a bad post Posted April 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Sadly, Sapphyre, Field Barrier prevents Brain Research Lab from being activated. However, I will utilize this opportunity to get Foster to move Kira. The Field Barrier isn't supposed to be part of the duel, because I thought it would be unfair to give myself a card advantage over Stalfos, but I can edit it out so Brain Research Lab isn't activated if Stalfos wants it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted April 1, 2013 Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 ...nah, I don't really care. Can't really post at the moment, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted April 2, 2013 Report Share Posted April 2, 2013 Surprise stowaway in the trunk! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted April 3, 2013 Report Share Posted April 3, 2013 Hmmm... Hey, Sapph--er, Liselotte, could you have Davian or one of the scientists come up to Samuel and have a conversation with him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted April 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2013 Hmmm... Hey, Sapph--er, Liselotte, could you have Davian or one of the scientists come up to Samuel and have a conversation with him? Its not much, but hopefully you can work with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted April 4, 2013 Report Share Posted April 4, 2013 Oh, boy! More toys for Foster to play with! 100 points to the first person who correctly guesses what the acronym "S/Pa.Dr." means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted April 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 TFF the girl at the orphanage isn't Kira (shes at the Police Station), but just some random orphan girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 yeah the post confused me, it stated he was near the duel, but I guess I just didn't know how to handle it, I wouldn't mind responding if it weren't for the fact I'm confused as to Foster's location Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 TFF the girl at the orphanage isn't Kira (shes at the Police Station), but just some random orphan girl. I'm at the police station, where Kira is talking to Phantom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted April 5, 2013 Report Share Posted April 5, 2013 OK, I'm stuck. Naomi's now the only one that isn't giving me writer's block, but if I use with Naomi alone, I won't even have enough lines to make a legal post. ... What to do, what to do... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riinzler Posted April 6, 2013 Report Share Posted April 6, 2013 Name: Michael "Madness" McClave Gender: Male Age: Appears about 25, but not even he is sure anymore. Appearance: Minus the claws. Personality: Not much is to be said of Madness. Speaking very objectively as a matter of it being the simplest way to communicate, Madness is commonly subject to giggling fits of insanity. The only true reflection of emotion is when in the face of the whom he considers the wicked to be, despite he himself being controlled by evil unrelenting powers. Though thoughts of Nicole echo though his mind at times... Faction: Psychic Bio: The cliche orphaned baby on the doorstep. 'Madness' was locked into his own room out of fear from his carers at the orphanage, due to psychically enhanced crying fits that tore away and raged at anything nearby. At early ages, the other orphans learnt not to duel him, for fear of their own safety. Eventually, he grew into to become calmer but, as one can imagine, was still treated as out of place. Subject to fewer and fewer psychic outbursts, at 16 he caught the eye of a cute girl that walked past the orphanage every day after school. After weeks, he mustered the courage to say hi. Her name was Nicole. This led to years later them becoming engaged. Exacty 5 weeks from being wedded, Nicole was gunned down in an armed home robbery. He snapped. His Duel Monsters cards cast across the room, the creatures within them erupted and projected into reality as subject to his state of psychic madness. The robbers were twisted amongst corrupted draconian steel and blasted into ash. Chaos had truely taken over. Police couldn't identify any of the remains. Except for one. Nicole. Assumed dead, Madness continued on a rampage, wielding only his dueling deck and powers of destruction, devastating those of the corrupt underworld. Murderers, thieves, fencers. It didn't matter. He wasn't in control anymore. Then Sayer found him...I just would like to say that I'm not much of a story teller and would be happy to take any tips to improve upon anything that I have presented. Theme Song: 'Heron Blue' by Sun Kil Moon The song is intended to reflect the loss of Nicole. 'Operation 40' theme song by TreyarchI picture the rift of this song to be playing as Madness summons a trump card or at a climax in a duel. Deck: Old-school Cyber Style (includes 2 custom Synchros: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/299718-sunlight-and-moonlight-dragons/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avaren Posted April 6, 2013 Report Share Posted April 6, 2013 [spoiler='Application'] “Quote and a pic of your character; optional” Name: Gender: Age: Appearance: {5 lines or a pic} Personality: {A minimum of seven lines} Faction: {Psychic or Duelist} Bio: {A minimum of ten lines} Theme Song: {Optional} Deck: {Be specific as possible. NO DECK LISTS!} [/spoiler] personality is missing 4 lines not sure if bio is missing one or not... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted April 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2013 Like Avaren said your missing lines, and I'm also not accepting any longer. I gave Avaren this chance, so because we haven't progressed all that far into the plot you can lengthen your app and send me a good writing sample then I'll accept you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueZero Posted April 7, 2013 Report Share Posted April 7, 2013 Like Avaren said your missing lines, and I'm also not accepting any longer. I gave Avaren this chance, so because we haven't progressed all that far into the plot you can lengthen your app and send me a good writing sample then I'll accept you. Err, Saph, I mean Liselotte ... You really need to change the title from accepting to not accepting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted April 7, 2013 Report Share Posted April 7, 2013 I am so confused. Where are Stalfos' characters in relation to Foster and the duel in the police station? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 Stalfos has 2 characters, two are dueling, but neither are anywhere near the police station, his third character is in the police station with Phantom, there is no duel happening at the police station Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted April 8, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 I am so confused. Where are Stalfos' characters in relation to Foster and the duel in the police station? Naomi is at the orphanage, while Kira is at the police station. Both I assume are quite a distance from each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riinzler Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 I'm going to assume then that mine has not been accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avaren Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 Like Avaren said your missing lines, and I'm also not accepting any longer. I gave Avaren this chance, so because we haven't progressed all that far into the plot you can lengthen your app and send me a good writing sample then I'll accept you. dude... read and you shall know the ans... it's 42... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riinzler Posted April 9, 2013 Report Share Posted April 9, 2013 Yes, and I was asking to confirm that it wasn't accepted.... "dude". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avaren Posted April 9, 2013 Report Share Posted April 9, 2013 ok, I'll summerise: You haven't been accepted yet. Lengthen your app and send Liselotte Werckmeister a "good" writing sample. Then she may accept you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a bad post Posted April 10, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2013 Guys y u no post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted April 10, 2013 Report Share Posted April 10, 2013 Well I said I was stuck :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avaren Posted April 10, 2013 Report Share Posted April 10, 2013 and I kinda stopped myself from posting anything before all the current things end, with my entry post... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted April 10, 2013 Report Share Posted April 10, 2013 Sorry, my bad, I just didn't get round to it, I'll post ASAP >< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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