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Legend Blood [Finished/PG-13/OOC] *remake*


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Unsure. It's up to you, really.

And Beginning, the infiltration itself. Well, first John's gonna crack down on how they're gonna go about sneaking in more than fifty humans into the vampire's capital city, and then they're all gonna go in. Though everyone is advised to get ready first with their weapons and whatnot.

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Also...how did the guards survive being frozen? I hope I don't need to explain a medical condition called frostbite. [/quote]
Magical enchanted armor + natural vampire capacities. If that's not enough, then I can just kill off the other three and leave the fat one all alone.

Anyway, BEHOLD! THE AMAZING PLAN OF JOHN ALEXANDER!

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Amazing plan! = Charge in, kill, win. Basically it? XD

I kinda figured John would want to face Elnaer alone, but I presume that's not going to happen, right? The prisoners will almost definitely show up there, and Feredir's Magick will be needed. I cant help but think that Alsa should be the one to ultimately defeat Elnaer though. That'd make for a great twist.

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I've been mulling it over, and I've decided to create a rough map of Nuevida and its surroundings. Just to put things into perspective.

[spoiler=Rough map]
[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/jzr1n.png[/img]
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Note that the empty spaces do NOT mean that they are empty. It just means that you can put whatever in there. Red symbolizes vampire territory and light-blue symbolizes human occupancy. The dark green is a thick forest that surrounds Nuevida, and I guess the bits in between are a combination of wastelands, destroyed human villages, destroyed human towns, and plain grasslands.

[quote]Amazing plan! = Charge in, kill, win. Basically it? XD

I kinda figured John would want to face Elnaer alone, but I presume that's not going to happen, right? The prisoners will almost definitely show up there, and Feredir's Magick will be needed. I cant help but think that Alsa should be the one to ultimately defeat Elnaer though. That'd make for a great twist. [/quote]

Apparently.

And yeah, that probably won't happen. He'll probably get his ass handed to him and get killed, only for some random other person to avenge him. And yeah, I suppose Alsa being the one to ultimately defeat him would be an interesting thing to do.

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John shouldn't die. Perhaps we get a couple of people to take on Elnaer first (John, Lyon, the Demon Girl etc), defeated. Feredir versus Elnaer in epic Magick battle. Elnaer wins through sheer power. Then somehow, Alsa comes in with some weird spell and defeats Elnaer, perhaps taking him by surprise with a simple but effective one.

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[quote]Question: Can I have creativity with what I teach? So long as I dont make some major piece of information, can I basically do whatever? (For example, i've categorised the Elves with what they specialise in. That okay?) [/quote]

They specialize in nature and magic.

Though yeah, you can have creativity, since your character Feredir's too ancient to know and be involved in the more important plot points like Iron Dragon's armor and the events that caused all the rest of the elves to disappear anyway.

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So bits of history of the Elves (As in the Elvish Categories and such), and Feredir's way of Magick is okay? Good.
And by Categorizing the Elves, I meant Wood Elves are Archers & Woodland people, High Elves are healers and Mages. Dark Elves are more Dark & Shadowy magick (And perhaps more physically focussed?)

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Yep, it's all fine. I'm gonna have to change the plot of Legend Nature a bit, but yeah, feel free to explain it any way you like. Feredir's from the more ancient kind of elves, while the elves that will be referenced and touched upon in the prequel are centuries after him. So nothing interferes with anything.

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