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Well as long as they're sexy no good things .3. But am liking the idea of Masune going after Ryoko. On account of how similar they're personalities are .3. And what you said about her being the cutest female character xD

 

EDIT: Shite .3. I was ninja'd. Eh, I'll just wait for Daiki to do something before continuing with Masune and Marta.

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Alright, here's my app.

[spoiler='Lu'vah']

Name: Lu'vah, Luvahel. Introduces herself as "Lover".

Age: Undescernable. Well over 2000 yrs old. Appears to be in her mid-20's.

Gender: As a former angel, she had no gender. After her fall, she obtained the female gender.

[spoiler='Personality']

While masquerading as a succubus, Lu'vah plays an intelligent and sensual demoness. She doesn't find it at all challenging, and her physical blessings only assist in the matter. She is cunning and confident in her abilities. With this persona, she feels it is easier to find the half-lings that are good and worthy patrons of Heaven. Any she does find, she knows she'll grow an attachment, but she does not mind. She feels it is her duty to love this individuals, and her affection is feirce and unquestionable. As an angel, Lu'vah knows she is lonely, because she feels it. She's disbanded from her family for her convictions, and sometimes doubts herself, doubts that the other angels' minds can be changed. She does not lie, but with-holds the truth or bends it, stretches it to best suit her interests or needs.

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[spoiler='Weapon']

Angel's Blade: Appears to be solid chrome from blade tip to the bottom of the hilt. Standard to most of Heaven's host. The blade is triangular in shape, being four inches wide at the hilt and 18 inches in length. The hilt is decorated in floral engravings. Cuts through anything of earth and damages all demons (severety depends on the demon's rank and overall strength). Effects vary depending on the foe harmed by the blade, such as cracking of the skin, blistering, a burning sensation, etc.

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[spoiler='Ability']

Grace: The aspect of all Heaven's host that gives them their power. With it, an angel, if high enough in rank, can do almost anything. Lu'vah has lost most of her Grace due to her fall from Heaven, leaving her in a weakened state. Her Grace can be earned or found in fragments. Currently, with the amount of her Grace she's retrieved, Lu'vah has retained a few of her powers and inhuman qualities.

 

Angel's Body: As an angel, Lu'vah has several superhuman qualities, such has heightened senses of sight, smell, and hearing, incredible strength despite her small mass, and astounding speed. She also has accelerated regeneration and increased stamina. These qualities are no where near their peak due to Lu'vah's fall. Lu'vah can achieve flight while unsheathing her wings.

 

Seduction: Lu'vah can pacify other individuals, expecially humans, as if placed in a trance. It can be described as being placed under her spell, wanting nothing else but to please Lu'vah by any means. Can be initiated by looking into her eyes while she's looking into another's. Effectiveness depends on the other's will and overall strength.

 

Corporal Aura: Lu'vah can expell a white and pearlescent colored aura from her body and hands. Can be concentrated into blasts, waves, or flames. She also cloaks her blade in this aura for devastating effects, such as increasing its peircing length or sending slashes of aura into the air or ground.

 

Touch of Awestruck: Lu'vah can send a feeling, thought, sensation, or emotion into another being by being in contact with them. She can also sense these things of the individual she is touching. She can also heal and remove physical and emotional damage and trauma while touching another. Effectiveness depends on the extent of damage.

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Faction: Nuetral. Allies mostly with Doji clan.

 

[spoiler='Appearance']

Her hair is red like dying leaves during autumn. It has several layers, the longest reaching to just below her breasts, the shortest only going far enough to cover her ears. It appears choppy in the wind. Her skin is pale, yet does not appear sickly, and seemingly flawless from head to toe. Her thin oval face flows into a triangular jaw, and smoothes to a slender neck. Her shoulder and hip span is not very large, but her torso is long. Her smaller breasts (B-cup) appear perfectly placed and shaped upon her chest and stand out against her flat stomach. Her legs are formed and elegant, leading to small ankles and feet. She is 5'6". Her eyes are peircing with long beautiful lashes, with irises an unnerving light blue that seem to glow. Her lips are a delicate, light plum color.

 

Her attire includes slacks and pencil skirts (reaching above the knee in length) accompanied with pantyhoes and stiletto heels, flats, or short-heeled leather boots. Both long (always rolled up) and short sleeved blouses, worn typically with no other piece of clothing underneath and are only maintained on her person by having the three midrift buttons secured. Her wardrobe is all colors of whites, black, and reds.

