Netami09 Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 While we're on the topic of Union Monsters, I think it would be cool to have one as C.o.t.W: Lore: Once per turn, you can either: Equip this card to a face-up "Cyber" monster you control OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When this card is equipped to a monster, the equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF, as well as the following effect: Once per turn: You can add 1 card from your hand into your deck, and then draw 1 card. There can only be 1 "Cyber Serpent" equipped to a monster at any given time. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 u should know first that both tutoring and draw are very powerful effects, so that monster's last effect is very broken, u should have some huge cost like discard 1 card and send the equipped monster to the Grave to balance it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Netami09 Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 New, less broken version:Lore: Once per turn, you can either: Equip this card to a face-up "Cyber" monster you control OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When this card is equipped to a monster, the equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF, as well as the following effect: Once per turn: You can discard 1 card and send this card to the Graveyard: Add 1 card from your hand into your deck, and then draw 1 card. There can only be 1 "Cyber Serpent" equipped to a monster at any given time. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 Well it's just a suggestion, but overall that's ok for either balance or usability, since u can add any stuff, i.e. Overload, to your hand from this effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted January 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 That would ne nice for a c.o.t.w, and by that, I mean I'll take anything at the moment. xD Cause I was outta one for a few days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 You spelled "serpent" wrong in the thread title, but we already know what you mean by it. As for CoTW, - Someone - already mentioned everything I have to say about the card. (Gives a power bonus to the equipped monster and allows it to have a Card Trader-esque effect) Might make a new Machine card, provided I don't get preoccupied with X. (And although it's late, hope you all had a good New Years and made resolutions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 what about making it: "draw 1 card, then put 1 card from your hand on top of the Deck" ? however, being kinda ophidiophobic, i much prefer my cute Railgun XD [spoiler='My Puppy <3'] Once per turn, you can equip this card, from your hand or side of the field, to a Level/Rank 5 or higher Machine-Type monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. A Monster equipped with this card gains 300 ATK. During either player's turn, when an opponent's monster effect that would target the equipped monster is activated: Place 1 Overheat Counter on this card; negate that effect. The equipped monster loses 300 ATK for each Overheat Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed while equipped to a monster: Take 800 damage for each Overheat Counter on it. If this card has 4 Overheat Counters on it: Destroy it. When this card is Special Summoned by its effect: Remove any Overheat Counters on it. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time.)[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 sigh, in last contest if we have some OCG or pic judging scale like many contests did recently, I think my card didn't lose to that, but yea, lose is lose, here's my card :) [spoiler='the Union that make some old archetype (like XYZ) become playable for today meta :)'] Lore: Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can either: Target 1 Machine-Type monster you control; equip this card you control or in your hand to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped by this effect, the equipped monster gains 300 ATK and DEF. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.) When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard: Draw 1 card. You must control a face-up LIGHT Machine-Type monster to activate and to resolve this effect. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 your pic is too fairy-like for an union machin monster in my opinion.... (union) machine monsters have to be cold, basic, functional and "dirty steel" like...and my ocg i think is perfectly correct too....moreover i think that the concept of "overheat" of my cannon was quite appriciated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 well i'll not arguing with you about pic, but about OCG u forgot to use some Union's specific OCG like ", you can either:" or "If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead." also i detected some minor points that im so lazy to type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 i specified that it can be equipped OR s.summoned, also the fact that if the equipped would be destroyed the player is able to pop the union instead, i think that's not a MUST (search all unions on DN for example and you'll find out that not all unions have that property) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 2, 2014 Report Share Posted January 2, 2014 well i do searched, and every Union have that clause, the exception is only some old card can protect from battle only, but it still protect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted January 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2014 Sorry I was away guys. I have some personal family problems I had to deal with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted January 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2014 Wtf? More downtime? xD Wow, could've notified us again. Luckily, it wasn't long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Yeah. Anyway, off-topic but Kwisatz, you should put your card sets in spoilers (your sig takes up a little more than a page on a 12-inch screen). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 [quote name="Sakura Haruno" post="6331934" timestamp="1388979384"]Yeah. Anyway, off-topic but Kwisatz, you should put your card sets in spoilers (your sig takes up a little more than a page on a 12-inch screen).[/quote] I agree with this, also copying my idea w/o any thought is a bit rude for me, but I will give u a little suggestion, 3 images fit this most, I tried w/ 4 images (my total set) and it appeared to be so much (but still smaller than u) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 i'll make 3 string for newest decks and put old ones in a spoiler....and before saying that someone copied you, try to find some evidence to substantiate what you say. I used a tool that anyone can use, not only Someone or Kwisatz-Haderach....(moreover when making signature there's clearly written "any number of links, image any size" etc etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 sigh, u changed that sig after i changed not so long, and if u really said that then next time i will warn myself to just cap the pic after i changed my sig or do sth else that can easily copied an idea, and just want to ask, do u really think that way fit ur cards? while making images for my card set i always think about how to make it look good, then i adjust them myself, so it's look unity when put together, not just use some random images that can easily found everywhere, well i didnt want to talk about this anymore, just see the outcome, the different between ur and mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwisatz-Haderach Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Yeah you're right. The difference between yours and mine is quite enought to me too ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted January 6, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 Yeah. Anyway, off-topic but Kwisatz, you should put your card sets in spoilers (your sig takes up a little more than a page on a 12-inch screen). I wonder why again. I mean, they do this without us knowing. Like one second, you're on the sit. The next one, the server is down until YCMaker get's it back up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted January 6, 2014 Report Share Posted January 6, 2014 I don't know what makes the site go down; probably something to do with IP.Board. As for the sig part, I mentioned that b/c some of the mods will PM you about it (Yin does it for certain) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted January 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2014 Sorry I haven't responded here lately. xD It's because I am busy with school, and English just started us on a play with the Salem Witch Trials. Aha. I'll try to get active here more, as well as other members. Sorry also that not much contests will come up, but look at my points. I hardly got any for a senior member. ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted January 8, 2014 Report Share Posted January 8, 2014 You can just give reps as prizes (just mandate that you gotta be in the club and not add a point cost) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted January 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 That sounds like a good idea. But I don't have time on my hands at the moment. Let's just say that high school is really, really irritating at the moment. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 We can just do a club set or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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