Enma Kozato Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 And I will continue to raeg. >:Y RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEG! Anyways, how could that "secret" detail you have NOT be this: Kana had after-school stuff and Aqua and Kari usually walked over there to pick her up, since it wasn’t too far.*half-mimes creator* *initiating RAEG spam punt* El, it's his fan-fic he can make frikin duct tape fall from the sky. and so that people walk on the atmosphere instead of the surface...which would be kinda fun...I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Cool story, Fusion, I mean it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 @Chase*Punt* You can't half mime me, its all or nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Anyway Idungetit. It's Aqua and Kari? So what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 ...I don't like revealing stuff, so I'll just address that at the start of 11..And thanks Deus, I'm glad you like it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 but creator, my newlyfound miming ability was only at 50% at the time of the miming,and i can't mime power levels...just yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 @Fusion:Well I just finished Chapters 3-5 and I was loling at how seriously you were taking some of the stuff. Particularly about bacon being a powerful negotiation tool. Anyway, I'm still liking this so I'll be sure to keep reading and letting you know how each chapter goes over with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Lol thanks Andx, El really does love bacon Apparently he and Chase had an epic debate of bacon vs deer jerky so I referenced it >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 it was a retarded debate like, a year ago. Talk about holding a grudge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Yeah, but it was the most EPIC retarded debate ever! >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 It sounded funny to me >.>I got a little start on chapter 11, but my anatomy teacher assigned a bish assignment over the weekend by email that I never got, so I got to do it tonight -___-But I know what I'm writing, so no worries there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 @ChaseYou'll never be as good a mime as I. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Well Fusion, either my interest increased or your writing got better from Ch. 6 on because I just spent the past half hour to an hour reading 6 through 10, lol. No real breaks or anything either, I just kept reading through. And now the cliffhangers have me waiting on Ch. 11. Anyway, good work with this so far. I'm looking forward to future chapters and future references to the random occurrences on YCM, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 @ChaseYou'll never be as good a mime as I.= Idungetit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 @NexevMy only ability (as in power, like Black's Cero and DMG's Vampire stuff) is the ability to Mime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Remember me to give you a coin for your mimes, Creator. I still don't get it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 @Fusion - Kari and Aqua were together to pick up kana.....Aqua was there, bleeding.... ... I swear, if Kari's hurt in any way, I'll hijack that fic and make it so she isn't >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Well Fusion, either my interest increased or your writing got better from Ch. 6 on because I just spent the past half hour to an hour reading 6 through 10, lol. No real breaks or anything either, I just kept reading through.And now the cliffhangers have me waiting on Ch. 11. Anyway, good work with this so far. I'm looking forward to future chapters and future references to the random occurrences on YCM, lol. 0.oWow..Nice to hear :DGuys, I'm sorry Chapter 11 hasn't come out yet, I still gotta get used to my school routine and managing my time properly (I know it's been a month, what, you wanna fightaboudit?)But I should be able to write a lot during some classes today, I really hope to get it done today, as I just realized how many people are reading this story (a lot).So I'll do my best, thanks for the patience :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Ya I wannafightaboutit*flaming left hook*loljkfinish ze chapter or give uz ze preview yes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 I'm logging off soon so I can finish homework then get right to finishing it, I made some good progress during school today :3I will do my best to get it out tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Chapter 11 is up :DI don't know if my writing was the best, as I worked as fast as I could to get the chapter out quick since I've been keeping you guys waiting.But one thing to know, I was originally going to make 11 one giant chapter with 2 parts, but it occurred to me that I could probably just break it off at the end of Part 1 and just make Part 2 into Chapter 12.I went with that since I haven't written 12 yet and I felt bad on holding out on you guys, but I'm saying this so you know that whatever makes no sense or hasn't been explained in Chapter 11 should be explained in 12. And I'll work on 12 today, I'd love to get it done.Anyway, hope you guys enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Yes, kill of the day.that was really awesome. I mean the fight part, I didn't have time to read anything else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Another awesome chapter, Fusion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Lolz, I was just chilling in the sewers when s*** hits fan. Like, just taking a snooze, then boom, s*** and fan have huge boxing match. Rocky vs Drago boxing, the s*** is walloping the fan like an abusive husband. I would so live in the sewer. XD Oh, nice dramatic cutoff of Life. So is Caine on of the inactive we are fighting with? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 1 - You didn't give any logical explanation to how Aqua healed.2 - Dude seriously talk about moral issues.What kind of cop sits there while a kid gets shotted in the head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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