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Brendano Harns

How ist it so far?  

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  1. 1. How ist it so far?

    • Good, continue it.
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    • Ehh...not that well done. Maybe go back to the drawing board to try something a little different next time.
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Okay, for the new chapter I really like how your putting more detail into the duel it self, but the story doesn't really make too much sense. Why are they dueling again? Is anything on the ling or are they just dueling for no reason? And... Charr will most likely win.

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