Corinthian Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Nice chapter Kale. You just had to leave a cliff hanger... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 *lé gasp* quite easily my favorite chapter thus far! already feeling more solid than the previous volume. stellar... oh, and how does that subscription thingy work again? i'm not really intranezz savvy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Nice chapter Kale. You just had to leave a cliff hanger... yep. ^_^ i had to keep you guys tuned in. im working on the next chapter already... *lé gasp* quite easily my favorite chapter thus far! already feeling more solid than the previous volume. stellar... oh' date=' and how does that subscription thingy work again? i'm not really intranezz savvy...[/quote'] thanks for reading my friend! it does seem more solid... anywho, if you would like a subscription, the way it works is i put your name down, and when a new chapter comes out i will PM you. ^_^ simple as that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 that simple, eh? well if you wouldn't mind --- yes i'd liek a subscription pl0x! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 that simple' date=' eh? well if you wouldn't mind --- yes i'd liek a subscription pl0x! :)[/quote'] will do. ;) thank you for shopping at Edge of Justice. ^_^ anywho, anyone else going to read this? i bet tomorrow there will be the latecomers... anyone that is reading, please post! 72 people have voted, and there are only about 10 different people replying! i wonder why! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n1ghtm4ze Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Great chapter to start the new volume, when its the next chapter coming? Can't wait to read it. I also want a subscriptiom, plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Great chapter to start the new volume' date=' when its the next chapter coming? Can't wait to read it. I also want a subscriptiom, plz.[/quote'] wow, a new person! Welcome Welcome! did you read the entire thing? O.o anywho, thank you for reading. i really appreciate that. *adds to Subscriber list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 so Joel is some kind of conqueror bent on a global totalitarian empire or something like that.like the new abilities that Kal have due to cyborg enhancements,he's like twice as better of a duelist than normal nowfirst the negative levels,then negative attacks...I really should work up on those too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Survivor Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 THis is great! I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 so Joel is some kind of conqueror bent on a global totalitarian empire or something like that.like the new abilities that Kal have due to cyborg enhancements' date='he's like twice as better of a duelist than normal nowfirst the negative levels,then negative attacks...I really should work up on those too[/quote'] talk to Star about that... he made them. ^_^ they are fun to plan a duel around.. thanks for noticing the fact that Joel is a conqueror. XD im glad you liked it. ;) THis is great! I love it. thanks! im glad you think so. want a subscription? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 seeing Joel's methods of conquest...he ought to be associated with Communism since he invoke the people to rise up against the leaders & then enforce his rule before leaving for another city it would seem that he got control of nearly the whole world except for Neo-Domino & another city... also, the marks of knowledge are interesting, have Joel once had a devil's deal or what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 seeing Joel's methods of conquest...he ought to be associated with Communism since he invoke the people to rise up against the leaders & then enforce his rule before leaving for another city it would seem that he got control of nearly the whole world except for Neo-Domino & another city... also' date=' the marks of knowledge are interesting, have Joel once had a devil's deal or what?[/quote'] thank you for the rep. ^_^ i appreciate it. A lot. ^_^ yep, he has gone on a quest for the last three months (spoiler alert!) and has captured all but the best two cities, Neo-Domino and Aequitas. He saved them for last. ;) but i am getting ahead of myself. XD i will explain the markings in due time. ^_^ its not a deal with the devil, but something i think you will like. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 but will you show Neo-Domino in your fanfic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 but will you show Neo-Domino in your fanfic? of course. ;) but it wont come in conflict with the 5d's storyline. XD that might mess the fic up. and i want to keep originality. but it will go to Neo-Domino. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 seeing Joel's methods of conquest...he ought to be associated with Communism since he invoke the people to rise up against the leaders & then enforce his rule before leaving for another city it would seem that he got control of nearly the whole world except for Neo-Domino & another city... also' date=' the marks of knowledge are interesting, have Joel once had a devil's deal or what?