Yu-Gi-Oh! New Generation Dueling CCG

[-DOOM]

seems ok. Do we have any good machines yet?

[.Nu-13]

No, I'm making some now...

Original anime effect was this:
[i]Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monster from your hand. Inflict 100 damage to a player that doesn't control a Machine-Type monster during their End Phase.[/i]

[-DOOM]

Original effect is better.... I'd like to see the machines you're making first though

[.Nu-13]

You know, now that you mention it, here, it can be actually balanced...
I'll post cards in few minutes...

[-DOOM]

|Shining Ice Being|Aqua/Tuner/Effect|WATER|3||0|1600|Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard to increase or decrease this card's Level by 1.|

|Drowned Maiden of the Black Sea|0|SET2|Zombie/Tuner/Effect|WATER|3||1100|200|When this card is sent to the Graveyard, gain 500 Life Points. If you don't have a WATER monster in your Graveyard, lose 500 Life Points instead.|

[byak]

idg how i'm supposed to change vrondi without completely butchering the deck.

[.Nu-13]

[quote name='.Supervillain' timestamp='1293555816' post='4889977']
|Shining Ice Being|Aqua/Tuner/Effect|WATER|3||0|1600|Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard to increase or decrease this card's Level by 1.|

|Drowned Maiden of the Black Sea|0|SET2|Zombie/Tuner/Effect|WATER|3||1100|200|When this card is sent to the Graveyard, gain 500 Life Points. If you don't have a WATER monster in your Graveyard, lose 500 Life Points instead.|
[/quote]

Both ok

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1293555878' post='4889979']
idg how i'm supposed to change vrondi without completely butchering the deck.
[/quote]

|Vrondi, Highlander of Black Thunder|0|SET2|Thunder/Effect|Dark|2||1400|100|
You can return 1 Thunder-Type monster in your Graveyard to your Deck to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If you Special Summon this card this way and it would be removed from the field, remove it from play instead.
This card cannot be destroyed by battle.
If control this face-up card during your opponent's End Phase, remove it from play and send 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.|

It's a bit weaker now, we can always limit it if needed

[-DOOM]

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1293555878' post='4889979']
idg how i'm supposed to change vrondi without completely butchering the deck.
[/quote]

Why is Vrondi supposed to be changed? What is bad about?

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293556046' post='4889986']


|Vrondi, Highlander of Black Thunder|0|SET2|Thunder/Effect|Dark|2||1400|100|
You can return 1 Thunder-Type monster in your Graveyard to your Deck to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If you Special Summon this card this way and it would be removed from the field, remove it from play instead.
This card cannot be destroyed by battle.
If control this face-up card during your opponent's End Phase, remove it from play and send 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.|

It's a bit weaker now, we can always limit it if needed
[/quote]

Ok, now I understand why.

[.Nu-13]

Exploding Tinker | *3 | FIRE
[Machine/Effect]
When a Machine-Type monster you control is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard this card to Special Summon 2 "Explosion Tokens". (Machine-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) When an "Explosion Token" is removed from the field, inflict 500 damage to both players.
ATK/800 DEF/500

Cybernetic Cyclopean P.2 | *4 | EARTH
[Machine/Effect]
Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to add 1 Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand.
ATK/1400 DEF/200

Machine Imperial Core Accelerator | *1 | LIGHT
[Machine/Effect]
This card's original ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x 500. Destroy this card during your Standby Phase.
ATK/? DEF/?

Machine Imperial Accelerated Android | *6 | DARK
[Machine/Fusion/Effect]
"Machine Imperial Core Accelerator" + 1 Machine-Type monster
This card can be only Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by sending the above cards you control to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization") Once per turn, you can select 1 Machine-Type monster you control. Until the end of this turn, the selected monster gains 500 ATK for each card in your hand. This card cannot attack this turn.
ATK/2000 DEF/0

I'll post more later

Oh, and ignore the Psychic archetype I posted before

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293556376' post='4889991']


Machine Imperial Core Accelerator | *1 | LIGHT
[Machine/Effect]
This card's original ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x 500. Destroy this card during your Standby Phase.
ATK/? DEF/?


[/quote]

I don't like this. It's an easy 2k Beatstick which is bad.

[.Nu-13]

"This card cannot attack directly"

maybe?

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293556883' post='4890012']
"This card cannot attack directly"

maybe?
[/quote]

mhm... This is actually not the problem.

"Once while this card is face-up on the field, if your opponent controlled only 1 monster at the start of your Main Phase, you cannot enter your Battle Phase this turn."

gives the opponent an opportunity to get rid of that 2k/2k beast

?

[.Nu-13]

Ok, I guess

Others are fine?

[-DOOM]

I think so, yes.

[byak]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293556046' post='4889986']
Both ok



|Vrondi, Highlander of Black Thunder|0|SET2|Thunder/Effect|Dark|2||1400|100|
You can return 1 Thunder-Type monster in your Graveyard to your Deck to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If you Special Summon this card this way and it would be removed from the field, remove it from play instead.
This card cannot be destroyed by battle.
If control this face-up card during your opponent's End Phase, remove it from play and send 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.|

It's a bit weaker now, we can always limit it if needed
[/quote]

Deck has been butchered.

[.Nu-13]

But we HAVE to add some restriction to it

Maybe that you can SS only once per turn and use it only for BT synchros? Or once per duel clause?

[byak]

The deck works by continuously reviving Vrondi.
You would just have to make it harder to get the payout from him, like make him level 1.

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293557454' post='4890037']
But we HAVE to add some restriction to it

Maybe that you can SS only once per turn and use it only for BT synchros? Or once per duel clause?
[/quote]

It can be targeted by D.D. Rescue Team, I think your restriction is fine.

[.Nu-13]

Both of you are right, but damn...

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293557795' post='4890063']
Both of you are right, but damn...
[/quote]

A once per turn clause seems to be the best solution IMO.

No Vrondi Spam, but still usable.

[Kuri]

|Supreme Dragon|0|ASGN|Dragon/Synchro/Effect|Wind|7||2400|2100|1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card cannot be targeted by card effects. Once per turn you can discard 1 or more cards to have this card gain 200 ATK and DEF equal to the number of cards discarded x200, until End Phase.|

|Quickshot Dolphin|0|ASGN|Fish/Effect|Wind|3||1300|800|Once per turn you can select and switch 1 monster you control into defense position to activate 1 of the following effects:
•Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the selected monster's Level x300.
•Half the ATK of all face-up monsters you control until End Phase, to have this card gain ATK equal to the number of monsters you control x500.|

Still accepting archtypes?

[byak]

[quote name='.Supervillain' timestamp='1293557935' post='4890069']
A once per turn clause seems to be the best solution IMO.

No Vrondi Spam, but still usable.
[/quote]

If there's a once per turn clause, it's practically impossible to make Keravnos.

[-DOOM]

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1293560486' post='4890170']
If there's a once per turn clause, it's practically impossible to make Keravnos.
[/quote]

Use another Vrondi?

[byak]

Why not just make Vrondi level 1?

[.Nu-13]

Ok, so Vrondi is Level 1 now