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DEF: One More Shot (New One-Shot: Spliced)


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Is your one-shot complete?

 

If it is....I don't know what to say

 

Also, If a character based of off me were dance with a character based of off Clair in a fictional world I would be ecstatic

LOL

 

And...it's ALMOST complete. I'll have it done within the next half hour :3

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I read it.

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Nice.

Although, I can't help but feel sad that she missed Chris talking to her picture on her bed. It might have been less hard on her if she heard what he had to say.

But still, I liked the one-shot and I liked that you thought of the idea and tying Calvin and Ninjew in there. It was good stuff.

Btw, at one point you narrated Rosa before she remembered her name and you put Ryujo instead of Ninjew at one point :T

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WELL THAT'S WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOUR READERS RUSH YOU

 

 

I also forgot a "love" between "I" and "you" at her final words.

 

 

And inorite? 0: too bad she missed it. Tho the way it was had her make a hard decision that was best for all =3

 

And yeah, I just felt compelled to add a character who died to guide her, and thought "CALVIN" and then thought Ninjew later :3

 

 

And NOW you see how your one-shot inspired me ;3

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0-o

 

Your...welcome?

 

:3

 

I probably shouldn't have read that while listening to piano music ;_;

 

I read it while listening to Rosa's theme. perfection <3

 

Genius all around

 

Thank yooou X3

 

Do you intend to build on Calvin and Mr. Sheng?

As for the last one...I doubt I'll be writing a one-shot based on the world of the dead again anytime soon XD

 

But...who knows?~

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