unified continent is much more easily controlled, leading to the uneasy but powerful treaty between her and CONSNT. Her Exile will be Legendary Six Samurai Shi-En.

[Aqua Girl]

[spoiler= Shoko]

 

"I want the children to have the world I make..... IF THEY CAN TAKE IT FROM MY COLD DEAD HANDS!"
 

Name: Shoku Enzimori
Gender: F
Age: 39
Height: 5'6

Physical description:
[spoiler= Shoku][/spoiler]

[spoiler= Shoku Mad][/spoiler]

[spoiler= personality]

(I hope this is an acceptable and original take on a characters personality traits.)

 Save for the eye-patch covering her right eye, Shoko on the outside looks completely normal. To those she is unequaled with she seems like a very mature and kind, all most nurturing. Shoko loves to see strong youth, its her greatest wish to see them inherit the world she intends to create. She often voices this fact verbally and often times unintentionally. On the other hand the people that she is well acquainted with know her real side.

 

 Shoko for a lack of better words, as such not many can describe this woman. Is a MONSTER. The ironic thing is as she states how she would like the youth to take over the world she creates, on the inside as she smiles. Shoko is thinking to her self, "Only if they take it from my cold dead HANDS!" Despite this, her words are not false she wants a world for children to not have to grow up in a world like her own, but they must be strong or the world will just crumble around them.

 

  In all actuality Shoko is ruthless, she will quite literally or figuratively cut some one down. Witch ever makes more of an impact/gives her the best results. Despite her willing to cut down anything to get to the perfect world she wants Shoko is not by any means a stupid brute. She can... No Is conniving, meticulous, intelligent and a great strategist. Her ruthless nature has earned Shoko the respect and fear of the other warlords. One thing is to be known. Shoko is not to be crossed, During Shoko's visit for the event, all CONSNT staff are warned to keep an eye on Shoko. Despite their uneasy 'treaty' they do not trust her volatile nature.

  But to fully understand Shoko Enzimori you have to know her history.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler= Back Story]

 Shoko was a very smart child, at the age of 10 she was to attend high school early. Her parents were prominent scientists and they were working on some secret project. This was something Shoko had intended to investigate when she made her Ideal world, but as that has not happened yet she put that plan on hold. Shoko was in a city far enough from the blast people did not just die from exposure when the catastrophe hit, when it did it brought the young girls world down around her, both figuratively and literally.

 

 It was just Shoko and her mother, her father was at his lab when this happened Shoko assumed he died since he was so much closer to the event than them. Her mother heard from a few survivors that they had met up with of a continent that had been untouched by the disaster and so the group moved on towards the Eden in this hell. Shoko and her mother were very close before the event, but that changed and time went on the young girl felt like her mother saw her as a threat. They had food shortages constantly and her mother would eat most of Shoko's rations claiming she was younger and did not need as much. The world had changed people like this all over, but Shoko began to resent her mother. After the food stealing went on, eventually Shoko attacked her mother to prevent her from stealing her food. People exclaimed, "So this is our world? Mother and daughter fighting for food..."

 

 Shoko grew up in this hell after four years of traveling the other survivors and Shoko began to give up hope. They began to rummage through an abandoned city for supplies one day. Buildings were crumbling around the young girl and the pack of survivors. In what Shoko now assumes was a last ditch attempt to redeem herself. Shoko's mother pushed her out of danger, but the building crumbled around them killing all but a few of the survivors, the previous leader now dead Shoko took up the mantle and told the others their previous goal was faulty and they should try  sutorvive here. Despite it being abandoned and how young she was, Shoko succeeded, their little village sprung up fast, they had access to water and a place to sleep. With the few gardening and home improvement stores they were able to grow food and eventually they began to get cozy.

 

 Flash forward about ten years the city is booming once again. They have people working on projects to make the city better they managed to get an agricultural engineer to improve their crops a few years back, they had trade from other survivor camps, all was good. They had strong walls and makeshift weapons. Shoko had found a real forged Damascus steel katana and that was her weapon that she trained with for many years. That's when the monsters appeared. Suddenly they were under siege by monsters every night, when the walls began to give some odd miracle happened. It was a man in a bright uniform, he jumped off of a motor bike of some kind, and with a brilliant flash he brought out a creature of his own, this creature had armor of crimson read and they fought in perfect unison.

