Womi Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 [align=center]HONEY to climbthe sea to seethe sweetest smell to tell the saltiest taste to wasteyour biggest love to loveyour worst foe to choosethe impossible.[/align] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 Love. Love twists your soul,as it breaks your body more and more.Life is nothing with out love,But it makes itself an eternal paradox. // Please Rate, Hate, Critique // Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 love poems.. -.- great...good.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 mine wasnt a love poem! D= Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 i have one:pika chu chu pika pi chu pika chu chu pika pi chu pikachu Deep man, very deep. Flows very well. I love how you incorporated both "pika" and "chu" in the same line like that. This had given me a lot to think about. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 it took forever to right its for my girl freind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 Wow. It reminds me of the monotony of the society. And how some single spots and persons can bring light into this grey matter. Goethe is a noob compared to that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 i understood none of that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 Wow. It reminds me of the monotony of the society. And how some single spots and persons can bring light into this gray matter. Goethe is a noob compared to that. Really? I interpreted it as a stand against the corruption that runs so rampart in the world. I took "chu chu" to symbolize the children of Africa, and how we are all a little bit like the children in Africa, and how we should be thankful that we are so blessed. But at the same time, there seemed to be undercurrents of a lost love, which is what the "pika pi" could have been referring to. Perhaps ed's mother had died recently? I can't be certain, his vocabulary is a bit beyond mine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 Wow. It reminds me of the monotony of the society. And how some single spots and persons can bring light into this gray matter. Goethe is a noob compared to that. Really? I interpreted it as a stand against the corruption that runs so rampart in the world. I took "chu chu" to symbolize the children of Africa' date=' and how we are all a little bit like the children in Africa, and how we should be thankful that we are so blessed. But at the same time, there seemed to be undercurrents of a lost love, which is what the "pika pi" could have been referring to. Perhaps ed's mother had died recently? I can't be certain, his vocabulary is a bit beyond mine.[/quote'] I picked up on the Africa part as well, and I also say the second to last "pi" as a cry about the unfairness of AIDS. This "pi" strikes at my inmost soul. I think the whole poem speaks volumes about the current state that the world is in. This poem leaves us with a final haunting "pikachu," thus putting all of what he talked about into one chilling word. I shall never forget this poem. It created an impact. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 my mother did die recently thats what its supose to say Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 Wow. It reminds me of the monotony of the society. And how some single spots and persons can bring light into this gray matter. Goethe is a noob compared to that. Really? I interpreted it as a stand against the corruption that runs so rampart in the world. I took "chu chu" to symbolize the children of Africa' date=' and how we are all a little bit like the children in Africa, and how we should be thankful that we are so blessed. But at the same time, there seemed to be undercurrents of a lost love, which is what the "pika pi" could have been referring to. Perhaps ed's mother had died recently? I can't be certain, his vocabulary is a bit beyond mine.[/quote'] I picked up on the Africa part as well, and I also say the second to last "pi" as a cry about the unfairness of AIDS. This "pi" strikes at my inmost soul. I think the whole poem speaks volumes about the current state that the world is in. This poem leaves us with a final haunting "pikachu," thus putting all of what he talked about into one chilling word. I shall never forget this poem. It created an impact. i could also sense hints of how his nightmares of his innermost soul haunt him to the bones. he must have some sort of connection to a child in africa with AIDS due to this factor. this "ka" part is intense of how it symbolizes the holocaust and all the lives it has effected even after it's destruction Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 And you're all smartasses who are going to cut out the entertaining sarcasm. ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 maybe i am but the poem is from the heart where true freinds are made Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 maybe i am but the poem is from the heart where true freinds are made It touched me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Oh my god, this is deep...I feel the tears coming.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Never Again. My heart is a broken metronome,Every day I sit there,Knowing I'll never see her again. //Rate, Hate, Give me +Rep// Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Remembers me of the "Gary come Home"-Song from Spongebob :/ \: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 ohwo baby your looks are so good from pickles to your buns and it ant even funny Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 That "Pi ka chu" song was amazing. I cannot write anything more profound and deep than that. Kudos, wonderous poet. My song now. Comment, because I don't give a damn about critics. ;D White. The light.Red. Who said?Orange. DAMNIT, THERE IS NO RHYME WITH ORANGE.Yellow. Feeling mellow.Green. What have I seen?Blue. For you, too.Purple. DAMNIT, THERE IS NO RHYME WITH PURPLE.Pink. I saw a mink.Black. What a lovely rack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Your majesty overwhelms me,It makes me feel so insignificantI stand before you, I give you a plea,Spare my life, please, let me walk!But silly me,Grizzly bears can't talk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 OMGAKITTY, that inspired me. I will now kill a grizzly bear. YOU FILL THE HOLE INSIDE ME. owait Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 heart the heart is wear you truely make emotion,heart the heart is what makes you make a motion,heart the heart is what lets you live,heart the hearts is where true freinds live Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 heres one i didn't write but my boyfriend wrote to me... it's not in stanza and i don't claim it as my own..;DProtection, my callingEradicatin Darknessfor love and my heart's stressfor the love of my darlinlike hourglass sandi'm crumbles and fallento stand as her supermani must give up my prideall i got is herand all i need in my lifeto be with her, closed doorsfor her i'd surely diemy love higher than bird soardeeper than the seaall that i long foris her beside mesoon it shall bethree years to passall who apose mewill face th wraithor two cornered loversstrengthened by harsh pastswe have only each otherand with that we'll lastF*** all the worlsyeah F*** all of ithatres all that it produces in thembut love will prevelcos we'll give em H***and burn in they willthe inferno's blazewe'll escape to the hills and just let them hate Again not mine, =D enjoy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 he dident make that already made Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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