fategazer Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 Well my opinion is I love it. 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Apologies for the lack of update. I really need to focus on schoolwork, but unless otherwise stated, the next chapter will be released sometime next week. On another note, Hopeless Paradise is now available on FanFiction.Net. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5516227/1/Hopeless_Paradise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Yay~ I was waiting for an update D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Sounds awesome Roxy ^^ Hope there's a new Chapter up soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 I've sent a part of the chapter for C-2 to beta read, and Bel the Ripper gave me some help as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Can't wait. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 As I said in the responce PM, good job so far ^_\\\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 ^I'll get to the revisions you suggested in a little bit and get right the next part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 I love the new version..^_\\\Next chapter is gonna be fun at this rate ^_\\\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Hey, are you still taking character suggestions? Great work so far by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I'm not sure he is anymore..He barely accepted my charecter 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Hey' date=' are you still taking character suggestions? Great work so far by the way[/quote'] No, I have enough characters as it is. When I get to the point when I need more characters, I'll either write some more myself or reopen character submissions if need be. I'm not sure he is anymore..He barely accepted my charecter 0.o Boy did I screw up with him, but I really want to improve. I'm really sorry that this next chapter is taking so long. School is getting a pain since finals are coming up. Chapter 8 will be out by the winter break at the latest. I apologize for keeping you all waiting so long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Uh..don't worry..Btw..what did you mean by "screw up with him"? 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I didn't exactly portray him close enough to your app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 It's ok, I don't mind waiting. The more time it takes, the better it gets ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 Roxas man your killing me with this wait ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 I really got to focus on school, and other internet distractions get in the way. Not to mention I'm having major trouble trying to come up with the trials. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Just ask me for help? 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I re-read the part with Quint in chapter 7 and promptly did a spit take. Oh, and to add onto his accent, he can use the word Herr, or Fraulein when addressing someone. A boy or girl, respectively. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Why? I thought of that, I'll do that when I can. Chapter 2 is now available on FanFiction.Net, and a link can now be found on the first post. Minor adjustments have been made, but the overall plot remains unchanged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 It was funny. That's why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Okay guys, it's been way too long, and not enough work on Chapter 8 is being done. I've decided that for this chapter, I'll be adding it in multiple parts. Basically, there now is more to read, but Chapter 8 is not fully complete. I figured that you guys should get at least something in the meantime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Good read, so are the swords there digivices? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Good read' date=' so are the swords there digivices?[/quote'] -calls Dom's sword to be a Zweihander- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Good read' date=' so are the swords there digivices?[/quote'] Or the other way around; are their digivices swords? Daniel's sword, if you go with swords for the rest of them, needs to be one of these. Or two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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