Dark Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 I wished upon,a shooting star.To make me into,something weird. I wanted to be,female, yes a girl.Just for a day.Just for a day. I went to school.A transfer student.I went into.The girls locker room. There were people there.All of them girls.But I was a girl, too!How ironic. And they started stripping,before my eyes.I was a girl.But had the brain of a boy. So I stripped, too.And looked at myself.And it was nice.It was really nice. I walked up to this girl.With a big...And I ripped her bra off.How funny, how funny. I walked up to another girl.And gave her a dare.We would both strip naked,and I would stop making rumors about her. So we both stripped naked.And I had the mind of a guy.It was nice.So very nice. I enjoyed my day.Doing whatever I wanted.I was not me anymore.Not me, not me. I got a few detentions,suspensions and warrants.But I was not me.Nope, wasn't me. It turned midnight.And I turned back into a boy.What a day, what a day.I had the flu, I said. No punishments arrived.For my funny deeds.I want to be a girl again.So I can have fun again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 he dident make that already made eh? huh whut? no understandy, XD english where an insane country girl can unserstand please ed.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 High Love.A bullet rips through the flesh,As a denial from a love crushes your soul,When you realize that it was nothing, You get high and go to the mall. A Sad RemembranceFalling from the roof,The snow turns into slush,And then into rain,As it reminds you of the tears that fell from your eyes,Only just yesterday. // Rate, Hate, Give me Cheese Curds... // Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Dont ask for reps. Ever. And Dark, your poem was funny. Good show. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Why thank you, Prince Hunter. :D Any critics? I need criticism to THRIVE. Here is a haiku: Darkness will consume,Whatever not eaten by,The light of Christmas. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Wow, Dark! This was awesome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Wow' date=' Dark! This was awesome![/quote'] Thank you. how was mine I am not allowed to say anything bad about anyones poems. It was excellent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 toto beto be hereto be here toto be here to seeto be here to see and to be here to see and read to be here to see and read thisto be here to see and read this pointlessto be here to see and read this pointless lyric.to be here to see and read this pointlessto be here to see and read thisto be here to see and readto be here to see andto be here to seeto be here toto be hereto beto Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 >.<lol no.. =D Roses are red violets are bluemy life suckshow bout you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 >.<lol no.. =D Roses are red violets are bluemy life suckshow bout you? Your poem was wonderful! Seriously, it was so deep, and passionate. One thing I would suggest is to change the "v" in violet into a "V", to make it Violet. The above sentences were NOT sarcastic. The above statement WAS sarcastic. @ WiiOmi: Trolling is beautiful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 >.<lol no.. =D Roses are red violets are bluemy life suckshow bout you? Your poem was wonderful! Seriously' date=' it was so deep, and passionate. One thing I would suggest is to change the "v" in violet into a "V", to make it Violet. The above sentences were NOT sarcastic. The above statement WAS sarcastic. @ WiiOmi: Trolling is beautiful.[/quote'] Why thank you, =3 i really like this no criticism stuff.. but just a thing Dark u suck at being nice.. seriously you do... it's like as bad as Sara Palin... =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 ITT: Sarah Palin is as good at politics as Dark is as good at being nice. True statement, no sarcasm. Also, I suck at being nice. C WUT I DID THAR? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 ITT: Sarah Palin is as good at politics as Dark is as good at being nice. True statement' date=' no sarcasm. Also, I suck at being nice. C WUT I DID THAR?[/quote'] Damn, I miss analogies. Need to bring those back. This is a poem,Because I say it is.Orange. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Sixteen Monsters: After 2 days of drinking nothing but green,It seems I twitch,and move without thinking,I laugh and I walk into walls,But without any thought,I even danced in the highway,Didn't even give it a thought.That's what happens when you drink it constantly.That happy juice labeled with an 'M'For my sake,I hope I don't go mad. //Rate, Hate, Comment// Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 ITT: Sarah Palin is as good at politics as Dark is as good at being nice. True statement' date=' no sarcasm. Also, I suck at being nice. C WUT I DID THAR?[/quote'] Damn, I miss analogies. Need to bring those back. This is a poem,Because I say it is.Orange. 5 syllables.6 syllables.2 syllables. OMGAKITTY made his own form of poetry: the Omak (OMG a Kitty) I ate pie today,It was very good, sir,Good day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 You fall down the stairs,I laugh loud and eat you.Haha. Thath was my Omak. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 WiiOmi, I'd say that was nice, but you should already know my feelings about it judging by your warn level. :D Dark, you can say you dont like something without being an ass. Now your just being a smartass. As much as I respect that and as much as I do that in real life, I dont find it amusing when I'm on the opposite end. Keep your poems not stupid if you can. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 I wrote a poem in Homeroom cuz i was bored, and was not doing whut my teacher wanted me to doso here it is: Tis the onefacing the suneall joy is apastand love lasts Tis the onewhose heart is brokenwho weeps a tonaway from fun Tis the onewhose clothes are blackas the midnight skyand depressions high Tis the onelost in despairlooking for one who may be faiand who wants one to care Tis the oneTis all the oneswho makes the worldspin and twirl. =D there we goI also drew a kitty on my poem paper but i can't draw that on here enjoy this weird poem please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 You fall down the stairs' date='I laugh loud and eat you.Haha. Thath was my Omak.[/quote'] Quite a good Omak. WiiOmi' date=' I'd say that was nice, but you should already know my feelings about it judging by your warn level. :D [b']Prince Hunter is mean. xD[/b] Dark, you can say you dont like something without being an ass. Now your just being a smartass. As much as I respect that and as much as I do that in real life, I dont find it amusing when I'm on the opposite end. But you are not on the opposite end, other members are. And you said I cannot say anything bad about someone's poem (or I assumed so), so I am using sarcasm to overcome this new rule. Keep your poems not stupid if you can. I don't see how this is fair. Technically, you are telling us what we cannot write, which is a form of censoring. I think we should be able to write what we want, albeit anything that goes against YCM rules. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 Not if your just typing up stupid stuff for the sake of lulz or post count. > WiiOmi & OMGAKITTY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 It's still considered a poem, and even if it only take a few seconds to come up with, it should be counted as such. Unless someone posts something stupid like this... "lol todayi went down the stairs todaytoday was good good" ...the rest should be accounted as an actual poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 *coughs* you're poems have been that stupid... =/ seriously.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 My poems have actually had meaning to them.They weren't as stupid as the example one.Also, you are not supposed to say bad things about my poem. Maybe WiiOmi has been posting crap, but I don't think anyone else has posted poems stupid enough to get warned for them or have them deleted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 no but they're like right on the line... D=very frustrating Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 I don't see why YOU of all people have a problem with poetry. I can say that your poetry is also stupid and spammish, but I would be lying. I think the discresion is up to Prince Hunter, and (albeit WiiOmi's crap) telling us what not to do in a poem IS CENSORSHIP. I say "albeit WiiOmi" because he is just a troll. He is poem'ing for the lulz, AND they are stupid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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