Yu-Gi-Oh! New Generation Dueling CCG

[Spikeball]

Still forgotten:

[url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/231009-yu-gi-oh-new-generation-dueling-ccg/page__st__420__p__4849524#entry4849524][size="6"][color="#FF0000"]THIS[/color][/size][/url]

and I would like to have everyone create 1 archtype for set 2 and more generic cards. That would be fair

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

OK After thinking about it for a minute or two here you have the first part of my Submittion

9 Cards

[color="#9932CC"]Fusions

|True Flame Swordsman|0||Warrior/Fusion/Effect|Fire|7||2500|2000|Flame Swordsman + Blue Flame Swordsman
This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. Once per turn you can Remove 2 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. This card cannot inflict battle Damage to your opponent during a turn you use this effect. If this card would be removed from the field by your opponent (either by battle or by card effect)you can remove a FIRE monster in your hand instead.|

|Blastwing Flying Salamander|0||Reptile/Fusion/Effect|WIND|8||2800|2500|1 WIND monster + 1 FIRE monster + 1 Reptile monster
This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card destroys a monster and sent it to the Graveyard, you can inflict damage equal to half that monsters original ATK, additionally if the Damage inflicted this way is 1000 or Higher you can select 1 set Spell or Trap Card on the field and destroy it.|

|Crystal Shard's Dragon|0||Dragon/Fusion/Effect|WATER|6||1800|1200|1 Dragon-Type monster + 1 WATER monster
This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is Special Summoned you can send any number of cards in your hand to the Graveyard to return the same number of cards on the field to its owner's hand.|[/color]

[color="#4169E1"]Rituals

|Blade's Dancer - Performace of Sword|0||Warrior/Ritual/Effect|Earth|6||1950|1850|This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Ritual of the Dancing Sand". When this card is Ritual Summoned succesfully you can select 1 monster you control. When this card attacks it gains half the ATK of the selected monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard and "Ritual of the Dancing Sand" is in your Graveyard you can add "Ritual of the Dancing Sand" to your Deck and draw 1 card.|

|Forged Insect- Javelin Beetle|0||Insect/Ritual/Effect|Earth|8||2450|2550|This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Ritual of Blacksmiths". This card inflicts piercing Damage. Once per turn you can select 1 monster on the field. The effect of that monster is negated and this card can activate that effect during this turn as its own effect.|

|Furious King - Super War-Lion|0||Insect/Ritual/Effect|Earth|7||2300|2100|This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Ritual of the Wild Pack". Once per turn you can select 1 monster on the field and half that monster's ATK until the End Phase. Additionally, once per turn, after this card attacks a Defense Position monster, it can attack once more.|[/color]

[color="#808000"]Ritual Spells

|Ritual of the Wild Pack|0||Spell Card|Spell||Ritual|||This card is used to Ritual Summon "Furious King - Super War-Lion". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level equals to 7 or higher from the field or your hand. When this card and "Furious King - Super War-Lion" are both in the Graveyard, you can shuffle both cards into your Deck to destroy 1 face-up card on the field.|

|Ritual of the Blacksmiths|0||Spell Card|Spell||Ritual|||This card is used to Ritual Summon "Forged Insect- Javelin Beetle". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level equals exactly 8 from the field or your hand. When a Ritual monster is Special Summoned you can remove this card from your Graveyard to add 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck and add it to your hand.|

|Ritual of the Dancing Sand|0||Spell Card|Spell||Ritual|||This card is used to Ritual Summon "Blade's Dancer - Performace of Sword". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level equals to 6 or higher from the field or your hand. Once while this card is in your Graveyard, negate 1 attack from a monster your opponent controls that targets an EARTH monster you control.|
[/color]
I'll Post 4-5 Generic Spell/Traps Later

[.Nu-13]

No at all Fusions, unless you give some card to fuse them

[quote name='-Dae-' timestamp='1293298838' post='4882550']
|Blade's Dancer - Performace of Sword|0||Warrior/Ritual/Effect|Earth|6||1950|1850|This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Ritual of the Dancing Sand". When this card is Ritual Summoned succesfully you can select 1 monster you control. When this card attacks it gains half the ATK of the selected monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard and "Ritual of the Dancing Sand" is in your Graveyard you can add "Ritual of the Dancing Sand" to your Deck and draw 1 card.|
[/quote]

Why the ATK is that weird? Just round it to 1900 or 2000. Effect is ok, but tell me, does the monster need to be still on the field to apply the ATK gain effect? Either way, ok.