 

 This man was outnumbered and, despite how strong he was and how the people regarded him as a savior, Shoko could see he and his creature were being overwhelmed, The man was stabbed in the side, but with brilliant movement he slew the last of them. The man looked back to the people and gave a thumbs up to show all was well. When suddenly another more powerful creature appeared (Dark Highlander). With a single attack the creature took a chunk out of the man',s side. The crimson creature roared at its partners damage and struck out at the dark armored creature. Locked blades sparked as the vilagers watched in horror, but one did not, Shoko. as she saw the creature strike down the man she jumped forward and bolted over the tall walls. As the crimson armored creature held off the monster and with three very fast and brilliantly bright slashes cut the thing's leg and arms off leaving the thing open to be cut in two by the crimson figure.

 

 The man with the last of his life told Shoko who he was, and realizing her potential asked that she take his Combat Disk and keep the people safe in his stead. He turned to the crimson creature and said, "Shi-En go with her keep our dream alive...." The man then passed, the previously silent creature fell to his knees and roared, "Kyuzen!!!!!!!"

 

 Eventually Shoko was approached by CONSNT and asked for Ryuzen's body, but Shoko had long since given him a burial. CONSNT through much communication and deals that somehow ended more in Shoko's favor, were able to make a treaty with one of the most powerful and definitely most feared warlords of the wastes. Shoko's power over the other warlords makes CONSNT uneasy with her potential.

[/spoiler]

Faction: Independent

 

[spoiler= Card Pool]
Kagemusha of the Six Samurai x1

Legendary Six Samurai Kageki x1

Grandmaster of the Six Samurai x1

Six Samurai - Yaichi x1

Six Samurai - Kamon x1

Hand of the Six Samurai x1

Enishi, Shien's Chancellor x1

Shien's Squire x2

Legendary Ebon Steed x2

Six Strike Triple Impact x2

Smashing Ground x1

MST x2

Musakani Magatama x2[/spoiler]

 

(If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: Legendary Six Samurai - Shi-En
 

Misc. info/fun facts:

 

[spoiler= Reg theme]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7M3DmAaUMjE&list=PLCF1D68300FF8A53B&index=9[/spoiler]

[spoiler= Battle Theme]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJtdagM3Ues[/spoiler]

[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=Shi-En]

"Optional Quote from your character here"
 
Name: Shi-EN
Age:
Gender: Male
Card: Lgendary Six Samurai Shi-En
Exile Class: Bound
Owner of card: Shoko Enzimori
Faction: Independent
Physical Description: The same.
 
[spoiler=Personality]

Shi-En was very abrasive to everyone. Now he's abrasive to everybody. Save Shoko that is.  

 

  Originally Shi-En was very lighthearted and dreamed of making a perfect world with Kyuzen Shi-En's first partner. His heart was of the noble lord he was once in the spirit world. When he met Kyuzen, Shi-En found a kinship with this human he had not expected. They became close friends fighting alongside each other. Eventually they taught others to fight alongside an exile. Once trained the new government sent out these HUNTERS to keep the peace and try to hobble their world back together. Shi-En and Kyuzen are what you could say the first force of Exile hunters sent out to expand CONSNT's territory.

 

(If this is too much I'll take it off, but I feel it adds Flavor)  

 

  The day Kyuzen died was the hardest moment in Shi-En's life. He became emotionally blocked off, then when he did slip and let out all his emotions he would explode and let out his pent up anger on what he fought. When he learned that Shoko had the same goals as Kyuzen. The hatred and walls he put up came crumbling down, Shi-En began to let Shoko in. Though his feelings towards others was still very, abrasive at best.

[/spoiler]
 
[spoiler=Back Story]
 Initially Shi-En and Shoko had a rough time adapting to one another, they had Issues with communication and Shoko's inexperience and Shi-En's grieving made their synchronization low. Shi-En kept blocked off emotionally and that allowed them little contact. Eventually when fighting off monsters as usual Shoko and Shi-En battled separately. When suddenly Buster Blader struck down and created a shock-wave that sent shrapnel in to Shoko's eye and the image of her dying like Kyuzen was too much for him. Shoko was wounded this sent Shi-En into a blood rage, and slaughtered the creature that should have been much stronger than him. 