[/quote'] thank you for the rep. ^_^ i appreciate it. A lot. ^_^ yep, he has gone on a quest for the last three months (spoiler alert!) and has captured all but the best two cities, Neo-Domino and Aequitas. He saved them for last. ;) but i am getting ahead of myself. XD i will explain the markings in due time. ^_^ its not a deal with the devil, but something i think you will like. ^_^ Indeed, Joel is up to something big... Clever way to conquer. As for the mark... Sounds almost mechanical, but since it simply almost 'magically' appeared on the people's hand... Three months huh... Almost seems like he waited until Kal was out of the picture... Or perhaps Bill was IN. Cyborg Kal has some interesting upgrades, mixed with his somewhat psychic abilities, he will be a force to be reckoned with. And as for an improved deck... Well, hoh boy. I think i remember those negative monsters from your contest... I may just look em up again :). It's been a while. But after this lovely chapter, it's all worth it (even though we haven't even seen a whole duel yet! Joel's scene makes up for it). Looks like Joel will be the main antagonist, or at the very least is a main servant of them. How the cyborg project ties in... Don't quite know yet. Anyway, awesome job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 I've just realised something Kal having emotions like a real human.Maybe there is someone in the force who believes in Kal & purposely retained his human qualities while giving the cyborg implants to strengthen him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Thanks Aelsthla. ^_^ I always appreciate how in depth you go. :D You are on the tight track, which is kinda cool. ^_^ And WYHE, that too is an interesting point. You will just see what is going on with him soon enough. ^_^ Btw, 1300 replies. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 Kal seemed to accept his new body a little too easy for my liking. somewhat nonchalant. okay, yeah, he's got all these cool new things he can do and all. but still, (i think) becoming a cyborg should have hit him harder... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 He was on that wall for a pretty long time.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 well, that too is an interesting point that I can't get far into... Because it will spoil the rest of the fic. But TotalObelisk does bring an amazing counter: he was on that wall for a while. XD You will see what I am alluding to in the next couple of chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tankiller Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 That was one of your best works yet. The beganing was amazing and peaked my interest. World domination shure is fun. Kal's new gadets are amazing, I would love to have a dual disk in my arm and a devise in my head that can find almost anything and even tell you card effects. His new cards are also great. I can't wait for the next exciting instolment of the EDGE OF JUSTICE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 That was one of your best works yet. The beganing was amazing and peaked my interest. World domination shure is fun. Kal's new gadets are amazing' date=' I would love to have a dual disk in my arm and a devise in my head that can find almost anything and even tell you card effects. His new cards are also great. I can't wait for the next exciting instolment of the EDGE OF JUSTICE![/quote'] lulz, thanks! i appreciate that you liked the newest things that i concocted. ;) actually, this is what i wanted to write about all along, i just had to get around the problem of all the characters that i accepted from the first card contest. XD thus, the tournament. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vamki Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 God...i must admit that you read my mind about the newest chapter.When I see the negative attack,I thought my idea which is aslo increase LP but before I continue reading I tell myself it is not really possible the same perhap the dude got another thing in is mind.But you gimme a surpise(10/10). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 OMG, chapter 16 is finally up! HUZZA!!! It is brilliant! I had never expected it to be like this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 God...i must admit that you read my mind about the newest chapter.When I see the negative attack' date='I thought my idea which is aslo increase LP but before I continue reading I tell myself it is not really possible the same perhap the dude got another thing in is mind.But you gimme a surpise(10/10).[/quote'] Welcome, vamki. ^_^ i notice that this is your first time posting here, and i thank you. im glad you decided to post... thank you for reading. would you like to be on the Subscription List, to get a PM when the new chapter comes out? OMG' date=' chapter 16 is finally up! HUZZA!!! It is brilliant! I had never expected it to be like this![/quote'] thanks! ^_^ i appreciate that. would you like to have a subscription as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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