[quote name='-Dae-' timestamp='1293298838' post='4882550']
|Forged Insect- Javelin Beetle|0||Insect/Ritual/Effect|Earth|8||2450|2550|This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Ritual of Blacksmiths". This card inflicts piercing Damage. Once per turn you can select 1 monster on the field. The effect of that monster is negated and this card can activate that effect during this turn as its own effect.|
[/quote]

Ack. Dunno. Sure, it requires to tribute exactly 8, but I'm curious. But seeing as the last effect steals only trigger effects... ok for now

[quote name='-Dae-' timestamp='1293298838' post='4882550']
|Furious King - Super War-Lion|0||Insect/Ritual/Effect|Earth|7||2300|2100|This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Ritual of the Wild Pack". Once per turn you can select 1 monster on the field and half that monster's ATK until the End Phase. Additionally, once per turn, after this card attacks a Defense Position monster, it can attack once more.|
[/quote]

Walking Shrink. OK I think. Multi-attack works even when it doesn't destroy the monster... whatever, ok.

All Ritual Spells accepted

[quote name='Spikeball' timestamp='1292273387' post='4849524']
|Plasmatic Binding|0|SET1|Spell Card|Spell||None|||Equip 1 monster you control to 1 monster your opponent controls. The equipped monster cannot attack or change its Battle Position. During each of your opponent's Standby Phases inflict Damage to the opponent equal to the equipping monster's Level x100.|
[/quote]

Seems fine. Doubt that it'll be used, but ok

[quote name='Spikeball' timestamp='1292273387' post='4849524']
|Seal of Sol|0|SET1|Trap Card|Trap||None|||You can only activate this card when a face-up monster you control is attacked. Choose 1 of the following effects:
- Destroy the attacking monster and inflict Damage to your opponent equal to the half of the destroyed monster's ATK
- Negate the attack and increase your Life Points by the attacked monster's DEF.|
[/quote]

Sakuretsu Armor on steroids. Ok. I see abuse with Stonebody Druid...

[quote name='Spikeball' timestamp='1292273387' post='4849524']
|Plasma Absorber V4|0|SET1|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1400|1200|When this card attacks a monster in Attack Position with higher ATK than this card, negate the attack, decrease the attacked monster's ATK by 600 and increase this card's ATK by 300.|
[/quote]

I see it's supposed to work with card below. Ok I think

[quote name='Spikeball' timestamp='1292273387' post='4849524']
|Split Attack|0|SET1|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||You can only activate this card if the attack of 1 monster you control is negated. This monster can attack 2 more times in a row. Battle Damage this monster inflicts during this Battle Phase is halved.|
[/quote]

Ok

[quote name='-Dae-' timestamp='1293218932' post='4881097']
|Shattered Rusty Armor|15|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Equip|||If a monster equipped with this card declares an attack or change its Battle position, destroy it.|
[/quote]

Puts pressure on opponent. Ok

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

@Chilla: Well that is the ATK of the original Performance of Sword but yeah Drop it to 1900. And yes the monster has to be there for the Effect to apply.

Also I might need help thinking on a balanced Fusion card that works for all of them.

Actually:

|Power Link - Force Fusion|0||Spell Card|Spell||Equip|||Remove from your side of the field or Graveyard. Fusion Material Monsters listed on a Fusion Monster in your Extra Deck and Fusion Summon that monster equipped with this card. When this card is remove from the field destroy the equipped monster. When the equipped monster is sent to the Graveyard while equipped with this card you can select Fusion Material Monsters removed for this card's effect that are removed from play and put them into the Graveyard.|

[Buttercup]

no 1for1 removal with nonconditions, seal of sol is not accepted

[.Nu-13]

*facedesk* I forgot that we don't accept cards like that... thanks for reminding me

@Dae's card - Ok I think

[-DOOM]

|Bubbleman|0|SET2|Aqua/Effect|WATER|4||500|1750|Once during either Player's Main Phase, you can destroy 1 monster you control to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard OR switch this card's ATK and DEF.|

|Spirit of the White Tiger|0|SET2|Beast/Effect/Spirit|WATER|4||1650|1500|This card returns to its owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Summoned, if a WATER monster was sent from the field to the Graveyard this turn, select 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and destroy it.|

|Deep Sea Fury|2|SET2|Trap Card|Trap|||||You can only activate this card if your opponent controls more monsters than you. Select 1 monster your opponent controls. All WATER monsters you control gain DEF equal to the ATK of the selected monster, until the End Phase.|

|Penguin General|0|SET2|Aqua/Effect|WATER|6||1400|2300|When this card is Summoned, sent it to the Graveyard. Then, select 2 Level 3 or lower WATER monsters with 1000 or less DEF from your Deck and remove them from play. During either player's turn, you can pay 800 Life Points and Special Summon 1 of the monsters removed from play by this effect. The Summoned monsters cannot be Tributed or used for a Synchro Summon.|

|Accursed Ice Demon|0|SET2|Fiend/Synchro/Effect|WATER|6||2400|1900|1 WATER Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Summoned, select 2 Spell and Trap Cards on the field and destroy them.|