 

 As he stayed by Shoko's side Shi-En listened to how she had an ideal world, a world where children would never have to suffer as she did. With those words Shi-En wept, Shoko had the same dream as Kyuzen. From then on Shi-En and Shoko began to bond like Shi-En had once with Kyuzen. He trained her in how to properly use her weapon and as they finally began to synch up and became a formidable team.[/spoiler]
 
Exile Ability: Flame of the Royals (Always active.)
 
 Mist of Maekumo is a simple but powerful ability, if a spell/trap would affect Shi-En or if he would be attacked he can sacrifice one Six Samurai Monster to negate the card or effect (the card is burned after use)

 

Darkness of The Blue Flame.

 

When Shoko's life force falls to a dangerous level Shi-En looses his other ability and becomes indestructible. (This ability burns the remainder or Shoko's card pool and all other cards active controlled by Shoko.)
Misc. info/fun facts:[/spoiler]

[Lunar Origins]

As the new co-gamemaster of this roleplay, I will be the reviewer for your application.  Your review, and, subsequently, your approval or denial, will be updated on this post once you finish Shi-En's application.

[Aqua Girl]

[spoiler=Shi-En]

"Optional Quote from your character here"
 
Name: Shi-EN
Age:
Gender: Male
Card: Lgendary Six Samurai Shi-En
Exile Class: Bound
Owner of card: Shoko Enzimori
Faction: Independent
Physical Description: The same.
 
[spoiler=Personality]
Shi-En was very abrasive to everyone. Now hes abrasive to everybody but Shoko.
 
  Originally Shi-En was very lighthearted and dreamed of making a perfect world with Kyuzen Shi-En's first partner. His heart was of the noble lord he was once in the spirit world. When he met Kyuzen, Shi-En found a kinship with this human he had not expected. They became close friends fighting alongside each other. Eventually they taught others to fight along side an exile.
 
  The day Kyuzen died was the hardest moment in Shi-En's life. He became emotionally blocked off, then when he did slip and let out all his emotions he would explode and let out his pent up anger on what he fought. When he learned that Shoko had the same goals as Kyuzen. The hatred and walls he put up came crumbling down, Shi-En began to let Shoko in. Though his feelings towards others was still very, abrasive at best.[/spoiler]
 
[spoiler=Back Story]
 Initially Shi-En and Shoko had a rough time adapting to one another, they had Issues with communication and Shoko's inexperience and Shi-En's grieving made their synchronization low. Shi-En kept blocked off emotionally and that allowed them little contact. Eventually when fighting off monsters Shoko was wounded this sent Shi-En in to a rage, and slaughtered the creature that should have been much stronger than him. As he stayed by Shoko's side Shi-En listened to how Shoko had an Ideal world, a world where children would never have to suffer as she did.

 With those words Shi-En wept. Shoko had the same dream as Kyuzen. From then on Shi-En and Shoko began to bond like Shi-En had once with Kyuzen. He trained her in how to properly use her weapon and as they finally began to synch up and became a formidable team.[/spoiler]
 
Exile Ability: Mist of Maekumo (Always active.)
 
 Mist of Maekumo is a simple but powerful ability.  When there is another Six Samurai Monster in play all damage that would be done to Shi-En is halved. Respectively if a spell/trap would affect Shi-En or if he would be attacked he can sacrifice one Six Samurai Monster to negate the card or effect.

Misc. info/fun facts:[/spoiler]

[Aqua Girl]

The thing is being stupid I'm imputing the spoilers correctly...

[Lunar Origins]

Please refrain from double or triple posting in this thread in the future; it's in the rules of YCM and it could lead to warnings.  I will have your review up later tonight.

[BANZAI!!!!]

[spoiler= Shoko]

 

"I want the children to have the world I make..... IF THEY CAN TAKE IT FROM MY COLD DEAD HANDS!"
 

