J123 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 The new edit you produced was amazing anyway battle will be up after completing a splice order :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 thank you :D i await to see who made it and who didnt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Round 1!:1. Konnie5400 - Yuric - The Demonic Human, OMG so lucky you wanted to be in the first round and you are! And you were the first name I pulled outta the hat! All names are put in order. 2.CamosityDude - The Mona Lisa Reborn 3. Necro Lord - The Fiend Chicken 4. Monkeybuoy2 - Evil Hero Tartaras Demon The Battle Begins...Deep down below the earths layer, deep, deep down is another universe, a universe of pain, a universe of torcher, a universe of death legend has it that anyone who was brought here was never seen again... This universe turned everyone against each other and the last man standing was the new ruler of this world. But these monsters never knew that. It was only when something really strange started to happen...The Demonic Human was cold scared and hungry. But they were both to scared to say a word! It was until it was so freezing cold The Demonic Human had to speak up. ''Im freezing cold!'' he exclaimed.'' Buakk! Buakk Buakk Buakk Buakk!'' (In chicken language that meant, Are ya!?! I don't feel a thing! It's times like this when I love having feathers)!!! Lucky Chicken. Thought the demon to itself. Im gonna go find some shelter. ''Hey! Look an abandoned tent!'' He screamt aloud. The Demon floated towards it, but, as soon as he moved he heard a cry of pain. Buaaaaaakk! The demon looked back and saw a chicken corpse with an arrow in it's neck. ''Damn missed!'' Whispered the Tartarus Demon to himself and quickly fled before he was spotted. ''What the!?! Wait a second if that thing hit this chicken and before I moved I was in front of him... That arrow was aimed at me!!!''Meanwhile... The Mona Lisa waited and waited for her servant to return. ''Well?!?'' She desperately asked. ''Have you fulfilled your mission???'' ''Is the chosen one dead???'' ''Im sorry master.'' Said Tarturas. ''I shot the arrow at 100% accuracy but...'' ''But?!?, BUT!?!?! I HAVE NO TIME FOR BUTS! Lisa screamt. ''I banish you to the dungeon of pain and torture!'' ''Tartarus was furious. ''Look at you, you reborn corpse! I could snap you with one punch!You ugly thing. You think because you are part human you are better than me!?! Well think again!!! And you dare speak to me like that!?!'' At that moment he grabbed her hand and snapped it. Her then pushed on onto the floor and jumped on her back until he heard the snap of a broken spine. ''The fool knew nothing of whom she was dealing with! Hmmph!'' And with that Tartarus legged it before her guards came. Survivors: Monkeybuoy2, Konnie5400 The Dead: CamosityDude, Necro Lord. Sorry dead dudes! Congrats Survivors you have lived through the first round... Extra coming soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 nice story, but who made it to the next round? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 lol soz dat was an accident the real story is yet to be made and it will be longer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 IME-A-SCARED!!!!!!!!!!NectoLord kicked my behind when in Jamefs contst! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Lol well read the story now :D looks like tables have turned! Again, sorry dead dudes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 woah that was a great story but it should be longer and i do hope i get in the next round Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 LONGER! that story is 20 lines if u count it. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 when care you going to make the next round and the extrayeah i was hoping for something like a 50 line story.lol:Lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Yay, my cards the chosen one :).....but ime still frightend. Great story :) :) :).....ime scared of Monkeybuoy2's card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 extra is coming soon and a new round is every 3 days50 lines 4 evry single story! OMG wow lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 who's next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Extra for round 1 ..... Tartarus was on a rampage so he decided to go and finish of the chosen one, once and for all. They met. Face to face. ''You, it was you who tried to kill me?!? Asked Yuric. ''I tried and I failed I'm trying again and this time I shall suceed!'' Tartarus exlaimed while leaping towards her with a mighty sword in his hand. But Yuric swiftly dodged. ''You don't wanna get me mad... If you don't leave now. I, will, KILL, you.'' Her pupils dissapeared and her eyes turned dark red. Tartarus was shocked in fear for a moment, then he finally got some words out. YYYou, yyyou don't scare me! Tartarus jumped towards her and squeezed her neck. Her face was turning purple. He felt sorrowful. He let go. If he had killed this demon he would be the only one in the world left (or so he thought). ''Go. Go now before I must kill you.'' Yuric hesitated, then fled.Monkeybuoy2 You win the positive rep! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 yeah its almost like maybe three pages of a book haha 50 line.lol:Lol:oh boy i cant wait for the next round man i want to go now!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Congratz Monkeybuoy2, and thanks for sparing my card :) :) :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 also it seems like you made yuric the most powerful demon alive it must feel great to be the winner huh konnie and monkeybuoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 lol :D I shall draw next battles names now but the actual battle is in 3 days time All names were randomnly pulled out of my Yankees hat :D Names are... 1.DeMeNTeD 2.J0V1 3. OMGAKITTY 4. And finally the noob PWNer... X-L YEAHHHH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I did? I wasnt aiming for that acualy...but if J123 whants it like that then ok :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 This new world brings out the most powerfulness in every spirit. Some take longer than overs to discover their true power... Konnies card was average strength if you think it was that strong wait till u c otha stories :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 woof! Awesome story! Good job to everybody who I "killed", thanks for the rep, so for round two, do we make another card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Well I wasn't thinking of that but now you mention it, actually yeah! But dont post card until you see your name again in round 2And sorry cant giv urep 2day iv given out max 4 2dai remind me 2morrow plz :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 ok will do -searches for which card to choose next- does our 2nd card have to be a fiend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 A Dark Beast Type :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 woof! Awesome story! Good job to everybody who I "killed"' date=' thanks for the rep, so for round two, do we make another card?[/quote'] How will that go in the story? or is the last battle of round 1 how the first story ends? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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