Fusion X. Denver Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 Wait.Are you asking to rewrite the entire fic?...for what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 For what?You mean I'm supposed to have an alternate motive then just simply wanting to help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 It's not that, I just don't see the point to it.You mean like an edited version with better writing and stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 To cut to the point, yes. That way you can skip a step, making me do it, and just redo what l did to get the final version.Basically l want a time killer while l work/get stuck on Struggle of Powers II or I'm not writing << Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 He's not exactly skipping a step though. Instead of reviewing it all again he has to wait for you to finish and then review it himself. He'll probably also end up working just as hard to fix things and make them fit his writing style better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 Okay that might be true, him reading it. And l cannot deny that l might mess some things up on accident . . .But I am just so bored and need something to write DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 Um, I mean you could dude, but here's the thing:When I rewrite DEF, it's NOT going to be the same thing.Sure, some core story elements, characters, the setting, those things won't change.But everything else is completely subject to being replaced by something else.It's going to be a different story. A better story, I hope, but definitely different. So whether you rewrite it or not, I'm essentially going to change the whole thing anyway >.>If I were you, I'd just focus on SoP II and real life, bro. But that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 *shrugs* Just a suggestion to kill time. Didn't care either way.And yeah I'd focus on SoP II IF I had my normal computer on hand << D*mn brother took the charger and that has all of the information on it.FYI- no USB to transfer anything either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 @OtonashiBut Otonashi > the word Black, therefore you are now Otonashi. BTW, as soon as I remember my password, I'm becoming TK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 @OtonashiBut Otonashi > the word Black, therefore you are now Otonashi. BTW, as soon as I remember my password, I'm becoming TK.... But you're totally Ayato or Takayama ._. Arm/Nex = TK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 That doesn't change the fact that TK is the coolest. Unfortunately I promised Katz that she can pick my next name so I'll probably end up being Kujo or Grevil from Gosick. <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 @Otonashi Arm would be a good TK, but I'ma try to get that name first. If we want to be technical, I could try and be "the angel" if I wanted too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 We already have a Kanade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 @OtonashiIf we want to be technical, I could try and be "the angel" if I wanted too...That would be Caeda Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Hey if Trio of DEF was made into a fighting video game, what would your character's opening/ending line(s) be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Hey if Trio of DEF was made into a fighting video game, what would your character's opening/ending line(s) be?OP: Show me your youthful vigor!ED: This springtime of youth we call life is everlasting! Special OPCortez: Just watch, I'll prove that Green Wisdom will see me through!DL: This should be fun!El: I'm going to enjoy this...Aka: Uh hey, we don't need to do this...right?Xazeon: Bastard...Life: I'll kill you!Ninjew: Ah sh*t...Black: Man, I've always wanted to see who would win with us! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 OP: I'll slaughter you!ED: I tend to be right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 OP: You want to fight me, really?ED: Hey don't look so down, I'm sure you'll do better next time.ED[at the Hotel Stage]: Oh man . . . I hope my insurance covers this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Stages...FTK hideoutOrg 13Pop ParkChristmas FestivalYugo PrisonTower of Any Other RooftopPowerforceYCM HighJapanese StreetUltimaYugo Ultra HotelSewers I think that's it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Headmaster Monokuma Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Hey if Trio of DEF was made into a fighting video game, what would your character's opening/ending line(s) be? Interesting... Opening: Hold it! Time for your cross-examination.Ending: Objection! All the evidence points to you! To special characters:Black: Remember.Leo: f*** yeah. Finally time to test my skills.Arm: ...Let me guess, SCIENCE?Caeda: Since when do you fight?IN THE VERY OFF CHANCE IT EVER HAPPENSLife: Please, Saint Dane was cooler then you. @Fuse: I demand a Courthouse stage for Ice and me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Opening: Am I expected to be surprised?Ending: The Mind shall vanquish the Sword! Special Openings: FTK Hideout: Surrender? Surely you jest!Any Other Rooftop: Nothing will prevent me from changing this World!Ultima: You've sealed your fate. VS Fusion: Naive Fool...VS DL: You know, it's people like you that make me rethink my thoughts of saving this world...VS El: Why so Emo?VS Black: Your friends can't help you here. (Ending)VS Deustodo: I've had enough of your illogical ramblings!VS Deustodo: Be silent. (Ending)VS Life: Your plan was flawed, but not without merit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Op: Kyrie, eleison.End: We can change the world! Christmas: *Singing* I met her up in Delaware, in 1937~Powerforce: I am myself! Black the Sinner-Saint! Lanza del Relampago! To Caeda: Love is not a fight, but it's something worth fighting for.To Fuse: Goddamn, man, I would love to live in your world for 10 minutes.To DL: Foolish little brotherTo Ecchi: You're walking a lonely road, the only one that you have ever known...To Life: Wanna, wanna trip, baby?!To Dane: Never gonna give her up.To Creator: Dust to dust, ashes to ashes, Hallelujah, amen, you are dismissed! (Ending)To Cherry: YOOOOUUUSSSAAAYYYY!To Clair: What is a man?To Andex: STUPID DOG, YOU MAKE ME LOOK BAD! Also, gonna post my one shot tomorrow. Mom came to pick me Up as I was almost done. Btw, if you get EVERYthing I listed, you get a rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Life: Marsuvees obviouslyDane: Caeda/Rick rollCreator: Preaching to me (useless)Cherry: Jack AtlasAndex: Courage the cowardly dog Thats all I've got. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Actually, to you, it wasn't preaching. It's a line a villain that Marsuvees Blak created recites. AND YOU SHOULD KNOW THE ONE TO FUSE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 I thought about doing specific ones but opted against it. Since people are I will too. I'm such a bandwagon follower. :3 To Jake Opening (Hotel): I hope your insurance covers a pissed off 15 year old with grenades.To Lora Opening: Want to be shown a good time?To Lora Ending: Meh, Clair is better anyway.To Hinagiku Katsura Ending (If she somehow became a playable character): I'm not your average ass puppet.To Black Ending: You're still a d*ck.To Fusion Ending: Say green whatever again. I dare you.To Sonic Ending: That's what she said.To Life Ending: I told you I'd be there when you die. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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