talgoose Posted May 27, 2020 Report Share Posted May 27, 2020 since in another forum i was told my cards would be better here i decided to move my idea for new card: basically cards that balance the actual metagame, six new pendulum monsters. @Rayfield Lumina, @Darj @Dr. Jolly Glot the III what do you thinkl of the new monster i've created?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dokutah Posted May 27, 2020 Report Share Posted May 27, 2020 kinda similar to my old archetype Al-mayan (though mine kinda extreme since its also encourage highlander building) i probably need to repost that some time later (or making new ones if it cannot be salvage by the site broken database) in general the anti-archetype effect is fine although i find it ironic that this card can also be used to support an archetype since they have effects that simply said "different names" without counting their category ( salamangreat foxy and gazelle for example is different name but same category) which is probably a good thing in a way since there not many of the current meta archetype that want pendulum in their deck due to master rule 5. so you either play pure or combining it with weaker big-monster-based archetype Mosquito is a bit dilemma imo, i know that quick effect can be annoying. but to remove it completely also cutting the back-and- forth interaction of the game Water Guardian and Labrys would be more fair if its effect also require the "different category" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lystern Posted May 27, 2020 Report Share Posted May 27, 2020 Apart from grammar, they're looking very well and on point. Here's my thoughts: ----------------------- Hoseki-No-Me: What do you mean by "category"? Is it Type, Attribute, or something else? Fushicho-No-Yohishi: Has combined effects of Scanner Golem and Chaser Labrys. Apart from "category", you should make it a Winged-Beast. Scanner Golem: Looks OK to me though, but maybe you can give him more defensive effects and stats, instead of "cannot activate trap cards". (Refer to Fushicho-No-Yohishi.) Gem of the Armored Mosquitoes: Effect is too plain compared to others. You can add a condition like you did in others. Water Guardian: 1 Summon per turn is too much. Should be "Your opponent can only Special Summon once per turn." Chaser Labrys: It should decrease ATK/DEF values of opponent's monster cuz Fushicho-No-Yohishi already has Labrys' effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dokutah Posted May 27, 2020 Report Share Posted May 27, 2020 1 hour ago, Lystern said: Hoseki-No-Me: What do you mean by "category"? Is it Type, Attribute, or something else? Category is kinda official and PSCT-legal wording we have on irl yugioh to signify name trait like archetype. first and currently only printed on Onomatopaira Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted May 27, 2020 Report Share Posted May 27, 2020 3 hours ago, Dr. Jolly Glot the III said: Category is kinda official and PSCT-legal wording we have on irl yugioh to signify name trait like archetype. first and currently only printed on Onomatopaira This is one hell of an interesting piece of info, Doc, good to know. --- I'll repeat myself and say I like your artwork style quite a bit, Talgoose, don't you dare stop making them! As for the cards in themselves, Dr. Jolly already mentioned it, but I completely agree that Water Guardian and Chaser Labrys are rather overpowered, as your opponent will be extremely hindered by a rather simple requirement on your part. Moquitoes seems a little off, so giving them a requirement, and also adjusting Guardian and Labrys should be the way to go, IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
talgoose Posted May 27, 2020 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2020 11 hours ago, Lystern said: Apart from grammar, they're looking very well and on point. Here's my thoughts: ----------------------- Hoseki-No-Me: What do you mean by "category"? Is it Type, Attribute, or something else? Fushicho-No-Yohishi: Has combined effects of Scanner Golem and Chaser Labrys. Apart from "category", you should make it a Winged-Beast. Scanner Golem: Looks OK to me though, but maybe you can give him more defensive effects and stats, instead of "cannot activate trap cards". (Refer to Fushicho-No-Yohishi.) Gem of the Armored Mosquitoes: Effect is too plain compared to others. You can add a condition like you did in others. Water Guardian: 1 Summon per turn is too much. Should be "Your opponent can only Special Summon once per turn." Chaser Labrys: It should decrease ATK/DEF values of opponent's monster cuz Fushicho-No-Yohishi already has Labrys' effect. how i should spell their effects? i ask since the english is not my native language. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lystern Posted May 28, 2020 Report Share Posted May 28, 2020 9 hours ago, talgoose said: how i should spell their effects? i ask since the english is not my native language. You can check other fan-made cards on the forum for getting ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dokutah Posted May 28, 2020 Report Share Posted May 28, 2020 10 hours ago, talgoose said: how i should spell their effects? i ask since the english is not my native language. Or if you willing to have a rather thicc in depth reading you can check this: Its a bit tedious but its worth it for your future card design Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
talgoose Posted June 5, 2020 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2020 Here is another card for my "no-archetype", this case is a field spell card, i would want your opinion about how to make it more balanced, what do you think @Zaziuma , @Lystern and @Rayfield Lumina: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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