Phantom Roxas Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 I had intended that the digivice and the swords to be separate, but being the same item works as well. As for Dominic and Daniel's swords, noted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Cool read so far,Lance is kind of a bad ass..XDWanna see more soon XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 The way I see it, the following Trials will be released in this order. - Lance and Derek- Daniel and Sheena- Yusuke and Quintinius- Kekio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Go Lance! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Alright, I added chapter 3 to FanFiction.Net and improved the chapter here accordingly. I suggest re-reading it, although the only significant change is the scene where Alex visits Daniel's house. At least, I intend to make it significant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Yay, lolHope you finish this next one soon XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Since this week is review week, I really don't think I'll be getting much homework. At least, I hope not. Either way, you'll get the next one this week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Yay! =DYankee iz happy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
//Zeromaru// Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 Dude this rocks! hurry up and do more. I want to know whats gonna happen. :) Haha. But No seriously please. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2009 I just sent the second part of Chapter 8 to Yankee for beta-reading, so expect it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Apologies for the double post, but the second part of Chapter 8 has been added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 12, 2009 Report Share Posted December 12, 2009 Nice, I found the trial a bit simple. I mean, it was interesting, but it didn't provide a challenge for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Does anybody have dibs on the requisite late comer yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 You mean characters like Kari, Ken, and Ryo? No one has claimed that kind of character, and I have no use for another member of the team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 XD Love how you designed Derek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Nice' date=' I found the trial a bit simple. I mean, it was interesting, but it didn't provide a challenge for them.[/quote'] I suppose you're right. Once the chapter is completed, there might be some justification. XD Love how you designed Derek I'm glad you like him. So, next trial is Yusuke and Quint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted December 13, 2009 Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Are you going to use one of the trials I suggested? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted December 15, 2009 Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Chapter 8 was really well written. How long do you plan to continue this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 The story as a whole? I intend to see this story through to the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Why not have a villain-turned-hero? Every season has one (Adventure-Gatomon, 02-Ken, Tamers-Impmon, Frontier-Koichi, Savers-Ikuto and Falcomon) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Having a hero turning into a villain is always cooler. Especially if that hero was a badass beforehand. Especially. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Just to make sure, has everyone read Chapter 3 again to look at the revisions? I changed some things that I might be significant later on. Oh, I do have plans similar to what Dresden and Fenrir are talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 I read it. Not sure about the others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 By any chance are you going to use the Norn characters I made? Or Roscuro (this one I am inclined to believe you won't) Or Maja? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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