Name: Shoku Enzimori
Gender: F
Age: 39
Height: 5'6

Physical description:
[spoiler= Shoku][/spoiler]

[spoiler= Shoku Mad][/spoiler]

[spoiler= personality]

(I hope this is an acceptable and original take on a characters personality traits.)

 Save for the eye-patch covering her right eye, Shoko on the outside looks completely normal. To those she is unequaled with she seems like a very mature and kind, all most nurturing. Shoko loves to see strong youth, its her greatest wish to see them inherit the world she intends to create. She often voices this fact verbally and often times unintentionally. On the other hand the people that she is well acquainted with know her real side.

 

 Shoko for a lack of better words, as such not many can describe this woman. Is a MONSTER. The ironic thing is as she states how she would like the youth to take over the world she creates, on the inside as she smiles. Shoko is thinking to her self, "Only if they take it from my cold dead HANDS!" Despite this her words are not false she wants a world for children to not have to grow up in a world like her own.

 

  In all actuality Shoko is ruthless, she will quite literally or figuratively cut some one down. Witch ever makes more of an impact/Gives her the best results. Despite her willing to cut down anything to get to the perfect world she wants Shoko is not by any means a stupid brute. She can... no Is conniving, meticulous, intelligent and a great strategist. Her ruthless nature has earned Shoko the respect and fear of the other warlords. One thing is to be known. Shoko is not to be crossed. During Shoko's visit for the event, all CONSNT staff are to not cross her and give her what she wants.

  But to fully understand Shoko Enzimori you have to know her history.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler= Back Story]

 Shoko was a very smart child, at the age of 10 she was to attend high school early. Her parents were prominent scientists and they were working on some secret project. This was something Shoko had intended to investigate when she made her Ideal world but as that has not happened yet she put that plan on hold. Shoko was in a city far enough from the blast people did not just die from exposure when the catastrophe hit, when it did it brought the young girls world down around her, both figuratively and literally.

 

 It was just Shoko and her mother, her father was at the his lab when this happened Shoko assumed he died since he was so much closer to the Event tan them. Her mother heard from a few survivors that they had met up with of a continent that had been untouched by the disaster and so the group moved on towards the Eden in this hell. Shoko and her mother were very close before the event but that changed and s time went on the young girl felt like her mother saw her as a threat. They had food shortages constantly and her mother would eat most of Shoko's rations claiming she was younger and did not need as much. The world had changed people like this all over, but Shoko began to resent her mother. After the food stealing went on eventually Shoko attacked her mother to prevent her from stealing her food. People exclaimed, "So this is our world? Mother and daughter fighting for food..."

 

 Shoko grew up in this hell and after four years of traveling people and Shoko began to give up hope. They began to rummage through a abandoned city for supplies one day. Buildings were crumbling around the young girl and the pack of survivors. In what Shoko now assumes was a last ditch attempt to redeem herself, Shoko's mother pushed Shoko out of danger but the building crumbled around them killing all but a few of the survivors, the previous leader now dead Shoko Took up the mantle and told the others their previous goal was faulty and they should try and survive here. Despite it being abandoned and how young she was, Shoko succeeded, their little village sprung up fast, They had access to water and a place to sleep. with the few gardening and home improvement stores they were able to grow food and eventually they began to get cozy.

 

 Flash forward about ten years the city is booming once again. They have people working on projects to make the city better they managed to get an agricultural engineer to improve their crops a few years back, they had trade from other survivor camps, all was good. They had strong walls and makeshift weapons. Shoko had found a real forged Damascus steel katana and that was her weapon that she trained with for many years. That's when the monsters appeared. Suddenly they were under siege by monsters every night, When the walls began to give some odd miracle happened. It was a man in a bright uniform, he jumped off of a motor bike of some kind, and with a brilliant flash he brought out a creature of his own, This creature had armor of crimson read and they fought in perfect unison.

 

 This man was out numbered and despite how strong he was and how the people regarded him as a savior, Shoko could see he and his creature were being overwhelmed, The Man was stabbed in the side but with brilliant movement. he slew the last of them. The man looked back to the people and gave a thumbs up to show all was well. When suddenly another more powerful creature appeared (Dark Highlander). With a single attack the creature took a chunk out of the mans side. The crimson creature roared at its partners damage and struck out at the dark armored creature. Locked blades sparked as the vi lagers watched but one did not, Shoko. as she saw the creature strike down the man she jumped forward and bolted over the tall walls. As the crimson armored creature held off the monster she with three very fast and brilliantly bright slashes cut the things leg and arms off leaving the thing open to be cut in two by the crimson figure.

