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Knight's Title: Book Two~ The Dark Side of His Heart. Finished redecorating {Updated 5/28/10}

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Oh god yes! Definitly make a sequal!

 

Here's Chapter 11, now let's see what Metal's true identity really is.

 

[spoiler= Chapter 11: Heartless]

Chapter 11

 

Heartless

 

The hands then pulled at the aura, more was about to come out.

 

“I knew it was a trap!” Hermione yelled to herself.

 

“No you didn’t,” Knuckles sighed. The air became heavy; a full figure came out of the aura. What was floating now in the air was a huge black orb with gigantic hands protruding from it. The hands each had a pair of chains wrapped around them. Hermione tensed up, something about this creature unnerved her.

 

“Well, now the fun begins,” Shadow grinned, pulling out a chaos emerald. Shadow’s skin began to glow green. Energy crackled around him. Knuckles smashed his fists together,

 

“Let’s tear this blob thing to shreds!” Knuckles yelled. Hermione whipped out her wand.

 

“Let’s do this,” Hermione growled. Her wand crackled a purple energy. The three were ready to go! But right before they struck a blow, the monster glowed a bright red. It rumbled, preparing to explode.

 

“Get out of the way!” Hermione cried. They ran to the sides. Hermione raised her wand and screamed,

 

“ Grantado!” A huge dome-like shield protected Hermione, Knuckles, and Shadow from the huge explosion. All they saw in front of the dome was a blinding yellow cloud blast. Nothing could be made out of anything. Finally, the dust cleared. Hermione removed the shield. What was standing before them now was a colossal, black, and hulking great monster.

 

“What is that?” Hermione gasped. It looked completely inhuman. It had red eyes all over its body except for the head. There was only a grinning, toothed mouth on that face. It had a gaping hole that went right through its stomach. It stood over eight feet tall. It only had two legs and a pair of large arms that went to its knees. Shackles with broken chains were cuffed around its wrists and ankles. The beast gave an inhuman growl. The beast then grabbed a nearby tree and with mere strength uprooted the tree. Hermione and the others were opened mouthed.

 

“We’re so screwed. . . . .” Shadow murmured.

 

“This is a Heartless! Try to beat it if you can! This particular Heartless is called EX, good luck, you will all die!” Metal cackled, and disappeared in a flash. Hermione, Shadow, and Knuckles were now left to deal with EX. The monster then threw the tree right for Knuckles’ skull. Knuckles ran at the tree and made a fist. He then swung at the tree and punched it with so much ferocity; it shattered into a shower of wood chippings.

 

“We have to kill this monster!” Hermione yelled. She ran right to EX. The beast took its fists and beat the ground, trying to flatten her. She swiftly dodged the assault. She aimed her wand at EX.

 

“Defendo!” A long slash was sent out of her wand and cut EX’s leg. The beast gave a loud cry of pain. Knuckles then continuously punched the ground, creating an earthquake and EX began to stumble a bit.

 

“That’s my cue,” Shadow grinned. He held out his green emerald. He held it over his head.

 

“Chaos Control!” Shadow’s fur glowed even brighter. He flew at EX with breakneck speed and heel dropped the monster. EX fell to the ground. Shadow wasn’t done; the beast was too slow for his fluent movement. Shadow then struck EX with a flurry of homing attacks. Knuckles punched the ground, sending rocks to fly upward, and he smashed them into EX’s way. The monster was loosing the battle. But then, EX got up with a flip, and nearly crushed Knuckles.

 

“Knuckles!” Hermione jumped and pushed him out of harm’s way. Hermione then slid underneath EX, but he caught her. EX closed its many eyes. When they opened, out shot a rainbow colored hyper beam from every eye.

 

“Hermione, look out!” Shadow yelled.

 

“Expeliarmus!” Hermione cried, and a shield enveloped her, causing the hyper beam to ricochet towards the skies. Hermione and the others were backed into a corner. EX then did something else unexpected. The hole in its stomach now had an orb in its place. The orb was black. It was made of a dark energy, the three were sure of it. EX let out a growl, and the orbs flew out of its stomach towards them. The three couldn’t dodge them all. They were like little mines, exploding on contact.

