Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Me too, by the way I sent you a card for my guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Also I sent three new cards to you..your choice however. Everyone if we keep sending cards were going to overwhem evil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 true, so true but I only sent 1 hahahaEvils offline I hope that means he is working on a new chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 i am going to send 6 cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Chapter 5 Alex had beaten him, he had lost his first duel.Still though, it was exhilarating, there was something about it that just got his blood pumping."Hey, James, I just saw Alex. he said you dueled him?" said Cay."Yeah, he beat me. It was awesome though!!" responded James."So, you like dueling.""Yeah!!""Good, cause this week's competition assignments were just posted, and you're up."His heart sank."Against who?""This guy from Green, they call him Novarus.""What kind of cards does he use?""No one really knows, his cards change with each duel.""Really?""Yeah, his last duel he used Mini-Beasts, just swarmed the Field with Rescue Cat.""So, he's good.""Yeah, he's one of the best. Never even has a challenge.""Then whywould they put me up against him!?!? I'm just a beginner!!!""They probably want to test your mettle, see how good you are.""What am I going to do?""Hey, come on, I'll help you, you can train with me.""Seriously?""Yeah. Come on, we'll train right now."So the two of them walked off and started dueling.James lost the first 3, but kept getting better. He would het his strong cards out early, but then fail to hold onto the lead.Finally though, in the fourth duel, he won.He had gotten down to 200 Life Points, just as Cay was attcking with his Gemini Elf when James played Magic Cylinder. This took Cay down to 0 and James won."Good job." said James after the duel was done. "Now do it again."It took James a while to repeat his win, but finally he started getting the hang of it. A couple of days had gone by at this point, and he felt ready for his duel the next day."So Cay."said James."Yeah." replied Cay."Do you think I'll win.""I don't know, I would hate to see you go though.""Yeah, okay."James was tired, he had to rest up for his duel tommorrow. His life was on the line. He couldn't lose. .............................................................................................It was morning, of course morning was almost a relative term in a world so far below ground there was no sunlight.He was dueling today, he was playing against Novarus.It would be a tough one.They all went to the arena, same as last time.Everyone got seats in the stands, same as last time.But James' path was different, he stepped out onto the arena, ready for his duel.The same short, plump announcer came and started everything going. Then he got off the stage, and the game was on."I start." said James with command.He drew his hand. He was ready."I set one monster and play two face-downs. Then I end my turn."Now it was Novarus' turn."I special summon Big Piece Golem and set a face-down."A level 5 already, this guy was good."Now, Big Piece Golem, attack."The giant rock thing then leapt forward and clobbered the face-down."Not so fast, that was my Troop Dragon. With it I can summon another Troop Dragon to the Field." said James."Fine." said Novarus, "I end my turn."James drew."I summon Red Dragon of Twilight."He was prepared."I play Bottomless Trap Hole" said Novarus.His Red Dragon of Twilight was gone."I switch Troop Dragon to defense position.""I end my turn."Back to Novarus."I summon Chainsaw Insect."Another strong monster. He was on a roll."I attack your Troop Dragon with Big Piece Golem.""Not so fast, I play Draining Shield. It stops your attack, and I gain 2100 Life Points bringing me to 6100.""Fine then, I attack Troop Dragon with Chainsaw Insect."And his Troop Dragon was gone."Now you get to draw one card."He drew."I set one card face-down and end my turn."Back again to James."I play Call of the Haunted to bring back one Troop Dragon."He had a plan."Now I play Premature Burial to bring back the other one, taking me down to 5300 Life Points.""Now I sacrifice both of them to summon Dark Dragon Warlord Zalikai (3000/2500), and I special summon one Green Dragon of Twilight.""Now I play Raigeki to destroy both Big Piece Golem and Chainsa Insect.""Good job." said Novarus."Now, Dark Dragon Warlord Zalikai, attack his Life Points directly."Novarus was down to 1000 points. James was kicking butt."Now I end my turn."Novarus again."I special summon Vice Dragon to the Field, and now I play Inferno Reckless Summon to special summon two more Vice Dragons. Now I play Gift of the Martyr to destroy one my Vice Dragons to raise the attack of one of my other Vice Dragons, bringing it up to 4200 ATK."He was good."Now Vice Dragon, attack his Dragon Warlord."He was down to 2100 Life Points. He had lost his Dragon."Now my other Vice Dragon attacks your Green Dragon of Twilight. Taking you down to 1900 Life Points."Novarus was still in control. James had nothing."Now I end my turn."Okay, he had to draw something good, if it was th wrong card he was fininshed."I draw."Okay, this was good."I play Dark Magic Curtain to special summon Dark Magician.""Pretty good card." said Novarus."Now, Dark Magician, attack!!!"And his Dark Magician flew forward and destroyed one of Novarus' Vice Dragons. He was down to 300 Life Points."I end my turn."It was almost over.Novarus drew."I play Ring of Destruction, he said, revealing a face-down.""What?" shouted James.This was strange, Ring of Destruction would kill them both!"I destroy my Vice Dragon, and both of us lose 2100 Life