lalolalo Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 XD HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY! My character!!! Let's see how far can he get in the tournament, XD It seems it worth, I mean wait so long for chapter 7. XD Great Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Awesome. By the way how many years does this take place after the original series? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Sweet how bout Deserters' date=' I only saw 2.[/quote'] im worken on it, i can only do so many things at once... i have my allies this fan fic the gravatics the deserter knights and a store that i wish to reopen soon... i will make all the sets in do time. ^_^ XD HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY! My character!!! Let's see how far can he get in the tournament' date=' XD It seems it worth, I mean wait so long for chapter 7. XD Great Job![/quote'] youre welcome. ^_^ sorry i didnt post a duel with your character, but i will. i will. ^_^ and yeah, i may not post three chapters in 24 hours, like Raviel Priest WYHE, but i think that makes it worth reading this way. sort of like watching an actual weekly show. ^_^ its something that cant be rushed. ^_^ Awesome. By the way how many years does this take place after the original series? ah, so i see you payed attention to the bit with Roland in it.... its only a few years afterward, maybe 5 years after the last season of Yu-Gi-Oh!. _____ i am glad you all like my chapter 7! sorry i didnt respond earlier, i was playing DMU.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 zomfg, that was beautiful, 10/10, thats right, you are now a fan fic god kale, congrats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 zomfg' date=' that was beautiful, 10/10, thats right, you are now a fan fic god kale, congrats.[/quote'] dude! Thank you! You have no idea how much this means to me!! I will sig this tomorrow if I have any room left in my signiture... I might be pushing it with this... ^_^ I am so glad you all like it, and now you know why I called it 'Edge of Justice' ^_^ I am do happy that I am getting such good reviews from this... Now where is ixigo?? ^_^ he has forgotten me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 Your chapter...no...your fanfic itself...had blown me away so much...its so great...keep it up...and hope Kale would bring justice to his foes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 Great story! I just read it (with the exception of chapter 4, for some reason my computer wouldn't let me...) Oh, and a typo i saw.“Yes, sir!’ all the Cyborgs said imperfect formation, and then they all left at the same moment. imperfect? sure it isn't 'in perfect'? Formation... i guess it work. although maybe 'sync' would be better. I don't know, grammar isn't my strongest point... oh, and in chapter 7...“[/i]Draw![/i]” Shairalia stated his move.something is wrong with the italic adder thingamabob Can't wait for the deserters (i didn't miss them, did I?)! Yay, Pegasus is still around! And the end of chapter 7... Sweet. So keep it up. We will...We will...NAG YOU(until it's finished) Nah joking, or am I... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 @ above: thank you so much! And chapter 4 wasn't too good anyway, so I so I don't mind. ^_^ Thanks for pointing out those errors, btw. I like how I ended chapter 7 too... All ominous... ^_^ And yep, I had to throw pegasus in there. If gx did it, I can do it better... XD Wow, you must really like my fan fic to dub over a queen song... XD Thanks a lot. ^_^ @raviel preist WYHE: thanks for your comment! Its 'Kal' by the way. I'm Kale, he is Kal... That one letter makes the difference.. XD I saw that your chapter 6 was up, I will read it soon. I will write chapter 8 as soon as I can, guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 Yes! I can't wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 i cant wait either.... i would start writing it now, but i have spent the day editing my Ally monster post and making the coolest booster pack image. ^_^ i will start on it right away. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 8, 2008 Report Share Posted July 8, 2008 Oh ok. I'll be waiting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 9, 2008 Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 I just love your Fan-Fiction! It's got great wording and duel action! I love the story as well. I am an avid reader so that's saying a lot! 9.5/10 -.5 for some spelling errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 Yeah, nothing is ever perfect. I gave up perfect spelling to have an awesome story... ^_^ Thank you for your comment be rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 9, 2008 Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 Well, yes some spelling, but eh, whatever! At least its like really great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 thank you very much, my friend. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 9, 2008 Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 I think you may have inspired me to make my on Fan-Fiction! Can't wait for Chapter 8!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 thank you very much! And you wouldnt be the first to be inspired by my fan fic. ^_^ it is surely getting very popular... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 9, 2008 Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 thank you very much! And you wouldnt be the first to be inspired by my fan fic. ^_^ it is surely getting very popular... ^_^Yup,you also inspired me into writing 1 of my own,hence it was rather successful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 thank you Mr. WYHE! And thanks for the reputation point as well. ^_^ I appreciate both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 9, 2008 Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 Wow, I kept reading this, and I wanna see those Ice Crystal Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 ask tankiller for the link. i believe i saw them in realistic cards yesterday or the day before... thanks for your comment. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Sorry im so late reading this chapter :p I read it and it was great as always ^^ So Mr.Kal(e) lost a lot of duels, eh? To people with suck-ish decks? I find that a little comical. hehe. Can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 its "Kal" in the story line. I am Kale. ^_^ And thank you for your comment Poke. Better late than never. But you commented at a great time, because now (even though I havnt written it here) you get a 10% off coupon to my shop. ^_^ I will send your coupon to you later on this morning. ^_^ Thank you for posting, my friend! I appreciate your compliment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 its "Kal" in the story line. I am Kale. ^_^ Eh. I know but i thought that Kal represented you in a way. But you commented at a great time' date=' because now (even though I havnt written it here) you get a 10% off coupon to my shop. ^_^I will send your coupon to you later on this morning. ^_^[/quote']Oh you don't have to do that, but i will look at your shop again^^(I havn't in a really long time hehe...) Thank you for posting' date=' my friend! I appreciate your compliment![/quote']Hey Np, i really do enjoy this Fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 thanks man. I appreciate that you like the fic. ^_^ But I must give you one, I promised it in writing at my shop. Can't go back on my word, can I? ^_^ And the shop just reopened today. It was closed for a while. So you didnt miss much. ^_^ Kal only represents me in the fact that we both have the unique Ally Monsters, though. XD His personality is a bit too... serious to fit mine though... ^_^ Thank you for your comment, and your coupon I coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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