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Now it is only a one use Trap, when it would work out better if it was kept onto the field.

 

If you want to keep it that way, then change the effect to " Activate only when a card with "Sasuke" or "Kakashi" in it's name is selected as an attack target. Increase the targeted cards ATK and DEF by 500 points.

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I was never officially accepted. Far as I know' date=' anyway...

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Well, you just need patience. With this post they might go see if you already have posted your app. If you have, well that is up to them. Search for you app. and tell us which page it's on. Then you will have a good chance of being accepted. At least maybe...

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Chidori was 10,000? Coulda sworn it was "1,000", but eh I dunno. Don't really remember.

 

Activate only when 1 card with "Sasuke" or "Kakashi" in its card name attacks or is attacked. Increase the ATK of the target/attacking monster by 500.

 

This card can only be activated when 1 card with "Sasuke" or "Kakashi" in it's name attacks or is attacked. Increase the ATK of the attack target/attacking monster by 500.

 

I guess thats how it goes, might not need attack target, but I was just trying to be abit specific

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if this thread wasn't stickied, this would be the first time i had ever bumped it. :lol:

anyways, i have a card that i need ratings on. i just need to know how the ocg is. i've already been told that there are a few minor problems with it, so i know that much. i just need help in locating them. :)

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Effect: When This Card Is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon up to 2 level 4 or lower monster with Chibi Knight in their names. When a Chibi Knight other then Chibi Knight: Zero is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon This card from your deck, hand, or Graveyard.

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Effect:

When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower monsters with "Chibi Knight" in their names. When a "Chibi Knight" (except "Chibi Knight: Zero") is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon this card from your Deck, hand, or Graveyard.

 

Think that should be correct

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okay then, i'll post them both at once.

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Effect: When This Card Is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon as many "Chibi Knights" as possible from your Graveyard by discarding an equal number of cards from your hand. When a Chibi Knight (other then "Chibi Knight: Zero") is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon This card from your deck or hand.

 

just make a copy of the text effect and modify that with the bolded lettering, that way i can mroe eaily tell the difference between the 2, okay? oh, and i think i upgraded the cards effect a bit since that last post. xD

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I used my avatar for the picture, obviously. What do you guys think of it. Flaws?

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When this card is Summoned, look at your opponents hand during each of his/her Draw Phases. If your opponent Summons a monster with an ATK of 2000 or more, send this card to the Graveyard and destroy your opponents monster.

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okay then' date=' i'll post them both at once.

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Effect: When This Card Is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon as many "Chibi Knights" monstes from your Graveyard by discarding an equal number of cards from your hand. When a Chibi Knight (other then "Chibi Knight: Zero") is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon This card from your deck or hand.

 

just make a copy of the text effect and modify that with the bolded lettering, that way i can mroe eaily tell the difference between the 2, okay? oh, and i think i upgraded the cards effect a bit since that last post. xD

That's what I always do with fixes xD

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard cards to Special Summon "Chibi Knight" monsters equal to the number of cards discarded. When a "Chibi Knight" (except for "Chibi Kngiht: Zero") is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon this card from your Deck or hand.

 

I can't see the card D:

Some bits I'm not sure, in return, can you rate this card? 7.4/10

 

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Effect:

If you control a "Mech" monster, select 1 random card in your opponent's hand and add it to your hand. If the selected card is a Trap Card, discard it and inflict 600 damage to your opponent. You cannot Summon a "Mech" monster in the next turn.[/align]

 

EFFECT was simple because for realisticness? Rate too please. Image credit to Jazin Kay.

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If you control a "Mech" monster, select 1 random card in your opponent's hand and add it to your hand. If the selected card is a Trap Card, discard it and inflict 600 damage to your opponent. You cannot Summon a "Mech" monster in the next turn.

I think that it is supposed to say during your next turn. other then that, it's a pretty decent card. 9/10

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