[color="#000000"]Water Tuner I'm going to post later is level 3.[/color]

[-Griffin]

@Dae's fusion card:
"When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard destroy the equipped monster."
should be
"When this card is remove from the field destroy the equipped monster."

To prevent potential bouncing abuse. Currently, I think it's just with Falcon, but others could pop up.

IMO, Plasmatic Binding shouldn't be accepted because it's useless fluff, & Split Attack shouldn't be accepted since it isn't consistent enough to work yet, and leads to Lame Duck.

|Murky Waters|
|Field Spell|
|During the End Phase, flip all Sea-Serpent monsters you control face-down and shuffle them. At any time during either player's battle phase, you can change any Sea-Serpent monster you control to face-up attack position. When this card would be removed from the field, you can return 1 face-down Sea-Serpent card you control to the bottom of your Deck instead.|

|Serpent Young|
|Sea-Serpent/Tuner/Effect|WATER|Level 1|0 ATK|1100 DEF|
|When a Sea-Serpent monster you control changes its Battle Position, you can Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard. If this card is Summoned with this effect, it is removed from play face-down when it is removed from the field.|

|Large-Tooth Swamp Eel|
|Sea-Serpent/Effect|EARTH|Level 4|1500 ATK|1400 DEF|
|FLIP: This card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase.|

|Depth Constrictor|
|Sea-Serpent/Effect|DARK|Level 3|1400 ATK|1300 DEF|
|FLIP: Change the battle position of 1 monster your opponent controls.|

Annoyingly, I won't have any access to a YVD converter for a little. And probably no access to the server files. Although, hopefully, I'll be able to use those stuff after tomorrow (when I'll be in New York) it might not be for a little over a week.

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

Oh he is right on the Fusion Spell...Changed

[Spikeball]

My Archetype: [color="#0000FF"][size="5"]"Orbs of Astrum"[/size][/color]

|Blazing Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1700|0700|Once per turn, if you control another monster, you can negate an attack and inflict 300 Damage to your opponent.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/vgnadfskjgbdfga.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Vital Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Rock/Effect|Earth|3||900|1900|If an attack is negated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard. You can only use this effect once while you control this face-up card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/vhjvhjv.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Liquid Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Aqua/Effect|Water|1||100|1100|You can tribute this face-up card to negate an attack and add 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your deck to your hand.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gdfgadfgdssdf.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Stormy Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|2||1200|200|When an "Orb of Astrum" monster you control is attacked, you can Special Summon this card from your hand and negate the attack. Increase the ATK and DEF of all "Orb of Astrum" monsters you control by 200, except of this card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/dfsbfdsfsDF.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Harmonic Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Fairy/Tuner|Light|1||?|1000|When an attack is negated, you can change this card's Level to the attacking monster's Level. This card's ATK is equal to this card's Level x400.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gdfskagbdfs.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Charged Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Thunder/Tuner|Light|5||2300|1300|Whenever an attack is negated, place 1 Charge Counter on this card. During your Main Phase you can remove 2 Charge Counters from this card to destroy 1 face-up card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/fbhsgasgfafdksa.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Orb of Astrum - Phoenix|0|SET2|Fairy/Synchro/Effect|Light|6||2400|1400|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Orb of Astrum" monsters
You can tribute this card to negate an attack. If you negate an attack this way, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. Whenever an attack is negated, increase this card's ATK by 200.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gfbgdfaaf.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Cosmic Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Fiend/Synchro/Effect|Dark|8||2700|1700|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Orb of Astrum" monsters
Whenever an attack is negated, place 1 Charge Counter on this card. You can remove Charge Counters to activate 1 of the following effects: - Remove 1: Increase 1 monster's ATK by 300 until the End Phase. - Remove 2: Destroy 1 face-down card. - Remove 4: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gbsdfkdsbfasf.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Feather of Astrum|0|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||Whenever an attack is negated, place 1 Charge Counter on this card (max. 2). During your Standby Phase you can send this card to the Graveyard to draw a number of cards equal to the Charge Counters on this card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/fbhugadsfas.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Power of Astrum|0|SET2|Trap Card|Trap||None|||You can only activate this card when an attack is negated by discarding 1 card from your hand while you control 2 or more "Orb of Astrum" monsters. Inflict Damage to your opponent equal to the attacking monster's ATK. Until the end of this turn "Orb of Astrum" monsters you control cannot be destroyed.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gdshjbgsadfas.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Celestial Discharge|0|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||Remove all Charge Counters from your field and inflict Damage to your opponent equal to the number of removed counters x500.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/bvhjvhjv.png[/img][/spoiler]