Points!""It's not that easy!" said James, "I flip, Dark Transfusion, which lets me destroy my Dark Magician to raise my Life Points by its ATK.""That won't work." said Novarus, "I play Magic Jammer to negate your Dark Transfusion."The duel was over, James was astonished as he watched both their Life Points fall to 0 simultaneously."This is finished." said Novarus.How had they tied, how had that happened? Novarus had just given up, why would he do that?James ran after him to find out. He caught him just at the door."Why did you do that? Make it end in a tie?" shouted James, attracting onlookers."You got talent, I didn't want you to die just yet."And with that Novarus was gone. And James was left bewildered and joyous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Just so you know, I got rid of the card in my signature because I was sick of seeing it all the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Well I did look at the story you posted and it was good but now I'm thinking of sending you the new deck I made so you know what all the cards do here and their if that helps evil and oh yeah I do see that you removed your old card. I also made a change to my Dragon effect I just removed the normal Summon effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 You used Dark Transfusion wrong and It's Cay's card not Jame's card It can only be activated when Dark Magician AND Dark Magician Girl are on the fieldEvil, new card Didn't want to overrun your PM System so here it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Hey i really like how the storys going so far and nice work with james do you think my person went too hard on james.I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Yeah well he did go all out on james but also James never dueled before and then again that last duel or the new one turned out with no winners but I'm happy to see my Warlord Dragon made an appearance . ATK 3000/DEF 2500...and yet none of you have seen that cards fusion if you want to see the fusion let me know next time your posting comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 DarkDragon your guy stole my Dark Transfusion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 I have no clue what your cards were doing in my deck for starters and I was kind of shocked by that but I send a new deck for evil to check that way thing can clear up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Evil i never put ice permofrost warrior in my deck.You are changing everything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Okay I know it's not your fault but I didn't like seeing it thereNew card I wan't to know what you guys think please rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 I understand ..I understand it not the end of the world I would have felt the same if I saw you useing one of my fusion or higher level Dragons but above all things mite clear up heck their mite even be a reason for why your cards were in that deck in the first place. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 I understand ..I understand it not the end of the world I would have felt the same if I saw you useing one of my fusion or higher level Dragons but above all things mite clear up heck their mite even be a reason for why your cards were in that deck in the first place. :D Yeah that's what I was thinking along with Dark Magic Curtain and Dark Magician Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Meet my newest card.Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Evil ...snowman ????? Ah sounds funny to me but then again I don't mean to sound rude or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Nice but I would change It's effect to "Summon as many Ice Tokens lv1 300/300 to your side of the field" Because of the Pic "This card cannot be destroyed in battle" Kinda sounds Overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Or for like each Ice Token your life points increase by 600 points or something along those lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Or for like each Ice Token your life points increase by 600 points or something along those lines. But that still kinda sounds Overpowered tobut I would Make it LV6 2300/1900 and have the Ice token effect stayHow come noone has commented on my Elf Magician Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkdragonriseing Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Yeah I like that and I agree with powering that monster up inorder to use those effects. A agree with you 100%.Elf Magicain seems good I would give it a 8.5/10However have you throught about workiing on some lower level cards that are not fusions.Thats just my opion on the subject .Still over all a good card for a spellcaster deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 I guess you guys are right and dragon no offense taken i understand.What about this is this a little better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 It's a little better but I still think you should power up Evil Snowman and have when it's summoned you special summon as many as you canYeah I like that and I agree with powering that monster up inorder to use those effects. A agree with you 100%.Elf Magicain seems good I would give it a 8.5/10However have you throught about workiing on some lower level cards that are not fusions.Thats just my opion on the subject .Still over all a good card for a spellcaster deck. Your right I probably should I'll get to work and post it here okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 no thanks i wanna keep it the way it is but ill make it a 6is this okay and your elf is good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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