schyshter Posted October 14, 2008 Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Kal seemed to accept his new body a little too easy for my liking. somewhat nonchalant. okay' date=' yeah, he's got all these cool new things he can do and all. but still, (i think) becoming a cyborg should have hit him harder...[/quote'] well' date=' that too is an interesting point that I can't get far into... Because it will spoil the rest of the fic. [b']But TotalObelisk does bring an amazing counter: he was on that wall for a while. XD[/b] You will see what I am alluding to in the next couple of chapters. he was on that wall for 3 months. right. but, how long was he conscious during that period? as it is now, there aren't any hints that Kal remembers anything that happened throughout the course of his "remodeling". in fact, the events that occurred during his escape always left him surprised... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 Kal seemed to accept his new body a little too easy for my liking. somewhat nonchalant. okay' date=' yeah, he's got all these cool new things he can do and all. but still, (i think) becoming a cyborg should have hit him harder...[/quote'] well' date=' that too is an interesting point that I can't get far into... Because it will spoil the rest of the fic. [b']But TotalObelisk does bring an amazing counter: he was on that wall for a while. XD[/b] You will see what I am alluding to in the next couple of chapters. he was on that wall for 3 months. right. but, how long was he conscious during that period? as it is now, there aren't any hints that Kal remembers anything that happened throughout the course of his "remodeling". in fact, the events that occurred during his escape always left him surprised... man, i really wish i could tell you the reason, but i cant. XD youll just have to wait until the next chapter, which i have started on. ;) you have very good questions.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 alrighty, bump for the day. ^_^ dont want this to fall too far into the mix... anyone want spoilers for the next chapter? ^_^ Chapter 17: Escape This chapter will do with a lot of people's escape, and maybe not the person that you are thinking. Will Kal beat Tyler? whos to say that he will? Remember that Alina is still in the city of Aequitas. What is she up to now? Remember the mob that was forming outside the police station when the news about Kal was released on television? whats going on three months later? now i know these arent true 'spoilers' but they are interesting tid bits of info to get you interested in the fic chapter. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted October 15, 2008 Report Share Posted October 15, 2008 i've just went over a few of the other ygo fan fics here. lol! they don't even come close! keep up the good work. now ima do what i should have done a long time ago... +rep to joo mah friend... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 wow, thank you! I appreciate that a lot. And you were around when the first contest was made. ^_^ good times, good times. Chapter 17: Escape will be rolling out soon, I just got to get the thoughts down on the computer. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 Bump for the day. ^_^ remember that i released some interesting points about chapter 17, and so far only one person has looked and posted about it.. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 Interesting....I........dies of suspense* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 Interesting spoilers. Can't wait for the fan-fic. Hope Kal wins! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 Escape,eh...maybe the police had detained the mob protecting Kal from arrest & now they will be escaping...just a thought Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Kale, do you know when the next chapter will be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tankiller Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 I was wondering about Alina, and looks like we will find out. I still can't wait, the suspense is killing me. x_x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 sorry guys, i dont know when the next chapter will be out. i got real busy in school, so i havnt had a time to type anything up. i have the next chapter planned out in my mind, i just need to type it. unfortunately i dont have time anymore... sorry... it will be worth the wait though. promise that. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Cool, can't wait. School sucks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 *sigh* oh well. your work is always top notch. take your time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Cool' date=' can't wait. School sucks...[/quote'] here here! i agree wholeheartedly. *sigh* oh well. your work is always top notch. take your time... thanks! i will try to get it out asap though. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 sorry guys' date=' i dont know when the next chapter will be out. i got real busy in school, so i havnt had a time to type anything up. i have the next chapter planned out in my mind, i just need to type it. unfortunately i dont have time anymore... sorry... it will be worth the wait though. promise that. ;)[/quote'] one of the reasons why all schools should be destroyed with an Anti Tank Rocket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 i just got back from school.tomorrow, i'm going on a four-day field trip. school is not ALWAYS bad, though. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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