|Gate of Astrum|0|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||Once per turn when an attack is negated place 1 Charge Counter on this card. Increase the ATK and DEF of all "Orb of Astrum" monsters by 100 for every Charge Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed, you can remove all Charge Counters from this card instead. When you are attacked directly, you can remove all Charge Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard whose Level is equal to or lower as the number of removed Counters.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/vghcvghc.png[/img][/spoiler]

This is it^^
Hope it gets through judging
and please include the pics >.<

by the way @Griffin:
Could you please now include "Peaceful Offense"? You said when it ould be more useful it would make it into the NGD...

and

[quote=Ser Warjacksworth]no 1for1 removal with nonconditions, seal of sol is not accepted[/quote]
It has allready been rejected by Supervillain... I can live with that

[Buttercup]

no, no more damn archetypes

I'll make some cards later.

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Spikeball' timestamp='1293320876' post='4883225']
My Archetype: [color="#0000ff"][size="5"]"Orbs of Astrum"[/size][/color]

|Blazing Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1700|0700|Once per turn, if you control another monster, you can negate an attack and inflict 300 Damage to your opponent.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/vgnadfskjgbdfga.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]Not sure about this one. I'd like to give it a no.[/b]

|Vital Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Rock/Effect|Earth|3||900|1900|If an attack is negated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard. You can only use this effect once while you control this face-up card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/vhjvhjv.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]
reduce DEF to 1800 and it's fine[/b]

|Liquid Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Aqua/Effect|Water|1||100|1100|You can tribute this face-up card to negate an attack and add 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your deck to your hand.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gdfgadfgdssdf.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]kk[/b]

|Stormy Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|2||1200|200|When an "Orb of Astrum" monster you control is attacked, you can Special Summon this card from your hand and negate the attack. Increase the ATK and DEF of all "Orb of Astrum" monsters you control by 200, except of this card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/dfsbfdsfsDF.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]Not sure. Yes for now, though[/b]

|Harmonic Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Fairy/Tuner|Light|1||?|1000|When an attack is negated, you can change this card's Level to the attacking monster's Level. This card's ATK is equal to this card's Level x400.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gdfskagbdfs.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]k[/b]

|Charged Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Thunder/Tuner|Light|5||2300|1300|Whenever an attack is negated, place 1 Charge Counter on this card. During your Main Phase you can remove 2 Charge Counters from this card to destroy 1 face-up card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/fbhsgasgfafdksa.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]k.[/b]

|Orb of Astrum - Phoenix|0|SET2|Fairy/Synchro/Effect|Light|6||2400|1400|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Orb of Astrum" monsters
You can tribute this card to negate an attack. If you negate an attack this way, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. Whenever an attack is negated, increase this card's ATK by 200.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gfbgdfaaf.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]k[/b]

|Cosmic Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Fiend/Synchro/Effect|Dark|8||2700|1700|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Orb of Astrum" monsters
Whenever an attack is negated, place 1 Charge Counter on this card. You can remove Charge Counters to activate 1 of the following effects: - Remove 1: Increase 1 monster's ATK by 300 until the End Phase. - Remove 2: Destroy 1 face-down card. - Remove 4: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gbsdfkdsbfasf.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]kk[/b]

|Feather of Astrum|0|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Continuous|||Whenever an attack is negated, place 1 Charge Counter on this card (max. 2). During your Standby Phase you can send this card to the Graveyard to draw a number of cards equal to the Charge Counters on this card.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/fbhugadsfas.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]k
[/b]
|Power of Astrum|0|SET2|Trap Card|Trap||None|||You can only activate this card when an attack is negated by discarding 1 card from your hand while you control 2 or more "Orb of Astrum" monsters. Inflict Damage to your opponent equal to the attacking monster's ATK. Until the end of this turn "Orb of Astrum" monsters you control cannot be destroyed.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/gdshjbgsadfas.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]k.[/b]

|Celestial Discharge|0|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||Remove all Charge Counters from your field and inflict Damage to your opponent equal to the number of removed counters x500.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/bvhjvhjv.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]
k[/b]

|Gate of Astrum|0|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||Once per turn when an attack is negated place 1 Charge Counter on this card. Increase the ATK and DEF of all "Orb of Astrum" monsters by 100 for every Charge Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed, you can remove all Charge Counters from this card instead. When you are attacked directly, you can remove all Charge Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard whose Level is equal to or lower as the number of removed Counters.|
[spoiler=PIC][img]http://i825.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/ETC/vghcvghc.png[/img][/spoiler]