 

 The man with the last of his life told Shoko who he was, and realising her potential asked that she take his Combat Disk and keep the people safe in his stead. He turned to the crimson creature and said, "Shi-En go with her keep our dream alive...." The man then passed, the previously silent creature fell to his knees and roared, "Kyuzen!!!!!!!"

 

 Eventually Shoko was approached by CONSNT and asked for Ryuzen's body but Shoko had long since given him a burial. They through much communication and deals that some how ended more in Shoko's favor, were able to make a treaty with one of the most powerful and definitely most feared Warlord's of the Wastes.[/spoiler]

Faction: Independent

 

[spoiler= Card Pool]
Kagemusha of the Six Samurai x1

Legendary Six Samurai Kageki x1

Grandmaster of the Six Samurai x1

Six Samurai - Yaichi x1

Six Samurai - Kamon x1

Hand of the Six Samurai x1

Enishi, Shien's Chancellor x1

Shien's Squire x2

Legendary Ebon Steed x2

Six Strike Triple Impact x2

Smashing Ground x1

MST x2

Musakani Magatama x2[/spoiler]

 

(If owner of Bound Exile Card) Exile: Legendary Six Samurai - Shi-En
 

Misc. info/fun facts: [/spoiler]

 

Shi-En Soon

 

[spoiler=Shi-En]

"Optional Quote from your character here"
 
Name: Shi-EN
Age:
Gender: Male
Card: Lgendary Six Samurai Shi-En
Exile Class: Bound
Owner of card: Shoko Enzimori
Faction: Independent
Physical Description: The same.
 
[spoiler=Personality]
Shi-En was very abrasive to everyone. Now hes abrasive to everybody but Shoko.
 
  Originally Shi-En was very lighthearted and dreamed of making a perfect world with Kyuzen Shi-En's first partner. His heart was of the noble lord he was once in the spirit world. When he met Kyuzen, Shi-En found a kinship with this human he had not expected. They became close friends fighting alongside each other. Eventually they taught others to fight along side an exile.
 
  The day Kyuzen died was the hardest moment in Shi-En's life. He became emotionally blocked off, then when he did slip and let out all his emotions he would explode and let out his pent up anger on what he fought. When he learned that Shoko had the same goals as Kyuzen. The hatred and walls he put up came crumbling down, Shi-En began to let Shoko in. Though his feelings towards others was still very, abrasive at best.[/spoiler]
 
[spoiler=Back Story]
 Initially Shi-En and Shoko had a rough time adapting to one another, they had Issues with communication and Shoko's inexperience and Shi-En's grieving made their synchronization low. Shi-En kept blocked off emotionally and that allowed them little contact. Eventually when fighting off monsters Shoko was wounded this sent Shi-En in to a rage, and slaughtered the creature that should have been much stronger than him. As he stayed by Shoko's side Shi-En listened to how Shoko had an Ideal world, a world where children would never have to suffer as she did.

 With those words Shi-En wept. Shoko had the same dream as Kyuzen. From then on Shi-En and Shoko began to bond like Shi-En had once with Kyuzen. He trained her in how to properly use her weapon and as they finally began to synch up and became a formidable team.[/spoiler]
 
Exile Ability: Mist of Maekumo (Always active.)
 
 Mist of Maekumo is a simple but powerful ability.  When there is another Six Samurai Monster in play all damage that would be done to Shi-En is halved. Respectively if a spell/trap would affect Shi-En or if he would be attacked he can sacrifice one Six Samurai Monster to negate the card or effect.

Misc. info/fun facts:[/spoiler]

Edit these into one post, please, so that it is linkable if/when the app is accepted. Also, as Lunar said, refrain from double or triple posting before warnings happen. Editing posts works just as well.

 

Gonna be very busy this upcoming week, and so i'm going to do my best to get as much app work and content out as i can tonight. If i don;t get to something, I apologize in advance.