 

Below her breasts, across her abdomen, is a brand, a word in Enochian that roughly means "Dominion", depicting what order of angels she belonged with (covered by the buttoned portion of her blouses). In her false form, she can allow two of her wings to appear.

 

In her true form, she has four red, auburn, and black feathered wings, extending from both sides of her spine, all between her shoulder blades. They have a span that is approximately 2.5 times her height, but are thin in width. A brilliant light radiates from behind her head, making her hair appear as fire. Her irises glow fiercly. Her neck, arms, and the lower halves of her legs are a solid black color, with her hands and feet being pure bronze. The rest of her skin that remains pale obtains a pearlescent sheer. A long and thin, red, wisp like cloth wraps around her breasts and hips and trails several feet behind her.

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[spoiler='Bio']

For all the time of her existance, Lu'vah has despised demons, and all their kind, as all angels do, but feels pity for their half-human offspring. She knows it is not their fault they exist in such a manner, and feels the utmost of sorrow for the fact that for them, entering Heaven is nothing if not impossible. Lu'vah has never agreed with this instruction. She believes every human, no matter their descent, should be granted the possibilty of Heaven's splendors

Many centuries ago, Lu'vah voiced her opinion, something that isn't looked well upon amongst Heaven's host. For all she could tell, no one agreed with her. Nothing changes in angels. They qustion nothing. For the most part, they are forever, sentinels of the Lord. Mindless, and ever loyal. Lu'vah thought it strange that God would make her doubt the ways of Heaven, but if that's what she was, then that's what He wanted. Rumors swept across the angel's ranks that Lu'vah developed her own mind and was questioning the instructions that God had left for them, so in what humans would relate to being a trial, it was decided that Lu'vah was to fall from Grace.
 While falling, her Grace was split apart, most likely as punishment for her disloyaty. Amongst the stars, she recovered a few of the fragments, but the rest lay on the face of the earth, hidden as miracles, large and small. She does not feel the need to search for them actively, as her quest is not one of strength, but of worth. Because she knew that she alone could not sway the heavenly hosts' thoughts, she's sought to find half-human demon spawn whom deserve entry beyond those golden gates.

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Yeah Jolta...might be good ^^ Hmmm...I could say Daiki was either knocked out...or hiding until deciding to fight. LOL

 

Works for me .3.

 

 

Alright, here's my app.

[spoiler='Lu'vah']

Name: Lu'vah, Luvahel. Introduces herself as "Lover".

Age: Undescernable. Well over 2000 yrs old. Appears to be in her mid-20's.

Gender: As a former angel, she had no gender. After her fall, she obtained the female gender.

[spoiler='Personality']

While masquerading as a succubus, Lu'vah plays an intelligent and sensual demoness. She doesn't find it at all challenging, and her physical blessings only assist in the matter. She is cunning and confident in her abilities. With this persona, she feels it is easier to find the half-lings that are good and worthy patrons of Heaven. Any she does find, she knows she'll grow an attachment, but she does not mind. She feels it is her duty to love this individuals, and her affection is feirce and unquestionable. As an angel, Lu'vah knows she is lonely, because she feels it. She's disbanded from her family for her convictions, and sometimes doubts herself, doubts that the other angels' minds can be changed. She does not lie, but with-holds the truth or bends it, stretches it to best suit her interests or needs.

[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Weapon']

Angel's Blade: Appears to be solid chrome from blade tip to the bottom of the hilt. Standard to most of Heaven's host. The blade is triangular in shape, being four inches wide at the hilt and 18 inches in length. The hilt is decorated in floral engravings. Cuts through anything of earth and damages all demons (severety depends on the demon's rank and overall strength). Effects vary depending on the foe harmed by the blade, such as cracking of the skin, blistering, a burning sensation, etc.

[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Ability']

Grace: The aspect of all Heaven's host that gives them their power. With it, an angel, if high enough in rank, can do almost anything. Lu'vah has lost most of her Grace due to her fall from Heaven, leaving her in a weakened state. Her Grace can be earned or found in fragments. Currently, with the amount of her Grace she's retrieved, Lu'vah has retained a few of her powers and inhuman qualities.

 

Angel's Body: As an angel, Lu'vah has several superhuman qualities, such has heightened senses of sight, smell, and hearing, incredible strength despite her small mass, and astounding speed. She also has accelerated regeneration and increased stamina. These qualities are no where near their peak due to Lu'vah's fall. Lu'vah can achieve flight while unsheathing her wings.

