The Nyx Avatar Posted December 15, 2015 Report Share Posted December 15, 2015 LORE:Cannot be Special Summoned. Negate the effects of all other LIGHT and DARK monsters (anywhere). Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack. You cannot Special Summon monsters. Once per turn: You can pay 1500 Life Points; banish 1 monster your opponent controls and 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect: You can pay half your Life Points instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htamret Posted December 15, 2015 Report Share Posted December 15, 2015 banish 1 your opponent controlsOne what? One monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted December 15, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2015 One what? One monster?Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryusei the Morning Star Posted December 15, 2015 Report Share Posted December 15, 2015 I really like the lore behind Anderson. Fix the error one one monster and I think it's OK. Maybe a you cannot control other monster's clause Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted December 15, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2015 I really like the lore behind Anderson. Fix the error one one monster and I think it's OK. Maybe a you cannot control other monster's clause Fixed said error. Funny enough, you typed "one" twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htamret Posted December 15, 2015 Report Share Posted December 15, 2015 Thank you.Np. Maybe check out my card set? The last one I posted died fairly unceremoniously, maybe you could offer suggestions to improve them?http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/345259-undread-archetype/(This technically isn't against the rules since I'm not actually posting any cards, just checked. I'm also legitimately asking for criticism instead of just going "ZOMG LOOK AT DESE KARDZ I JUST MADE!!1!11!!!11!") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snatch Steal Posted December 15, 2015 Report Share Posted December 15, 2015 ooh, he's a hottieisn't angel dust a drug tho Cannot be Special Summoned. Negate the effects of all LIGHT and DARK monsters. Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack. You cannot Special Summon monsters. Once per turn: You can pay 1500 Life Points; banish 1 monster your opponent controls and 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect: You can pay half your Life Points instead. This seems pretty balanced, considering it must be tribute summoned and all of its effects are either situational, detrimental, or have hefty costs. I feel like this would rek in qli, but that's not exactly a thing at this point. Banishing a monster and back row (without targeting) is quite destructive, considering it's the same as Michael for 500 fewer LP.Also, remember that Solemn Warning lets you negate stuff for half of your life points, and we all know how that goes down ( . - .)I don't suppose any changes need to be made to it, although I would replace the colon in the last effect with a comma. "If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can pay half your Life Points instead." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted December 16, 2015 Report Share Posted December 16, 2015 As odd as it seems given our screen names, I agree with most if not all of what Snatch Steal said. Changing the banish effect to target might be a good idea. I can see people siding this if their deck can tribute summon it. Funny thing though, doesn't "Negate the effects of all LIGHT and DARK monsters" include this card? Also, does it negate effects on the field or everywhere? Please fix & elaborate. If you want it to negate everywhere, use this card as an OCG basis:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Aurkus%2C_Lightsworn_Druid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted December 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2015 As odd as it seems given our screen names, I agree with most if not all of what Snatch Steal said. Changing the banish effect to target might be a good idea. I can see people siding this if their deck can tribute summon it. Funny thing though, doesn't "Negate the effects of all LIGHT and DARK monsters" include this card? Also, does it negate effects on the field or everywhere? Please fix & elaborate. If you want it to negate everywhere, use this card as an OCG basis:http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Aurkus%2C_Lightsworn_DruidAdded "all other" to the effect, so it doesn't contradict its own effect. And (anywhere) to the effect, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted December 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2015 Np. Maybe check out my card set? The last one I posted died fairly unceremoniously, maybe you could offer suggestions to improve them?http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/345259-undread-archetype/(This technically isn't against the rules since I'm not actually posting any cards, just checked. I'm also legitimately asking for criticism instead of just going "ZOMG LOOK AT DESE KARDZ I JUST MADE!!1!11!!!11!")This weekend, perhaps?ooh, he's a hottieisn't angel dust a drug tho Angel Dust is the alias of Alexander Anderson. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted December 18, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2015 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htamret Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 This weekend, perhaps?Yeah sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted December 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Yeah sure.I've got some courseware to do today, but I'm sure that I'll be able to look at your set and offer any suggestions tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htamret Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 I've got some courseware to do today, but I'm sure that I'll be able to look at your set and offer any suggestions tomorrow.Awesome, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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