Kale Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 the new chapter is great! thanks! im glad you like it. ^_^ the next chapter might not have a duel in it, or maybe the start of a duel, but for the most part its going to be about the storyline of their world, etc.. i hope you guys like it too. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 can't wait for the rest of the story i'm really a big fan of this fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 2, 2008 Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 can't wait for the rest of the story i'm really a big fan of this fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 can't wait for the rest of the story i'm really a big fan of this fan fic you are? thank you!!! maybe i should start selling posters for you to put in your room. ^_^ jk. ive got some more ideas, and i hope they are good. ^_^ i hope to get some more fans... Bloodrun said he was going to check this out, i wonder if he will comment soon...... EDIT: i just posted chapter 3, enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 *applauds* kudos to you, DK! that was a fine, if short, insight into Kal's character. i also liked the part with the lesson, but i expected you to concentrate more on the Allies... this is quickly moving up the list of my top 10 fav fan fics... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 *applauds* kudos to you' date=' DK! that was a fine, if short, insight into Kal's character. i also liked the part with the lesson, but i expected you to concentrate more on the Allies... [b']this is quickly moving up the list of my top 10 fav fan fics[/b]... yeah, i was going to go into more detail with that, honest, but i ran out of time.... i have tons of stuff i need to do, but now that im finished with it i will work it back in somehow. for bold: thanks for the compliment! i really do appreciate you enjoying my story, and i plan on writing more. you have no idea what ive got planned.... *ominous tone.... :lol:* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tankiller Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Nice FIC can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Nice FIC can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks man. i really do appreciate you guys for liking this fan fic. i do... i am thinking about the duel for the next one, im planning something...^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 you know, the last chapter did feel a bit rushed. but great things are expected of this fan fic, and, i believe, one's excitement about getting one's ideas out into writing can result in such minor flaws... your Allies are a crafty bunch, and, combined with an original backdrop like the one you've got going here, i don't doubt for 1 second that you've got some surprises lined up for us... remember, take your time. i'd rather have you put your best into this and have 1 good chapter a week than 2 or more average chapters plagued by small mistakes... *^don't listen to him, guy. he's stewpid!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 alright. I'll take your advice and make the next duel fantastic! I'll do my best, and ch 3 was rushed, but there is more to be expected. ^_^ Thank you for your comments, all of you. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Well it seems he has lost his job lol. keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Well it seems he has lost his job lol. keep it up! thanks! i have decided to hold off writing chapter 4 until the contest im holding is over (in two days). The reason is that the man in the tight shirt at the end of the chapter will be someones entry from the card contest. :lol: If you want to be the man in the tight shirt, try and enter in my card contest! just follow the rules... Anyone want to read and comment on my fan fic? anyone want into my card contest? feel free too. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 fanfic is good. Keep it up and I shouln have a character buy tommrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 fanfic is good. Keep it up and I shouln have a character buy tommrow thanks, im glad you like it! and the character is appreciated. ^_^ anyone else interested in "The Edge of Justice"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 You mind if I bump this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 You mind if I bump this? no! i dont... ^_^ i want people to enjoy this like so many of you already are.... btw, bloodrun said he would read it.... where is he? :lol: oh well, if they dont read it, its there loss.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Chap 3:This one has no duels,so I was a little dissappointed.But it instead shows the main character's history & the current status of the situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Chap 3:This one has no duels' date='so [b']I was a little dissappointed[/b].But it instead shows the main character's history & the current status of the situation. you were disappointed? sorry..... i wanted to add more about who Kal is, but you still have more to learn.. there will be a duel in the next one, i promise... :D thank you for reading it! i do appreciate it. ^_^ i may not be DJ and get 200+ hits on 2 chapters..... but im doing fine as it is i think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Why are you bumping this thread for someone else & only after 2 min since the last post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Why are you bumping this thread for someone else & only after 2 min since the last post? yeah, i was kinda wondering that myself... but please dont turn my fan fic thread into a flaming duel, okay? So.... anyone want to read the fan fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Like I promised, here is a character Name: Deputy Lance BrodornAge: 26Gender: MaleBio: A cop who somtimes works wil Kal to track down criminalsDeck: DADish MONSTERS3 Dark Armed Dragon3 Armageddon Knight2 Dark Crusader2 Cyber Dragon1 Witch of the Black Forest2 Mystic Tomato2 Destiny Hero MaliciousDestiny Hero Disk CommanderRaizaSanganSnipe HunterElemental Hero StratosThe TrickySPELLS2 Allure of DarknessMonster Reborn2 Foolish burialBrain ControlLighting VortexScapegoatRaigekiGold Sarcophagus2 Destiny DrawsHeavy StoemMST TRAPSMirror Force2 Sakruestu ArmorTrap DushootCOTH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 interesting.... ill try to work him in.. honest. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 I got another one and I'm editing the deck of the last one. Susan NorinoAge: 19Gender: FemaleBio: A criminal who steals rare cards after winning duels. She is defeated by Kal and Arrested by Deputy BrodornDeck: ExodiaExodia's Left ArmExodia's Right ArmExodia's Left LegExodia's Right LegExodia's head Either you can think of the rest or I'll post it later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 okee dokee. FYI: i will post chapter three right after my contest end date, so it will be most likely on Friday. i hope you guys like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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