[Written] Soul Absorbing Des Hole

[Thomas★Zero]

Soul Absorbing Des Hole

Trap Card

When your opponent Special Summons a monster(s): target 1 of those summoned monsters; banish the targeted monster, then, increase your Life Points equal to halve of the banished monsters ATK. You can only activate 1 "Soul Absorbing Pit Fall" per turn.

[Arimetal]

Soul Absorbing Trap Hole

(Normal?) Trap Card

When your opponent Special Summons a monster(s): Target 1 of those summoned monsters; Banish the targeted monster, if you do, increase your LP equal to the ATK of the monster Banished by this effect.

So wait, this is a no atk restrict no grave hitting lp gaining BTH. Keep in mind BTH is limited as of now. Also that you made a better version. Let's do some tweaks, eh? Cuz the only restrict this has that BTH doesn't is stopping normal summons.

[ÆƵ–]

So wait, this is a no atk restrict no grave hitting lp gaining BTH. Keep in mind BTH is limited as of now. Also that you made a better version. Let's do some tweaks, eh? Cuz the only restrict this has that BTH doesn't is stopping normal summons.

 

Actually, the big diff between this and BTH is that this only hits one monster, and targets, while BTH hits all (as long as they're 1500+) with no targeting. 

 

I like this, tbh. But what I don't like about this is that it's a trap hole. This is just begging to be raff's biitch. I don't have any names in mind, but a name change, I feel, would make this card a lil more balanced. 

[Gabriponte]

Soul Absorbing Trap HoleTrap CardWhen your opponent Special Summons a monster(s): target 1 of those summoned monsters; banish the targeted monster, then, increase your Life Points equal to the banished monsters ATK.

- Banish a monster

- Gain LP of the ATK monster

- No cost

= OP card

 

At least instead of gaining LP:

- Pay LP equal to (half of) its ATK

- Your opponent gain LP equal to its ATK

 

???

[Tinkerer]

I don't like how this has absolutely nothing to do with Soul Absorbing Bone Tower...

...then again, that's flavor.

 

I've gotta agree with Kitty. The name just provides it too much utility thanks to Raff. I also agree that this seems too free and provides too much of a boon for a no cost. Maybe add an Exciton condition or something? I dunno...

[Thomas★Zero]

Made modifications were changed Trap Hole to Pit Fall and also gave it a 1 per turn clause.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Just as a sidenote, the Japanese name for "Trap Hole" is "pitfall" (so even with the name change, it would likely still qualify for Rafflesia stuff). You could probably take out the "pit" part of its name and it should be fine. 

 

The hard OPT thing is fine though, and while banishing a monster + gaining some amount of LP may be a bit much, unlike BTH, works only on SSing (but that's pretty much standard nowadays) and targets 1 monster, so you can't use this against stuff that can't be targeted (see Dark Destroyer / Forerunner among other things). I don't know; the LP gain could be reduced to the Level/Rank of the targeted monster x maybe 200 points or something as opposed to whatever ATK that monster has. 

[Thomas★Zero]

Just as a sidenote, the Japanese name for "Trap Hole" is "pitfall" (so even with the name change, it would likely still qualify for Rafflesia stuff). You could probably take out the "pit" part of its name and it should be fine. 

 

The hard OPT thing is fine though, and while banishing a monster + gaining some amount of LP may be a bit much, unlike BTH, works only on SSing (but that's pretty much standard nowadays) and targets 1 monster, so you can't use this against stuff that can't be targeted (see Dark Destroyer / Forerunner among other things). I don't know; the LP gain could be reduced to the Level/Rank of the targeted monster x maybe 200 points or something as opposed to whatever ATK that monster has.

Changed Pitfall to Des Hole and halved the life gain from the monsters ATK.