Knight's Title: Book Two~ The Dark Side of His Heart. Finished redecorating {Updated 5/28/10}

[ragnarok1945]

oh that's fine, it's only 3 more days of waiting, which I'm willing to do.

[Fen.]

Um.....maybe even more than 3 days............I have only written 13 or so chapters to this and I have been suffering from major writer's block......

[ragnarok1945]

you said 15 chaps before. But that's fine, get some R and R and you'll be over it soon. In the meantime I'll await the next one

[Fen.]

Yeah....hopefully.

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

:shock:

 

Ok, I will NOT be surprised if Sora, Donald and Goofy pops out of nowhere and joins the Knight´s Title!

[ragnarok1945]

I don't see that for the story, it doesn't fit the comic relief

[Fen.]

um no....no way in hell am I letting disney characters entering my story. not even sora....... I took the only GOOD part of Kingdom hearts and added it to my story, Organization Xlll

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

Oops, sorry if i made u mad :(

[Fen.]

no, I'm not mad at all. I SERIOUSLY thought about adding just sora to the group. But i threw that Idea out the toilet for a very good reason. U will realize why tomorrow.

[ragnarok1945]

to me none of the disney characters could work into the story. Too many parts are serious enough and too graphic for them

[Fen.]

Yeah, that's what I thought. That's ONE of the reasons Sora isn't in this story. There's one other peice to the puzzle you guys don't know yet.

[ragnarok1945]

well. then there's the fact their comedy is simply unsuitable for the villains (they won't appreciate it)

[Fen.]

What do you mean by that?

[ragnarok1945]

well you think the villains will find the disney characters funny?

[Fen.]

no.......they'de kill them in an instant, especially Larxene.

[ragnarok1945]

exactly my point, and therefore I see no reason for disney characters to be in the fic

[Fen.]

exactly, but that was not the reason they aren't in this story.

[ragnarok1945]

I wonder if Hermonine's deal striking is going to lead to betrayal soon. Wouldn't surprise me if it did

[Fen.]

yeah, something tells me that Kellach is going to be dead for a while.........

[ragnarok1945]

well at least right now Hermonine isn't having a complete tantrum

[Fen.]

......... :lol: You haven't seen anything yet........

Here's a preview........

 

 

“HOW DARE YOU ASK ME OUT WHEN I’VE LOST HIM! HOW DARE YOU! HOW DARE YOU! I’LL KILL YOU!!!!” Hermione screeched and she punched him in the face, blood coming out of his nose.

 

“Hermione,” Amy said quietly, she cowered in fear of Hermione slugging her.

 

“NONE OF YOU CARE, DO YOU?! NONE OF YOU! YOU PRETEND THAT NOTHING’S HAPPENED! NOTHING AT ALL!” Hermione was quite mad, still elbowing Neji all over.

 

“YOU JUST WANT TO MAKE IT ALL BETTER BY FORGETTING ABOUT IT! I MEAN, THE DINNER!!!!! YOU ONLY CARED ABOUT JAKE!!!!! IT MAKES ME SICK!!!” Hermione shrieked again, her voice going up another pitch. The others backed away from her, afraid she might explode. The pressure of the teens was too much for the table, and it shattered in pieces, sending Neji and Hermione falling onto the floor. Hermione still had a grip of Neji, and she was not letting go.

[ragnarok1945]

well that's Neji's stupidity. He deserves that for the time being

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

Ouch

[ragnarok1945]

at this rate the organization won't be needing to kill her anymore. Her anger will do that for them

[Fen.]

There's even more, but I can't type it. It would spoil a lot.