Shradow Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Pretty good, 8/10, but put it in spoilers, it takes up a lot of space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Why would I want to put it in spoilers? I mean it is the first post, and it is my fan-fic thread, and I do not care. It would probably take up more space on the server for YCM if I put it in spoilers, anyhow. I don't see a point. Any improvements about the manga itself? Anything liked.? Disliked? You really did not say much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 All right I see it and I like it...The duel is interesting but I don't know who will win this is thought ...10/10 for the effort...keep it up!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Thanks! :D The third chapter is up! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 5, 2009 Report Share Posted February 5, 2009 Ok, that was a SERIOUSLY unacceptable plot twist in there. Why did you murder me with some card I have never seen...? I need to work on some more cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Nice, Very nice, but could you divide the chapters and maybe put them in a spoiler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Ok' date=' that was a SERIOUSLY unacceptable plot twist in there. Why did you murder me with some card I have never seen...? I need to work on some more cards...[/quote'] I'm not the only one who can play this game, you know. You could always use these to your advantages, for instance, you could make a card that could counter it. Also, I didn't murder you with it! It wasn't really unacceptable at all! That card was up on my deck thread a whole 2 seconds minutes hours days for you to see, so it isn't my fault you didn't check...although I will admit it was kind of uncalled for...but, on the other hand, you already knew that Charr was going to win...:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docomodake Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Mechanical Wave is extremely broken. You're worse than the DM writers.Other than that, cool fic. I'd like to see where this goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Whoa. Chapter 3 is very good. Im waitin for chapter 4! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 woooow, sry i havent been posting any comments i had soo much going on XDi just read it all and the comments and i like it :Dit was different from the way i expected (which is good) cuz i though it would be another written one :D but i was hapily suprised ^_^could i be in the next duel?? lolmy space deck should be complete enough for a duel i think XD(even if its still not done)that would be awesome :D id love to see them up there the way u did urs and arceus'salso, i know that ur gonna hav to probably win *sob sob* but can u make it realllllllly close if u do? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 You said things assuming when you were coming into the manga, how you were coming into the manga, and who you were going to duel against. @ Evilduckjoe: You are confusing me. You completely say that this maga is horrible in to sentences, and then you say it is good, and you want to see more. What? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Oh, yea I do that too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 You do what too? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 You said things assuming when you were coming into the manga' date=' how you were coming into the manga, and who you were going to duel against. [/quote'] lol wat? if ur asking how i come into it all, i hav no idea ill let u figure it out XDalso u can choose who i duel, i wouldnt know XDlol thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 You do what too? :?Make up cards made only for specificly this duel.woooow' date=' sry i havent been posting any comments i had soo much going on XDi just read it all and the comments and i like it :Dit was different from the way i expected (which is good) cuz i though it would be another written one :D but i was hapily suprised ^_^could i be in the next duel?? lol[b']my space deck should be complete enough for a duel i think XD[/b](even if its still not done)that would be awesome :D id love to see them up there the way u did urs and arceus'salso, i know that ur gonna hav to probably win *sob sob* but can u make it realllllllly close if u do? lol... Mine's 31 cards! LOL Sure you have enough. And I will have to whip Daliege into oblivian.... and make it close. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 You do not know that you are dueling Daliege either. THe dragon in the preview of chpter 4 should give you a clue to who is coming in next. :D I get what you mean arceus, you make cards for specific duels also. None of you know the order in which the rest of the ALD is introduced to the manga, because I am not entirely sure myself yet. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Well, congratulations, Chase. A dragon (probably a synchro and/or LV10) is staring you down like you're a big piece of Pizza. Is torture your game, Fuzzie? A giant Dragon just creamed me and you are making another one? This really is uncomfortable. :lol: GIVE HIM A CHANCE! :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Nice, I can't wait for the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 YAY! Another reader! Don't worry arceus, that dream is going to lead uo to something you will really like! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 YAY! Another reader! Don't worry arceus' date=' that dream is going to lead uo to something you will really like! :D[/quote']YAY! I'm helpful! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 ...yeah...you are, but... Oh, you mean your charachter! I see! Yeah, it will have something to do with...well, you will just have to wait and see when I post the next chapter, which might be today, but maybe not, because it is pretty long already, it is not even, well, maybe it is halfway done, and I have 3 projects I have to do tommorow for school. BLAH, SCHOOL...Anyways, it might be up today. Anyone notice there is a new charachter? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 Hey! A new person! Welcome Asterr! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 He is in the ALD now also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 welcome! lol about me being sent to oblivion, does it hav to happen? lolim scared to find out what happens with my character though i do want him to duel XDcant wait for the next chapter (where hopefully i obliterate someone and not the other way around XD)still, cant wait and good luck ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Hey guys. I finally got the 4th chapter up, and it is very long, 25 frames to be exact, which makes up for the last really short chapter. Enjoy! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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