Elemental HERO Dark Dragon (test if it dosn't work please comment it)

[Brianatorj]

Name: Elemental HERO Dark Dragon
​Level/Rank: 5
​Synchro/Dragon/Effect
Atk/2400 Def/2400
Once per turn By banishing one card form your graveyard you can inflict 500 damage on your opponent. If a Elemental HERO Light Dragon is in your graveyard you can bring it to the field in defense mode.
Creator: Coyote Corp

Hope all of you ppls enjoy! ;3

Link to card:

[TF2_The_Scout]

You forgot to include the card's stats(level, type, attribute, ATK/DEF). Also, it's a good idea to have cards that work together to be together. What exactly does Light Dragon do?

 

As for the card itself, this doesn't seem to provide any use to the HERO playstyle. HERO is a deck that focuses on fusion summoning, so I don't see what this would provide for the archetype besides a little burn that even then won't do much unless you have already gotten your opponent down to 500 LP.

[Brianatorj]

you will see everything when I figure out how to post cards :P,

Im Going to post this or have this moved to advanced multiples when ik how to post cards,

if elemental hero's are based on a fusion type they wouldn't exist besides this is a syncro m8

[TF2_The_Scout]

you will see everything when I figure out how to post cards :P

The card generator uploads to Imgur, but it's not working right now, so you'll have to go elsewhere to do so.

 

http://postimage.org This is where I go.

you will see everything when I figure out how to post cards :P,

Im Going to post this or have this moved to advanced multiples when ik how to post cards,

if elemental hero's are based on a fusion type they wouldn't exist besides this is a syncro m8

E-HERO wouldn't exist if it was a fusion deck? You have played this game before, right? Also, if this is a synchro, what's the intended tuner?

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

If this is a Synchro for Elemental HEROs, likely a generic Tuner.

 

But otherwise, the rest of the data is missing so can't really say much more about it. (You did ask me how to post cards a while ago)

[Thomas★Zero]

if elemental hero's are based on a fusion type they wouldn't exist besides this is a syncro m8

*Face palms*

 

I guess you not looked into what E-HERO do as a archetype plus with this card effect wise, it would not be effective if you not made a Elemental HERO Light Dragon to go with it as stated in its effect.

 

Still if you follow my advise on card maker advise for written content do the following from the skeleton below.

 

Name

Lv/Rank(X) Attribute

Type/Subtype(if any)/Effect

*Text for effect goes here*

ATK/(X) DEF/(X)

 

X = users desired number in each area

 

With this it should help you display your cards better.

[shadowsapex]

There is no once per turn on the first effect. You can banish every card in your graveyard and kill your opponent in one turn. 

Don't reference cards that don't exist m8

Elemental Heroes don't do synchros, and current variations of the deck are so focused on consistency that they're not likely to run a tuner (besides Effect Veiler). And this card doesn't support the Hero archetype, nor does any Hero card really synergize with this card, so there's no point in it being a Hero.

You know, you can click More Reply Options to preview your post. Please try to get the stats and such posted asap.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

That may be true, but a reminder that this is Casual Cards and variations to how HEROs play can exist (after a while, HEROs going into Shadow Mist and whatever will get boring; that's about what they do nowadays [and R4]). In Advanced, Synchros don't work as design; here, you can get away with it to an extent (or Xyz, which HEROs are likely more often to do). 

 

[i mean, there are some HERO Synchros in Advanced already; albeit several pages back, and they should be able to work.)

 

I'm going to say this again:

 

Casual Cards does NOT include the metagame (if you want to talk about that, go to Advanced) and more on general design. 

 

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Either way, you need an OPT on the first effect since it can burn repeatedly (though there's probably some other cards that lack an OPT that I can't remember at this time). As for Light Dragon, unless you post it (and of course, the rest of its stats), can't really say much about it or how well the two will coordinate. At present, if you want this to have some relevance to HEROs, at least have them support the Deck as a whole (though a few of them are general standalone stuff anyway). 

 

I did give you a basic template in that PM; please use it (and yes, just edit this post with stuff)

 

Once you add the rest of the stuff, we can give you a more precise critique. 

[Brianatorj]

why not try something new? besides its work in progress its used to summon a BIGGER card ;) (this card is a spoilter) :D also everybody if your comment is negative or about the previous problem please delete it. also sakura is right look at sakura's Elemental HERO Spear Angel :P I got my ideas for my cards of sakura so blame sakura for all lifes yugioh related problems! (I don't mean it </3)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

...there's also Flower Valkyria too, albeit being designed long before Shadow Mist became R4 spam / Mask Change fodder (though they're still Warrior and within Levels that they can feasibly make)...

 

But anyway, you're still missing its ATK and DEF. Right now, I guess HEROs could tech Veiler or some Level 1 Tuner for plays into this (or 2 if you want to run the 3s for some reason), but I'd think 6 or 7 would be a better Level. That, and being a Dragon messes up the thing with them being Warriors (some exceptions exist for Jaden's manga HEROs, but...)

 

And yeah, where's Light Dragon?

[Brianatorj]

im workin on it don't got much time with school and stuff :P

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

You're kinda missing the requirements to even make this card; assuming it's either the standard 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner business (generic) or it explicitly requires a HERO non-Tuner.

 

At least stats are there now.

[Brianatorj]

I FOUND OUTTTT THANK YOU WORLD

[TF2_The_Scout]

You forgot the Tuner. You need to state the number of tuner monsters. It's mandatory for synchro monsters except for oddball cards that summon themselves through other means. Also, OCG fix.

 

"Once per turn: You can banish 1 monster from your Graveyard; Inflict 500 damage to your opponent. If "Elemental HERO Light Dragon" is in your Graveyard: You can Special Summon this card in Attack Position."

 

Card names go in parentheses. Also, you still need to specify where you summon this from. By not saying where to summon it from, it implies that it can be summoned from ANYWHERE. One more thing, I suggest placing a hard OPT on the second effect. Just me, but this may create some kind of unintended rank 7 XYZ loop.

[Trebuchet MS]

After all the effort it took just to get the card link into this thread, I figure I'd might as well spare even more effort and directly edit the img tags into the post.

 

There's still a lot of room for improvement in card design, and we don't even know what Light Dragon is. In fact, I'm not even certain why this is an Elemental HERO too.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Let's assume it's just 1 Tuner like every other Synchro in existence (except for Scar-Red Nova expies and manga Goodwin's Synchros).

 

But yeah, there isn't much reason to link it to Elemental HEROs at present; or really even if it had an effect HEROs wanted, the materials aren't easy to make. You borrowed from Spear Angel, right? Then, you can just take the summon requirements too, which is basically "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Elemental HERO" monsters". 

 

Until Light Dragon is added, not much we can really say about this card b/c it's reliant on this other card to do whatever. Maybe it's another 7, or it might be something else. 

[Brianatorj]

It a spoiler :D something BIG is coming up in casual multiples! Wait for it! :D