=aTaLiG= Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 nice and pretty interesting..not so long or short...the story line is great!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 thanks man! What is your favorite part about the story line thus far? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 idk man...its just hard to explain for me...i just love it all!!!!it's so awesome!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 well, I can't give a +rep until I know that you read it... ^_^ You could say anything about the story line to let me know you read it... Chapter six would be better.. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 well i love the duel field pics they are so cool...well that's one..:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 cool, that will work. ^_^ Although, you don't have to read the story to appreciate the pics... Right? ^_^ One +rep to you, 2 more to give! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 yea...thanks though!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 your welcome. ^_^ I just wanted people to enjoy my fan fic... If I have to bait people to come read it, then so be it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 holly toledo batman!you weren't kidding when you said they get longer the higher they go o.0* lol, what i have to congradulate on, is the fact, that you are able to orchestrate so much vivid detailed descriptions into a "yugioh" based style Fan-Ficway to go kalebravo, bravoi honestly mean this from the bottum of my heart (thats a longgg ways down btw)one thing of criticismtry focusing more on how the people look, then how the setting looks, and how the atmosphere isif you can tie the atmosphere, with the description of the people, it adds more of a realization to the Fan-Fic ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 holly toledo batman!you weren't kidding when you said they get longer the higher they go o.0* lol' date=' what i have to congradulate on, is the fact, that you are able to orchestrate so much vivid detailed descriptions into a "yugioh" based style Fan-Ficway to go kalebravo, bravoi honestly mean this from the bottum of my heart (thats a longgg ways down btw)[b']one thing of criticismtry focusing more on how the people look, then how the setting looks, and how the atmosphere isif you can tie the atmosphere, with the description of the people, it adds more of a realization to the Fan-Fic ^_^ Thanks man! I appreciate it. And yeah, I was waiting for this comment... I never say much about what the characters look like... I will start doing that next chapter! Thanks Bloodrun! ^_^ And since you are a new person to comment, you get one of the two remaining reps I am giving. ^_^ 1 more to give! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 holly toledo batman!you weren't kidding when you said they get longer the higher they go o.0* lol' date=' what i have to congradulate on, is the fact, that you are able to orchestrate so much vivid detailed descriptions into a "yugioh" based style Fan-Ficway to go kalebravo, bravoi honestly mean this from the bottum of my heart (thats a longgg ways down btw)[b']one thing of criticismtry focusing more on how the people look, then how the setting looks, and how the atmosphere isif you can tie the atmosphere, with the description of the people, it adds more of a realization to the Fan-Fic ^_^ Thanks man! I appreciate it. And yeah, I was waiting for this comment... I never say much about what the characters look like... I will start doing that next chapter! Thanks Bloodrun! ^_^ And since you are a new person to comment, you get one of the two remaining reps I am giving. ^_^ 1 more to give! lol, your welcome, its what i do (i also like to add tad bits of commedical values to my posts ^_^) anytime, just name itooo and could you return the favor? look in general for a surprise =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 The new chapter is great. I keep on reading it and reading it. I's like, awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 thanks man. ^_^ It won't be much longer for the next chapter, I went on a writing frnzy today and I am almost done with chapter 7 right now... I appreciate all of you guys who enjoy this fan fic. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 do a spell check with ya next thing man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 I accually read it all, and I quite enjoined it, i'm not much into YCG FFs, but your was good, I'll be back to read more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 thanks Sbamber! That make me very happy. ^_^ @komui2: I do, it doesn't catch everything though. ^_^ All my reps are spent, sorry. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 I just had to come back and see if anymore chapters were up and to my luck yes.Good job my friend you are writing an excellent fan-fic and dont stop except if you want but no one here wants you too so great job and keep up the good work ^_^EDIT:oh and if I am among the 5 people to comment and get a rep dont give me one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 well, you just missed that opportuninty anyway... But why didnt you want one? O.o So, to every one of my avid readers: I have hand written chapter 7 now. I think that hand writing it first and then typing later is much more efficient, and it leads to a better story. Now all I have to do is type it up and make the duel feild pics, so the next chapter will be up shortly. ^_^ Thanks for reading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Can't wait man, can't wait! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Lol, me either, dude. Me either. ^_^ Especially since this one will state the plot! Finally! ^_^ Maybe you guys will start liking the storyline now... XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Well the story plot does matter. I still wait more. Kan't wait. ooc: you see I'm going crazy. I said can't- Kan't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Okay. ^_^ chapter 7 is coming very soon, I promise. Btw, what does ooc stand for? You used it... O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 I don't really know. But, I've seen it when people go off- topic so.... I still don't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 oh, okay. ^_^ Thanks, and I hope that you enjoy the next chapter. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Where! Chapter 7 is done?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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