 

“Aggh!” The three gasped as they were blown backwards from the blast. EX then unexpectedly charged at Shadow, he was no prepared for this and the blow was a critical hit. Shadow was tossed across the field like a rag doll. He smashed through a couple trees and landed into the lake.

 

“Shadow!” Hermione and Knuckles shouted. But then EX picked up Knuckles and flicked him like a booger towards Hermione. Knuckles were shot like a bullet at Hermione and the two collided down the field and into the lake with Shadow. Shadow was unconscious. Knuckles slapped him across the face.

 

“Wake up you idiot! We’re gonna die!” Knuckles yelled frantically.

 

“Oh!” Shadow sprung upright. He looked dazed. The three were beaten up. EX would be at the lakefront in a matter of minutes to finish them off, they had to think fast.

 

“This monster is so strong,” Shadow groaned, “it’s taking all my strength just to keep up with it.”

 

“There has to be a way to kill it,” Knuckles sighed. Hermione studied the situation they were in. She stole a glance at EX for a second.

 

“Maybe there is a way, listen up you two.” Hermione whispered the plan to them.

 

EX was still at the field. Metal went to its side.

 

“I knew they couldn’t beat you.” He mused. EX replied by making a low guttural noise from the bottom of its throat.

 

“Sayonara, Knight’s Title. It was futile to challenge, huh?” Metal gasped. Coming up from the hill were Hermione, Knuckles, and Shadow with a very serious look on their faces.

 

“NOW!” Hermione screamed. Shadow and Hermione ran at Knuckles’ side. Knuckles ran the fastest. He then picked up Shadow and threw him at EX.

 

“WHAT?!” Metal Gasped. Shadow landed right below EX. Shadow held out a purple chaos emerald. His fur glowed purple.

 

“Chaos Cyclone!” Shadow then began to run in a circle. He ran so fast, he was nothing but a purple blur. The blur then picked up even more speed; so much speed the wind velocity was lifting EX from the ground.

 

“NO!” Metal gasped. EX was becoming more disoriented by the minute.

 

“This is the end Metal!” Hermione bellowed over the sound of the wind. Knuckles then picked up Hermione and threw her upwards at EX. Hermione flew upwards right above EX. Knuckles then ran at Shadow. He then gave Hermione the signal. Hermione pointed her wand at EX.

 

“Sectumsempra!” Hermione cried. EX was assaulted with a flurry of slashed across his body. Knuckles then leapt right into the cyclone and rode it upwards. He was gonna land right below EX.

 

“Sky Uppercut!” Knuckles yelled, and his fist landed right against EX’s back. The two-pronged attack was too much for EX. It fell to the ground with a loud, earthshaking thud. Hermione Knuckles and Shadow stood next to each other, panting rapidly. They had done it. EX lay there, dead. Now before their eyes, EX dissolved into black particles. A heart flew upward into the sky. The three stood there, watching the sky. They then heard slow clapping.

 

“Bravo Knight’s Title, Bravo,” it was Metal, “but I must be leaving now.” Metal took a few steps back, and then turned and made a ruin for it. But Hermione was faster and tackled him to the ground. She then sat on top of him. She pointed her wand right at the hooded man’s face and said,

 

“Oclumense!”

 

Hermione was them bombarded with dozens of images. She saw an image of a mother on her deathbed holding out her hand to her two beautiful blonde sons. A weird star shaped symbol drawn in blood flashed in her mind. She saw a boy with straw blonde hair with matching eyes smiling at a huge silver suit of armor. She then was shown an image of a beautiful house on top of a countryside hill. She gasped as she saw the house set fire before her eyes. Hermione then got quick flashes of the same blonde haired boy with the suit of armor. Then she was blinded by a red light. She saw the boy on a stone floor, bleeding to death, clutching at a silver suit of armor with tears streaming down his eyes. She saw a grotesque monster besides him, glaring at him. She couldn’t take it anymore when she heard the boy’s earsplitting screams of fright.

 

Hermione then gasped and opened her eyes. She was back at the Hogwarts grounds, staring at the cloaked man.

 

“You . . . . . . . you aren’t part of them, are you.” Hermione said slowly, she could barely get the words out. Hermione removed the hood from the man. She gasped in shock. Staring back at her was the same boy from her visions. He had blonde hair with matching yellow eyes. He smirked, “What gave it away?”

 

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