[b]k[/b]

This is it^^
Hope it gets through judging
and please include the pics >.<

by the way @Griffin:
Could you please now include "Peaceful Offense"? You said when it ould be more useful it would make it into the NGD...

and


It has allready been rejected by Supervillain... I can live with that
[/quote]

[Spikeball]

|Vital Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Rock/Effect|Earth|3||800|1800|If an attack is negated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard. You can only use this effect once while you control this face-up card.|

|Blazing Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1600|0600|Once per turn, if you control another monster, you can negate an attack and inflict 300 Damage to your opponent.|

|Stormy Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|2||1200|200|When an "Orb of Astrum" monster you control is attacked, you can Special Summon this card from your hand and negate the attack.|

better like this?

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Spikeball' timestamp='1293383017' post='4884480']
|Vital Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Rock/Effect|Earth|3||800|1800|If an attack is negated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Orb of Astrum" monster from your Graveyard. You can only use this effect once while you control this face-up card.|

|Blazing Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1600|0600|Once per turn, if you control another monster, you can negate an attack and inflict 300 Damage to your opponent.|

|Stormy Orb of Astrum|0|SET2|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|2||1200|200|When an "Orb of Astrum" monster you control is attacked, you can Special Summon this card from your hand and negate the attack.|

better like this?
[/quote]

Yes. I'd like to wait for chill though ^^

[Buttercup]

Limiter Removal and Gil Garth proposed so aggro has a chance

[-DOOM]

Why Gil Garth?

[byak]

So when is set2 gonna exist?

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1293502252' post='4888613']
So when is set2 gonna exist?
[/quote]

mmm I think whenever the one that puts the card in the set does so...and we still have very few cards no???

IDK

[-DOOM]

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1293502252' post='4888613']
So when is set2 gonna exist?
[/quote]

Well, when you begin to post your Submissions?

[byak]

I already did..

[.Nu-13]

@Villain - he submitted those : http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/233225-black-thunder/

@Cat - Lower Keravnos ATK, change Vrondi and they're all OK

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293551180' post='4889800']
@Villain - he submitted those : [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/233225-black-thunder/"]http://forum.yugiohc...-black-thunder/[/url]

@Cat - Lower Keravnos ATK, change Vrondi and they're all OK
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Oh. Ok, didn't see the post in which he posted them.

|Bubbleman|0|SET2|Aqua/Effect|WATER|4||500|1750|During either Player's Main Phase, you can destroy 1 monster you control to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard OR switch this card's ATK and DEF.|

|Spirit of the White Tiger|0|SET2|Beast/Effect/Spirit|WATER|4||1650|1500|This card returns to its owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Summoned, if a WATER monster was sent from the field to the Graveyard this turn, select 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and destroy it.|

|Deep Sea Fury|2|SET2|Trap Card|Trap|||||You can only activate this card if your opponent controls more monsters than you. Select 1 monster your opponent controls. Select 1 WATER monster you control. It gains DEF equal to the ATK of the selected monster, until the End Phase.|

|Penguin General|0|SET2|Aqua/Effect|WATER|6||1400|2300|When this card is Summoned, sent it to the Graveyard. Then, select 2 Level 3 or lower WATER monsters with 1000 or less DEF from your Deck and remove them from play. During either player's turn, you can pay 800 Life Points and Special Summon 1 of the monsters removed from play by this effect. The Summoned monsters cannot be Tributed or used for a Synchro Summon.|

|Accursed Ice Demon|0|SET2|Fiend/Synchro/Effect|WATER|6||2400|1900|1 WATER Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Summoned, select 2 Spell and Trap Cards on the field and destroy them.|

What do you think about these cards?

[.Nu-13]

They're fine

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[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293553945' post='4889914']
They're fine
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Ok. And Spirit of the White Tiger is ok? Cuz somehow i think it might be too weak.

[.Nu-13]

I think no, cuz it can be always Special Summoned

|Fortissimo the Moving Fortress|0|SET2|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster from your hand. It cannot declare an attack this turn. Inflict 300 damage to a player that doesn't control a Machine-Type monster during their End Phase.|