 

Seduction: Lu'vah can pacify other individuals, expecially humans, as if placed in a trance. It can be described as being placed under her spell, wanting nothing else but to please Lu'vah by any means. Can be initiated by looking into her eyes while she's looking into another's. Effectiveness depends on the other's will and overall strength.

 

Corporal Aura: Lu'vah can expell a white and pearlescent colored aura from her body and hands. Can be concentrated into blasts, waves, or flames. She also cloaks her blade in this aura for devastating effects, such as increasing its peircing length or sending slashes of aura into the air or ground.

 

Touch of Awestruck: Lu'vah can send a feeling, thought, sensation, or emotion into another being by being in contact with them. She can also sense these things of the individual she is touching. She can also heal and remove physical and emotional damage and trauma while touching another. Effectiveness depends on the extent of damage.

[/spoiler]

 

Faction: Nuetral. Allies mostly with Doji clan.

 

[spoiler='Appearance']

Her hair is red like dying leaves during autumn. It has several layers, the longest reaching to just below her breasts, the shortest only going far enough to cover her ears. It appears choppy in the wind. Her skin is pale, yet does not appear sickly, and seemingly flawless from head to toe. Her thin oval face flows into a triangular jaw, and smoothes to a slender neck. Her shoulder and hip span is not very large, but her torso is long. Her smaller breasts (B-cup) appear perfectly placed and shaped upon her chest and stand out against her flat stomach. Her legs are formed and elegant, leading to small ankles and feet. She is 5'6". Her eyes are peircing with long beautiful lashes, with irises an unnerving light blue that seem to glow. Her lips are a delicate, light plum color.

 

Her attire includes slacks and pencil skirts (reaching above the knee in length) accompanied with pantyhoes and stiletto heels, flats, or short-heeled leather boots. Both long (always rolled up) and short sleeved blouses, worn typically with no other piece of clothing underneath and are only maintained on her person by having the three midrift buttons secured. Her wardrobe is all colors of whites, black, and reds.

 

Below her breasts, across her abdomen, is a brand, a word in Enochian that roughly means "Dominion", depicting what order of angels she belonged with (covered by the buttoned portion of her blouses). In her false form, she can allow two of her wings to appear.

 

In her true form, she has four red, auburn, and black feathered wings, extending from both sides of her spine, all between her shoulder blades. They have a span that is approximately 2.5 times her height, but are thin in width. A brilliant light radiates from behind her head, making her hair appear as fire. Her irises glow fiercly. Her neck, arms, and the lower halves of her legs are a solid black color, with her hands and feet being pure bronze. The rest of her skin that remains pale obtains a pearlescent sheer. A long and thin, red, wisp like cloth wraps around her breasts and hips and trails several feet behind her.

[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Bio']

For all the time of her existance, Lu'vah has despised demons, and all their kind, as all angels do, but feels pity for their half-human offspring. She knows it is not their fault they exist in such a manner, and feels the utmost of sorrow for the fact that for them, entering Heaven is nothing if not impossible. Lu'vah has never agreed with this instruction. She believes every human, no matter their descent, should be granted the possibilty of Heaven's splendors

Many centuries ago, Lu'vah voiced her opinion, something that isn't looked well upon amongst Heaven's host. For all she could tell, no one agreed with her. Nothing changes in angels. They qustion nothing. For the most part, they are forever, sentinels of the Lord. Mindless, and ever loyal. Lu'vah thought it strange that God would make her doubt the ways of Heaven, but if that's what she was, then that's what He wanted. Rumors swept across the angel's ranks that Lu'vah developed her own mind and was questioning the instructions that God had left for them, so in what humans would relate to being a trial, it was decided that Lu'vah was to fall from Grace.
 While falling, her Grace was split apart, most likely as punishment for her disloyaty. Amongst the stars, she recovered a few of the fragments, but the rest lay on the face of the earth, hidden as miracles, large and small. She does not feel the need to search for them actively, as her quest is not one of strength, but of worth. Because she knew that she alone could not sway the heavenly hosts' thoughts, she's sought to find half-human demon spawn whom deserve entry beyond those golden gates.

[/spoiler]

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Accepted, so long as you keep her within the limitations specified in the PM.

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Anything that dramatically changes how the character thinks or lives. For example, Masune deciding not to be a pussy and deal with his problems rather than run and hide from them. Or in your case Ryoko letting go of her anger at demons and admitting that not all of them are evil. That's more a stage 3 decision though.

 

So in short, character development. 

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