Saiba Aisu Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 I am so shocked I made it! Although...grrr...someone told me "as a result of battle" was now supposed to be "by battle." *glares at DJ and Yankee* Also, Bhim, I posted the errata, but ty for making my review longer. :3 Thanks, and congrats Yankee! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 *glares at DJ and Yankee* 0_o *Runs away screaming* Ok' date=' Bhim, you said I could post a card here again, so, here is my Zombie, BTW, it's my first ever zombie XD [img']http://i31.tinypic.com/ipb8f6.jpg[/img]When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. Treat this card as an Equip Card, and equip it to the selected monster. When the equipped card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to the controller of the card's opponent's Life Points. As long as the equipped monster remains face-up on the field, decrease its ATK by 200 during each of your Standby Phases. When the equipped monster is destroyed, treat this card's ATK as half the original ATK of the equipped monster and Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 *Chases Yankee with meat cleaver*Interesting card...but kinda underpowered, in my opinion...Nice picture, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 *Chases Yankee with meat cleaver*Interesting card...but kinda underpowered' date=' in my opinion...Nice picture, though.[/quote']0_o*pulls out pistol* "Stay the Frunk away from me" XD Thanks, try posting in the thread XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Oh, Yankee... Just thought I'd say That pic is EXTREMELY overused... =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Oh, Bhim, I reviewed it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 lol wow a C xD But at least it was just 'cause of the art The effect still pwns ;) And that's good enough for me ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 I might as well try this out, here's one of my best cards.(Pic from photobucket, don't get all DA radical on me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Yeah, sry Man, but the pic did kill it, lol, but that is a pwnage effect 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Hey what about my card...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Ha, you hav 666 posts, go to post count man! XD YOUR EVIL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 XD now I don't..lol, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 >_< STAY EVIL! YOU SUCK! XDAnyway, more card reviews please! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Frunx, I posted this same post in your other thread but here it is, whichever you notice first. Well Frunxmomma, I'm assuming I'm allowed back since no one seemed to mind it? Organization XIII's Card LoreThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 face-up monster on your side of the field to the Graveyard. By using this effect, you cannot Normal Summon, Set or Special Summon this turn. This card is not destroyed by battle when this card battles with a monster with the same ATK. When this card attacks, declare 1 card name. If your opponent has a declared card(s) in his/her hand, send all of the declared card(s) to the Graveyard. Any errors? I can still fix it. I just want it to be reviewed before it's all over X_X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Hey bhim, I think if you lower the attack of your A+ -_- card to 1700-1800, it would be better. I think 1900, which a recyclable effect like that is overpowered. Pshh A+ and I get a B+. XD Lol, good card. I knew you'd get in your own contest.EDIT: Org, grave is capped and destroyed by battle, not as a result. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Weird...this Thread had 1 star....i boosted it up to 3 with a 5, which it easily deserves... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 “By” is the new “as a result of”… I think "as a result of" is fine. I hope! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Weird...this Thread had 1 star....i boosted it up to 3 with a 5' date=' which it easily deserves...[/quote'] I never noticed that. I also gave it a 5 which made it rise to a 3.5. Not high enough, c'mon people, you know it deserves a 5! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 All right. I'm done with keeping it in. I am honestly tired of people giving my review heat. I gave it an A+ because the picture, name, effect and balance are good. Seriously... If you guys can't see that, it's not my problem. I know what's happened, and it's not very hard to tell... A moron could tell. Smart people will know what I am talking about, or at least wil be able to figure it out... And the 1 star? I am about 99.9999% sure I know who it is. Probably the same person that gives all my other threads 1 star. But that's fine. If you hate me, are jealous of me [this is NOT an arrogant statement], or whatever your reasons may be; if you're going to be so stupidly immature as to give everything of mine a low score, then I'm not sure you are sane. The level of immaturity you hold is far too low for you to get help. I'd say stop, but you're clearly too immature for anything as simple as that, so continue giving everything of mine extremely low and [possibly] undeserving grades. Clearly you know who you are, but uhhh... I do too. I won't confront you myself, but if you want to come to me and fess up, that's fine, and I can help you too. On top of that, if anyone says anything about that A+, I don't give a rat's arse. Honestly, my grades are my grades. The irony is that a lot of you say stuff like: "That's a great card!" But then you say "I can't believe you got an A+, and I didn't"... Or some variation of that. If it's a great card, don't you think it's deservant of such a high grade? That's what I thought. [/conversation] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Ill give the thread a booster ^_^ Uber 5 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 o.o I always stood by 'ya. I personally think your card was excellent, the name, eh, so-so, but the grammar and image are top-notch. You sound a little overworked...maybe taking a short break from reviews would help?And rating lowly is ridiculous...DJ and myself have the occasional squabble, but I always rate his cards fairly (which usually means at least a 4/5 stars! >_Take a breath, Bhim. I still love you! ...If that counts for anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 lol You guys don't have to bump up the grade... I know who's giving me such low grades. He/she knows it, and I'm sure a few of you will have probably figured it out too... But that might be a good idea; I might take a break... But yeah... And lol, thanks Cyber ;) Ily too Happy Valentine's Day all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 On top of that' date=' if anyone says anything about that A+, I don't give a rat's arse. Honestly, my grades are my grades. The irony is that a lot of you say stuff like: "That's a great card!" But then you say "I can't believe you got an A+, and I didn't"... Or some variation of that. If it's a great card, don't you think it's deservant of such a high grade? That's what I thought.[/quote'] I was only joking about what I said bhim. I got a B+ and that's all that matters. I think Cyber is right. You've been pushing yourself with these reviews. Take a break. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 I think Cyber is right. Of course I'm right! I thought that was public knowledge...lol, kidding. ...Or am I?Happy V Day, boss. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 x_x This is for the reviews, not the cards themselves. Those belong in the "Are you tbe BEST Cardmaker...." Got it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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