Nexev Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 It was the mysterious guy with the cloak and doodad. The doodad can heal somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 ... Teh frick? >.> Not to be mena... but why do I care so much about Aqua? To be honest, I would have fainted on the spot, seeing that blood. Freaking out was fine, but caring? Not so much... more just "GET IT AWAY! FIX IT!" Otherwise, you got me pretty well.... STALKER! >=T How did you know I'm a skilled Marksman? lolPikachufurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 1 - You didn't give any logical explanation to how Aqua healed.2 - Dude seriously talk about moral issues.What kind of cop sits there while a kid gets shotted in the head. 1.Like Nex said, the mysterious individual who has not been revealed yet did it somehow. I SAID some stuff that was unclear in chapter 11 would be made clear in chapter 12 (since it was supposed to be a giant 2 parter)2. Roxas had no time to react as Pikachu immediately RAEGed and Creator did it from far away, so he couldn't identify the shooter at that moment. Not to mention Tim ripped the throats out of those doctors, Roxas ain't too sympathetic with that kind of brutality :/ ... Teh frick? >.> Not to be mena... but why do I care so much about Aqua? To be honest, I would have fainted on the spot, seeing that blood. Freaking out was fine, but caring? Not so much... more just "GET IT AWAY! FIX IT!"Otherwise, you got me pretty well.... STALKER! >=T How did you know I'm a skilled Marksman?lolPikachufurry Well, you stumbled upon an innocent girl lying in blood and you freaked out. Hearing that she might die, you decided to go to the hospital and see her through, as D.L also seemed extremely upset by her attack, so you were also being there for a friend.I made you a good marksman because you throw Lanzas all the time >.>I wrote a good chunk of chapter 12, lots of action in dispersed parts so far, now I'm trying to tie things together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Honestly Taint, your very very very emotional. If you saw what could have been a corpse, you would flip the f*** out like a weasel.(It's a MSPA reference, don't worry about it). And if she dies you'll blame yourself for not being there earlier and all that monolouging nonsense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 I know who the misterious person is and I know how he healed Aqua, but I ain't tell you, either will do the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 I was happy reading this until... you quoted Ike... *Fires Missile at Fusion* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 I quoted Ike?Did he say that thing about the lottery >.>And Creator, wait til you see a move you pull off in Chapter 12.Next chapter (I'm writing it now) will be full of action and should wrap up the mini-war going on right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 @FusionNo you said 'I fight for my friends.' ... I just puked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 ...LOLOMG I didn't even notice xDWell, that's part of Chris' personality, can't help it >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 I quoted Ike?Did he say that thing about the lottery >.>Actually it was the whole "Fighting for my friends" thing. Anyway, fun chapter Fusion. Random and entertaining with club Pikachu. Anyway good job, I'll be waiting to see how it wraps up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Should be soon.I hope >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 I liked it, even though I don't know crap about fencing, I'm a dual wielder irl, but hey, I don't mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted October 7, 2010 Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 NOTHING ABOUT ME!!! F- FOR YOU! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 Wow, that's petty. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 *Shoots BT in the head with an arrow* Calm down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 *Shoots BT in the head with an arrow* Calm down. lol no fair.... I have no fighting style >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 That's cause you realized on a stupid watch. Which broke. I don't even have a bio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 Nev, in due time your bio will come (chapter 12's end is getting nearer, facebook's distracting though >.>)BT, you will in due time. And no one from Akatsuki is there, this is a FTK chaptet with Club Pikachu and some Mods thrown in there :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 I know who the hood kid is. Too bad for you guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 You do?Oh yeah guys, I fudged up.I made a goof.I did a phail.I lost the game.The hooded kid is just supposed to have dark hair, but icy blue eyes.I'm editing the fixed description now.Ice, I'm predicting a RAEG, but Powerforce should come in sometime, so there's something :3*shot* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 Well that blew it. I now know who he is, the only suprise being that I don't think said guy likes Aqua or Deus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 Nev, you don't know who it is, trust me.You'll know why later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 “MAYDAY, MAYDAY, WE HAVE A SITUATION! THERE ARE TWO MISSING SISTERS UNACCOUNTED FOR! I reads this and died. KAAARIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! ;___________________________; But yeah, aside from that Roxas + fighting with the Key to the city = winMods being a police force = win But'Flame and Roxas have been the same rank. Always. When one got promoted to super, so did the other. Write chapter 12. NAO >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 Actually, FD was a mod WAY before PR. THEN they got promoted together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 There are no Super Mods, just Mods.I liked the mayday part, if DEF were a drama on TV, that would be the part where dramatic, upbeat music starts to play and everyone's heart rate skyrockets :PAnd I'm writing it now :TIf not out tonight, I should be able to edit it in tomorrow morning >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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